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agarfinkel: They will be introduced to their parents soon. The recruitable boss characters is a HELL NO!. Sorry lol. After the 3 lemons, the story will fast forward 5 years later where everyone are born. Elise and Sakura are going to switch places like Elise will stay in Hoshido while Sakura stays in Nohr.
Guest: lmao, not really interest in the language but Chinese history is what interest me. The Kuei Ryu was supposed to be a ninja clan in the beginning but got changed to the 'Principality of the Kuei Ryu'. Since Hoshido is more Japanese than Chinese(The Great Wall was the only Chinese of Hoshido). I decided to have the Kuei Ryu as more of a Chinese influenced like the Five Animal Kung Fu. Daein has little Chinese influence as they have the Chinese Ji as lances and some of their siege equipment are Chinese. The height may be b/s when talking about media stereotype. What I did was use Google Translate but having a good translator helps. Might be better if you get account and PM the translations lol. You could actually tell they are Chinese influenced since they did wear mail during the Song Dynasty(?) and the armor they were wearing was the Mountain Pattern Armor. The Golden Army may be the Kuei Ryu but they are still part of Daein since they live in the mountains that Daein controls. Yes, the Kuei Ryu was the nation I created and they are mostly Chinese with slight Japanese influence. Daein on the other hand has a lot of Roman and Chinese(Guoliang is Chinese name) influence along with little Japanese and German.
Elltiana: They knew what 's death was revealed in chapter 11 and chapter 14. Sumeragi was revealed to everyone at chapter 16. Sigh... Trying to make this chapter will be hard.
GuestWithIdeas: Whoops. I forgot about it then. Yes, it's something to do with lacking physical features such as pointed ears, brand(Black Dragon), and red eyes. His son is more like Lucina as he couldn't live a youthful life like Einion could. I swear that I did write it. Well, Corrin never doubt it, it's just he was just so enraged that he was ready to kill Scipio. I might do Azura getting know her step-siblings. Maybe some other time. Might do another story where the family comes together within 5 years.
Chapter 22: Xander/Hinoka Lemon
Castle Krakenburg
A week after the coronation of Corrin, Hinoka move to the Kingdom of Nohr to live with Xander whom she wed and loved. Their marriage was not favored by the other nobles due to Hinoka was a princess of another country that culture is not shared. The people, on the other hand, were happy about it since it was like a symbol of peace between Nohr and Hoshido. Many men of Hoshido were devastated of not only losing a princess but lost a valuable commander of the army.
Xander enters the room, seeing his newly wedded wife sitting on the bed in a dark Nohrian wedding dress that used to belong to Xander's mother. He gave her the dress, saying that his mother would have love to see her in it if she was still alive. She would have been happy to see their wedding but she's dead.
Hinoka looks at Xander as she continues to sit on the bed. Looking at him makes her heart pound louder and louder as Xander advance towards her. Hinoka is excited but somewhat scared of this.
There is a lot going on with her mind.
What happens if she couldn't satisfy her husband?
It's her first time ever in a room with another person who is a man. Her first time in this bedroom on a king sized bed with the one whom she loved.
Xander leans down, slowly moving his head to his wife's neck and plant kisses on the surface of Hinoka's skin. Hinoka let out a yelp, a surprised one that is, when she felt teeth bit down on her skin. It was not a hard or painful, it was rather gentle and playful as he hear Xander chuckle. What she feels was a new type of feeling of sensation as he is continuing to assault her neck with kisses and nips.
She moans softly as she gently wraps her arms around Xander who sneak his hands around her to untie every knot of her new wedding dress while he plants his soft kisses. Hinoka feels that Xander pulls her up from the bed. She gasps as she stands with him as her dress fell to the floor, only to show off her body. Her tone athletic body(I mean, she trains a lot.) Her breast may not be as huge as Camilla but he doesn't care about it as he moves Hinoka lying on the bed as he begins to plant kisses from her forehead, down to her cheeks and lip; going to trail kisses down resulting low moans to escape her lips.
Xander knows that he's doing something right but he fail to understand something as he tries to plant kisses down, Hinoka said, "S-stop."
Xander comply and look with confusion. He begins to think and said, "You're so beautiful?"
Hinoka blushes and giggled at Xander's compliment but it's not something she wants from Xander. What she wants is fairness as there is something he hasn't done.
Xander tries his approach but was denied right away with a sudden push.
It was somewhat in a playful manner kind of push but not a soft one. He begins to think of what he needs to do.
"Strip for me," Hinoka requested.
Xander mentally smacks himself as he has forgotten to do so.
"Please," Hinoka says in a soft tone as she discarded her last remaining clothing that covers her maidanhood. Hinoka exposes herself to him and only him. Even she has mixed feelings about now, she wants to experience it.
Xander gulp as he nodded slowly with him starting to getting rid of his clothes, starting his shirt and down his pants.
