First part of the battle of Coruscant as re written by me, rate and review and be free to post reviews as much as you want
" Cluck, Jaypaw give me the key Cluck" Jaden asked angrily while Ash laughed. Since he was the battler, he didn't get a suit, and enjoyed seeing this hilarious display. Then Jaypaw saw something that had him to decide to undo the suits.
" Jaypaw, why did you; oh" Ash said as they saw a Storm Rider heartless. Taking the initiative Jaypaw leapt on top of the heartless out of its reach. Smirking he summoned his keyblade, his original and new one on his tail like a pair of horseshoes on a pole.
" Wait, Jaypaw has another one" Jaden said confused.
" Yes, we may have gotten extra weapons from Thomas for some impressive battling" Eragon noted drawing out his new Brisignr. Meanwhile Jaypaw was rotating his tail in a way that both of his keyblades struck the horns again and again. Snarling the heartless flew upside down sending Jaypaw flying down. Spinning his keyblades fiercely he slowly fell like a helicopter. It was then that a boulder struck the heartless and a pillar of earth sent Jaypaw back up. Turning he saw Toph, how did she get here.
" So, two blind people against a heartless" Jaypaw joked to her.
" Bad odds for them" she said cracking her knuckles before earth and keyblade struck the horns destroying it. Falling they were caught by a red object; Thorn with Murtagh on his back. Landing the keyblade wielders there then noticed all of their friends, Littlefoot gang, the pokemon, Thunderclan, team Avatar, Oromis, Murtagh and dragons with Arya and the Autobots.
" What, Thomas sent some messengers, and we would like to kick some droid butt" Murtagh said.
" Droids" Melody asked.
" Yes, they are attacking my home world, the star wars galaxy home to the last keyblade wielder we need, and her name is Ashoka Tano. We must prepare for invasion," Thomas said as all of the gathered heroes yelled in agreement as they went to get the armor and equipment Thomas and the wonder stepbrothers had prepared.
The Star Wars Galaxy Capital
" Fire" the clones yelled as lasers blasted the droids as lasers from them came back. The fighting force was fierce, and these clones were pinned down by droid forces and their Jedi general Obi Wan Kenobi was using his lightsabre to block lasers. Then from a white hole in the sky a group of armored cats fell from it. Yowling they charged at the droids their armor reflecting the lasers as one of the cats summoned some weird sword and cut down droids as the other cats leapt onto the droids and slashed with their claws disconnecting the droids heads. The Thunderclan cats were outfitted with special seals on their claws that allowed them to slice through metal. Destroying them all, the one with the sword turned towards them, his eyes blind.
" Lets not waste time, do you want this world to fall. Clear out these droids and find Sidious," the blind one said with his mind for all to here. The heroes had been forced to pretend they didn't know who Sidious was to prevent getting the Jedi against them.
" Okay, a talking cat this gets weirder and weirder, men follow them" Obi wan commanded.
Elsewhere
Sari was using her skates that she had with her form to skate elegantly slashing droids with her keyblade. She was too fast for the lasers and she was a little cocky. Then she crashed into a girl. Getting up she saw that this was the keyblade wielder in question; oh can she get her keyblade soon.
" Who are you?" the girl said activating a lightsabre. But then a force of droids surrounded them. Back to back they exchanged banter.
" So, think you can handle them," Sari asked.
" Sure, just so long as one more doesn't show up"
" Well, I will take care of that one" Sari teased before they leapt at the droids.
Elsewhere again
" R2, send more power to the engine, those fighters are a little too close" Anakin told his droid inside his fighter as they fought droids in the air. But then suddenly a burst of fire destroyed the three behind him. Then some giant golden lizard thing with wings and a missing limb flew past him; some old person with pointed ears and a golden sword flying past.
" Force above, he is fast" Anakin sighed as blue and red Lizards with other, younger people on the back flew by, they waving their hands jokingly. Then a laser from the ground blasted his wing of his plane as he tumbled down to the ground.
ready for battle.
