Okay, I don't usually do this but since you commented as a guest I have no other choice than to address this in public. I would have loved to talk to you privately about this, ask for some tips etc. But well. So, this goes to the anonymous person giving me the honest critique on the last chapter. If you're seeing this, of course.

First of all, thank you for being honest and I'm sorry that the story disappointed you and didn't turn out the way you hoped for. I don't even know what you were expecting but as you might have noticed, I'm using the canon storyline as plot, so of course I can only plan so much until I know what's happening in the WWE.

And I also don't know if you've ever been repeatedly disappointed by the same person you love, but let me tell you that it's hard to forgive/forget and hard to stay away from them; so the internal battle never ends.

I'm not here to defend me or the way I write because this is my 'decent' story and I add in what I like. If Kane and the Authority are things you skip then you should stay away in the future. Because not only is Kane my favourite wrestler for various reasons, but he's also part of the canon storyline with Seth. And basically, you just told me that you skip every chapter with Seth, because he's part of the Authority too.

I admit that I still make a lot of mistakes while writing and not only because this is my first fanfic in over ten years or my first in English, but things that you hate about my style are loved by others. I can't satisfy everyone but I'm trying to improve over time.

I can't tell you why I do the dialogue thing or this and that. I just do it because that's me. I love writing a detailed description of thing a or thought b. If that annoys you, well, there's nothing I can do about that anymore. The damage is already done. I'll try to tone that down in the future.

You know, you make it sound like I either have to write my stories like this:

#1 'Dean, come with me.' 'No, I'm tired.' 'Please, I need you.' 'Okay.'
Because dialogue should speak for itself and you haven't told me how much detail is too much.

Or I'd have to do this from now on:

#2 Seth convinces a tired and bruised Dean to accompany him on a road trip.
Seriously, if I just use the summary as the actual chapter because I could have said everything in just one or two sentences, then that takes all the fun out of writing, rendering it completely useless.

You also complained that there is no character development. I'm sorry you see it that way. That's all I have to say because I don't even know how to properly respond to that, because that's an even bigger slap in the face than telling me you appreciate my efforts but skip things anyway without giving them a chance.

And just to clarify that as well: I am writing this story to deal with that current WWE storyline. For the past 10 weeks we've seen Dean acting like he did and no one said it was boring because it's repetitive and he should get over it. Honestly, I'm more than livid that you tell me this now, as you say 27 chapters in, instead of coming to me the moment all went wrong in your opinion.

So seriously, if you (any of you) have a problem with my story or the way I write, PM me, so I can properly ask for advice that might actually help me improve. Just telling me what you don't like in general doesn't help me at all. Those of you who did PM me in the past know that I'm usually a very reasonable person to talk to and that I try to heed your advices.

Thanks for listening and sorry for bothering everyone else. I just had to address this.