Hinoka's face turns red as she sees his... body of a god.
Six pack abs, sculpted arms, and muscular chest is what she sees before she look down to see his 6-foot long erection and tone legs. Seeing him makes her loss for words. Her chest burst as the heat of the fiery blood in her veins rush throughout the body to heat itself up. Wetness is beginning to stimulate from her vagina and building up between her legs.
Xander watches as Hinoka continues to sit up on the bed, hesitant for a bit and her cheeks burns red. Hinoka is paralyzed as she continues to stare at his manhood. Her heart is starting to pound faster and faster.
Hinoka looks back up to Xander's dark brown eyes. Those eyes mean something as she could see through the dark that he has something planned for her. It means that it's his turn to do something as she had already played with him.
"Lie down," Xander's voice was stern and determined which makes Hinoka shiver and comply without question. She quivers at what might happen as her legs buckled and took a deep breath before leaning back down slowly. Xander watches with a smirk as it seems that Hinoka surrenders herself to him, watching him.
Xander walk towards her with hungry eyes as he spotted his prey. Hinoka's cheeks burn brighter as she watches him come on the bed. Her legs close, clamping together in fear. She tries to find a way to relax but the thought of what might happen frightens her for some reason. She knows there will be pain involved in first intercourse. She is nervous, afraid, and excited. Her hands are gripping the bed sheets.
How embarrassing! A warrior submits to another without putting up a fight. She couldn't bear to witness what happens next. She twitch and yip when he feels his hands roaming around her thighs.
Hinoka felt her legs are forced to spread wide from Xander's strong arms. Hinoka felt her legs trying to clamp together again but she fought the urge to as she trusts her king to be gentle.
She blushed as she thought of what she expects to happen. She feels small fibers sweeping up to her spine up to her brain as she look to see Xander let his tongue out and extend it to her-
A surprise moan skips past through her mouth. She tries to sit up but Xander had a firm grip around her legs and it only result her to push herself against his mouth. Her back arches and moving violently as she feels it to be impossible to be still. Feeling tingle of pleasure through her body as her flesh is being traced by the hungry tongue of the king.
She was wet and Xander slides his tongue up and down her clit, making her continuously gasping, encouraging him to dig deeper into her. Her back arched harder, pushing her opening against him.
Xander was persistent and eager of the effects of her climax. When the fluids are released from her body, Xander moves his tongue over her clit and lick and sucking until she was spent, panting, and sweating.
The shift of weight is changing as she watches Xander climbing towards her. His face is covered with her cum and his knees between her legs.
"You are a mess," Xander said as Hinoka continues panting. She knows she was a mess and she watch Xander move his face towards her. They share a kiss which Hinoka felt to be different.
She feels a strange taste. It doesn't taste bad but strange to her. It was sweet and a little sour taste.
He broke the kiss and trail his kiss down to her neck and to her-
A sharp gasp evokes from her lips as his mouth covers her left breast while cupping the right with his hand, massaging it. Hinoka could feel him sucking, licking, and soft nipping while his hand massaging and squeezing his other.
She moves her hands to roam around his hair. This must what lovemaking is like as she feels her body being worship.
He switch to the other breast, giving it equal amount of attention with his inhale and exhale through her nose and Xander stop giving her B sized breast more attention and slid up. He kissed her again.
This time with his tongue entering through her mouth, moving and fighting among her tongue. Hinoka's fears have all faded away and she pulls Xander's face deeper into her, fighting him for dominance, exploring each other mouth with their tongue until she broke the kiss for air.
His tongue trailing from her cheek to her neck. Hinoka gasp as she felt something smooth and pointy(I was being ironic) lining atop her fleshy clit. She looks to see Xander is preparing seal the deal. She is ready for feel the pain but Xander has decided to tease her. Instead of
Instead of pressing it in, he course it over her even if they made contact.
Hinoka was frustrated. How can Xander just play her like this?! She wants to feel this pain and pleasure she heard about. With strength, she turn the tables and force Xander lying on the bed with her arms holding his arms down.
Xander gave her an unsure look and tries to take control but he is forced down. Hinoka says in a commanding tone, "Lie still."
"Hino-" Xander's voice was soft but was interrupted.
"How can you do this to me? After minutes of this, you would just torture me?" Hinoka knew that he just wanted her to beg for it but Hinoka is not having any of it. She's ready to give up her virginity away to him.
Her legs were over his abdominal and begin to make her way down to where his member was. Xander looks at her with fear and says, "This will hurt you. You know that, right?"
Hinoka knows and as she position herself with his member. She shivers as her muscle tensing and press herself in. As she pressed herself, she feels a sharp pain which she was expecting. The pain sear through her. She fought the urge to whimper as she refuse to stop pressing in. Her eyes shut close as she has finally got his entire shaft pushed inside her.
When she accomplish the task, she begins to breathe heavily and pull herself off.
