this is my first fanfic and i am open to any type of critic. Please let me know what you think
-hali- Disclaimer; i wish i could say i own twilight and the characters but i am not lucky enough to be the genius that stephenie meyer is and because of that i give all credit to her...
no copy right infringement intended.
Chapter 28 – They are so close, but I'm so far away.
BPOV
My eyes fluttered open and I suppressed a groan. Instantly fingers were on my lips and I looked up at Mike.
-"Shhh." He looked around worried. "Who'd you call Bella?" His eyes were stern.
-"My friend Alice."
-"A girl! Is she coming Bella? Does she know where you are?" His questions were anxious, but not hopeful like I would of thought they would be.
-"I don't even know where I am Mike! I am so sorry Mike… I tried…" He cut me off. I was apologizing for not getting away, not getting free.
-" It's fine Bella, I should of known you'd try to escape." His words confused me greatly. Hadn't he encouraged me to escape, or had that just been my mind pushing me forward. We were back in the holding room, but now I wasn't chained up. I could hear voices far away, I guessed in the kitchen.
-"Rachel I haven't seen you in EIGHT YEARS and now you pop up with him to tell me we have a kid?" James' voice was overly emotional. My ears strained to hear more.
-"Son, I have taken care of Rachel and Jamie for many years. She came to me when she was pregnant, not wanting to bother you at school."
-"YOU KNEW ABOUT THIS AND YOU LET ME… I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU! YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO TELL ME THESE THINGS! YOU'RE MY FATHER FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!"
-"Now James, Where is Bella?" Rachel's voice was flat. Mike's hand covered my lips and his eyes filled with hate and betrayal.
-"That Rachel is the reason he started this murdering crap Bella. Was that the Rachel you spoke of in your note?" My eyes bulged and I nodded my head, struggling for air. Mike backed his hand away slowly, testing to see if I would scream.
-"You played that well, did you know James loved her, or just a lucky attempt?" So James did have a heart, He'd just lost it long ago. It was a nasty evil heart anyways. I didn't blame Rachel for leaving, though I did for many other things. A new voice reached us.
-"SHE CALLED MY SISTER JAMES! SHE TOLD US IT WAS YOU! SHE GOT LETTERS TO US! WHERE IS SHE!?!?!" The passion in his voice invaded me, my heart stammering, almost to a stop.
-"EDWA…." Mike's hand covered my mouth again. I bit into his hand and he jerked it back instinctively. He made another half attempt to stop me and a thought occurred to me. Mike was making it look like he was trying to stop me, but not very hard. I was weak and Mike knew every cut. James had to have a way of watching. James knew everything, that is why Mike had to leave the light on when James was away. It wasn't for me. Mike was trying to save us both.
-"EDWARD HELP…" The gag was shoved into my mouth and Mike's body pressed against my body. Pushing my stomach to the floor as he gripped my hands behind my back. His voice was in my ear. In an almost silent whisper, I heard his voice.
-"I can't Bella, he'd know! Hopefully that man heard you. Pray Bella, PRAY!" It was a demanding voice, one strained with need and it caused me to I sob hysterically. If Mike would let me get out of here, James couldn't do anything to anyone. Margret, Me and Mike, we'd all be safe. I heard the door in the bedroom bang open, and I thrashed more. They were just next store to us. Through that door, my love was waiting for me.
-"BELLA!? Bella I'm here. Please Bella, where are you?" I could hear the tears in his voice as I tried to free my hands. I stopped and tried to focus on dislodging the gage from my mouth.
-"She's not in here. You are looking in all the wrong places!" James' voice was taunting again. I imagined the hatred on Edward's face, too infuriated to speak.
-"I swear to you James' that if you hurt that girl, I will take Jamie and run. I know how bad you wanted her 8 years ago, how hard you tried. You wanted a child with me, so your father would have no choice but to let us marry! I'll take her from you FOREVER! Leave you with your Victoria!" I was grateful for Rachel at this moment, despite the fact I still thought her a relationship ruining tramp. She was going to save me.
-"Rachel you wouldn't do that to me… you don't honestly think she's here? That I would…"
-"I know you would!"
-"I think we should give James some time to consider this ultimatum Rachel." Aro's voice was calm but his words sent panic through my restrained body. Dod he not realize the death sentence he was so calmly laying before me? They were going to leave. I heard the footsteps fade slowly, but I couldn't believe how close they were. I struggled again, but Mike's body bind held. I fought anyway. The door slid open and I forced myself to meet the hateful icy eyes that awaited mine.
-kinda short buttt it works i think??? yea anyways you know the drill... --Hali-
