AUTHORS NOTE (Sorry that it's so long)
Sorry I didn't update for 2 days I have been really deliberating on who to pick and it took longer then expected. I wanted to make sure to evaluate every entry as much as possible. Please forgive me!
But seriously WOW! So many of you participated in the contest its overwhelming omg. I can't believe I only get to choose one of you, but I have to so I'm really sorry for those of you who tried but didn't win. A lot of you had it right and were really close but this person I've chosen just had so much detail and every answer was right; like I said a bunch of you got all the answers correct and even had a lot of information but I ultimately had to choose just one, I hope it doesn't make you guys hate me if you didn't get in. I will be doing another one of these though in the future; that is if you want me to.
I also got over 600 reviews so here's a shout-out to Divergentfab for being the 600th review, thank you so much for being a fan of my story your reviews make me so happy, I really really appreciate the love from you and everyone else. I hope you continue to enjoy my story and keep up the reviews ;) thanks again.
So the contest… Hmm… should I tell you who won or just make it a surprise?... ok I wont torture you like that :P … actually I think I will hahhaha love you all ;)
Here are the answers not detailed in any way:
1. Flock of blue birds going up her arm with be brave written (like Demi Lovatos but it doesn't say faith) it means freedom from depression and to keep in mind that she needs to be brave.
2. Car crash, best friends,
3. She threw a 50 yard touchdown pass in middle school
4. Shauna/Zeke aka the perfect couple
5. Faith :)
6. The waterfall aka their secret spot
7. Song girl and smile girl
8. Counting stars
9. Say something
10. Tori
To the person I chose; I know you wanted a different way of coming into this story but I felt this would go better with the story so I hope it's ok that It wont be exactly what you recommended.
TRIS POV
"Christina!" I yell as I slam the door shut behind me,
"In the kitchen." She responds, I make my way inside the kitchen and find her sitting on the counter eating a bowl of cereal; I grab a bowl from the cabinet and pour myself some fruity pebbles and milk to top it off, "So how was your little date with your famous boyfriend?" Christina asks with a mouth full,
I laugh at the milk that dripped on her chin when she spoke, "It wasn't a date and he's not my boyfriend." I defend then whisper, "not yet anyway." I hop on the counter next to Christina, who shrieks,
"I heard that!"
"You were meant to." I say with a slightly red face,
"Details. Now." she demands,
I put a spoon full of food in my mouth making it so I can't talk even if I wanted to, she scowls and rips the bowl from my hand moving it out of my reach, "Whaaa." I complain with puppy dog eyes still attempting to swallow my huge bite.
She shakes her head, "I said now."
I finish the food and sigh, "Fine. What do you want to know?"
"Everything." She emphasis,
I take a deep breath and open my mouth to speak but instead I hear a ring go through the house. I hear a deep sigh from Christina and laugh as I stand up and walk to the door, I open it slightly and my eyes widen,
"Hey there Bea." She says with a small smile,
"Oh my god." I pause and look her up and down, "You're…"
FOURS POV
I seem to get stuck at every red light, I guess it's just one of those days. I finally pull up to Tris' and see her talking to a girl with long wavy black hair, I make my way closer and as I suspected it's her.
"Sunny?" I ask still a little dazed that she is standing right there,
She turns and squeals, "Four" she jumps into my arms and I spin her around with a huge smile on my face,
"What are you doing here?" I ask as I set her on the ground, my grin never leaving,
"Well I came to see my old bestie what are you doing here?"
I laugh at the fact that we have the same taste in friends, "I came to talk to Tris."
I hear Tris clear her throat in the background we both look at her and she says slightly uncomfortable, "Sorry to break up the reunion but can I please hug you Sun? I freaking missed you so much!" They both spread their arms wide and cage each other in a hug sighing about how much they missed one another. When the break apart Tris turns to me, "So how do you know Sun over here?"
"Oh she's my." I start but Sunny cuts me off,
"That doesn't matter right now I want to catch up, I have so much to tell you."
Tris laughs but glances at me warily, "Yeah me too."
I almost forgot why I came here in the first place so I grab Tris' arm and say, "I need to talk to you real quick. Sunny can you just go inside for a second?"
She nods and walks into the house, Tris and I take a seat on the front steps and I take her hands in mine, "We have a little problem"
TRIS POV
I look back into her black eyes that I remember her mention came from her Moms side,
"Sunny?" I hear a male voice ask from over Suns shoulder, before I can even give her a hug she screams, "Four." And runs jumping into his arms
Well, I did not see that one coming.