She spotted a sad display of Xander and look at him with worry, "What's wrong?"
"It's... seeing you get hurt from this. I-" He struggle to finish his answer and Hinoka leans down and press her lips to his.
"Don't worry about me. I'm fine right now," She said that to relieve his worries. The pain is starting to cool down as she roll next to Xander.
"Tonight, I'm all yours alone," She said slowly.
Xander sees his wife laying next to him and he roll on top of her again. He feel her arms wrap around his neck with words coming out of her lips, "Love me. Hold me to your heart."
Xander look down on her and mash his lips against hers, tongue diving in again. Her arms moved around his shoulders as his hands grab her hips. In a slow and gentle movement, he trust into her.
She hissed and cling to him as it stings a bit, but a sense of pleasure is beginning to leak in with the feeling. The feeling is transmitting through her spine and to her mouth in a moan.
Her legs wrap around his waist and feel his quicken pace. Xander took the moans as if his wife is starting to become accommodated to his manhood. He feels her hands trailing to his back and held him tightly as it seems the pain has fade away, "Faster. Harder."
Hinoka begs him to thrust into her with all his might, arching her back as he put increase intensity of his effort. His lips trailing down her neck, gently nipping his teeth down.
Hinoka let out a loud cry of ecstasy as her walls inside squeeze violently around him. Xander's erection is loved and caressed by her folds. As much Xander is getting tired, he groan and kept his violent pace. Each thrust brings in a wave of pleasure in her.
"Xander!" A loud moan escapes her lips as if she is about to reach her climax. Her cry has only told Xander that she is close to cum.
"I know," Xander said as he continues to push in, feeling his shift squeezed and forcing his semen to be ready to release inside her. He gives one final push and then-
"Ahhh!" Hinoka moan was louder. This might have woke everyone in the castle or did it? His hot semen was shot directly into her womb then he drop on top of her, hovering over her, both panting to regain their stolen breaths.
"Ha! That- That was amazing," Hinoka is like a mess right now. Her hair is messy and her body is covered in sweat from both her and her husband.
"It was."
Hinoka smiles and rolls both of them over. She feels sore and tired like Xander who feels like relaxing.
"Good night," Hinoka give him a peck to the lip before she rolls off to her side and yawn.
"Night," Xander whisper in her ears and pull her closer to him. Hinoka smiles softly before they both drop into their slumber.
"A lie which will change nothing!"
Xander looks around in his dream, hearing cold words in the shadows. He wondered, 'Where am I? Where's Hinoka?'
He doesn't know what's going on as he runs through the dark shadow of his dream and heard another sentence. This time is of anger and threatening. Whose voice is that is the question.
"You fought bravely in ruined keep, to the bitter end. I trust you'll give me a challenge."
He look around the shadows and appear in the bedroom where he was at right now. What's going on? He sees everyone in the room. Corrin, Azura, Leo, Sakura, Elise, Takumi, Camilla, and Ryoma gathered around Hinoka who cries and sounds like she's dying.
Xander ran towards the bed and asks, "What's going on?"
Nobody turned or answer him.
"What's going on?"
Nothing as if nobody could hear him. He went to tap Corrin but his hand went through him. What kind of dream is this?! Why is everyone so sad? And where is his body?
"Impossible... Nothing seems to be working to save her, my sister." Ryoma kneels towards the bed and holds onto Hinoka's hand.
"If only Xander didn't go and die then this wouldn't happen," Camilla said, resulting Xander to have his eyes widened.
Xander ran through everyone and hear Hinoka's weak voice, "Xander... Please come back..."
"Hinoka, I'm here. I'm here," Xander went to grab her hand but went through. He starting to be afraid and look around to see the entire family disappears in the shadow.
"No! No!" Xander scream then turns back to see Ryoma is gone and his wife dead in their bed. He is in tears and the dream turns into mist as it is to change which took him into a dark tower. The top room and inside he sees Tiberius sitting on the throne with a large bald man with a giant mace, handing him a crown. The crown of the Nohrian King is that he was carrying.
"King Xander and Queen Hinoka are dead, my lord," the bald man spoke and that's the same man who spoke the first two sentences earlier in the dream.
Tiberius grabs the crown and crushed it with his feet. His cruelty, his malice, is what being heard in the room.
Xander awoke from a nightmare and starting to pant. It's still late at night and he looks around to see that everything is fine.
He looks at Hinoka who seems to be sleeping peacefully. He sigh in relief as he pulls her harder, tighter, and closer to him. What he couldn't take to heart is her death.
And this is how I write my lemon unlike "other" people who always goes for 'huge dick' or 'D' or 'DD' sized breast. Seriously,
Why did I say B sized is because she kept training for combat, remember? Women breast are usually filled with fat or adipose tissue. Adipose tissue doesn't get affected from exercising but the extra fat will.