He twirls her around like he does to me and then they start to talk forgetting I'm even right here.
Take a deep breath Tris you can't be jealous of your best friend, not again. Just breathe.
I make a noise with my throat so they realize that I am in fact still here, ""Sorry to break up the reunion but can I please hug you Sun? I freaking missed you so much!"
We jump into each others arms into a bone crushing hug, "I missed you too Bea! How have you been?"
Crap, she just called me Bea. Ok, its ok I mean she does have a right to call me it; she came up with the nickname.
I sigh, "I've been better. How about you?"
She laughs slightly, "Me too."
We spread apart and I look at Four in questioning hopefully not coming off as too pushy, "So how do you know Sun over here?"
"Oh she's my." Four responds but Sun takes over,
"That doesn't matter right now I want to catch up, I have so much to tell you."
Damn it, they must've dated or else she wouldn't be so passive about it.
I smile in hopes that she doesn't see the sadness I feel showing through my eyes, "Yeah me too."
Tobias takes a gentle hold of my arm and says, "I need to talk to you real quick." He glances to Sun and asks, "Sunny can you just go inside for a second?"
She nods and steps inside, we sit down and Four takes my hands in his own, "We have a little problem." He says with a sigh,
I give him a worry filled look; this has to be the fact that Sun is back; maybe he never got over her. "You don't have to tell me, I already know." I say sliding my hands from his,
"How did you find out?" he says with a sigh,
I look at the ground, "It was obvious."
"I'm sorry Tris I really tried to keep this a secret, especially for you."
"It's ok I mean who wouldn't want to be with her she's gorgeous." I point out standing up with tears threatening to spill, I turn to leave but Four takes my arm taking a stand also,
"Wait what are you talking about?" he asks as he makes me spin to look him in the eyes,
"You and Sunny obviously have a past. I can't compete." I say disappointed,
"You think?" he pauses and chuckles, "You think Sunny and I?" he full out laughs and I resist the urge to slap him in the face, he lets out a sigh and says, "That's not what I wanted to talk about and that's not even true."
I look at him confused, "So you guys never dated?"
He laughs again, "Nope."
"Then how do you know her and what did you want to talk about?" I say slightly relieved,
"Paparazzi got pictures of us today when you picked up your car."
Oh, that makes sense.
I smile and take his hand in mine, "And?"
"And you're not mad?" he asks,
"No I mean it was bound to happen I cant really control the fact that you are famous can I?"
He kisses me on the cheek, "I was so worried you would be upset about it because you wanted to start your career without using my name and status."
"Well we can't really change it now. Plus if people think that you are the only reason I would be known and not because of my music and voice then I don't want to have to deal with them anyway."
He laughs a little, "Believe me they will all realize that you deserve every ounce of fame when they hear you sing."
I give him a cheeky smile and look into his eyes, "Thanks Tobias."
"Sure thing babe."
I shake my head with a disgusted face, "Nope, don't call me babe."
"What why?" He asks with a grin,
"It's sounds so."
Tobias cuts me off, "Cliché?"
"Yeah." I reply,
"Ok how about," he puts on a thinking face while humming, "Maybe like," he continues to think this time putting his thumb and finger up to his chin deep in thought, "I got nothing." He says with a sigh,
"Let's just stick with Tris for now." I suggest,
"Fine." He says dropping his shoulders defeated,
I wrap my arms around his neck and kiss him lightly bringing a smile back to his face, the sun shines in our eyes and it reminds me that Sunny is here; I pull back and he opens his eyes to look at me, "How do you know Sunny?"
He laughs as he removes his hands from my waist to slowly move my stray hair from my face behind my ear, "She's my little sister."
Sunny Eaton is Tobias' little sister? That means Tobias is an Eaton, which means Marcus is his Father; Marcus abuses his children?
"Did Marcus ever touch Sun?" I ask just above a whisper.
Whoa guys that got Serious lol.. Anyway congratulations to the contest winner Guest Sunny! I'm so happy for you and I hope this lived up to your expectations. Let me know if you approve! Lol
It's a little short I know but a lot happened so I hope it makes up for the shortness.
Please everyone R&R and I've been really wondering why you all like this story so much? I mean I really appreciate that you do but I just wanna know why? I mean there are so many great stories out there you could be into so why mine?
Please let me know I'm really curious.
Thanks for reading,
~Faith
