Echo of Spiraling Heart

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Chapter 28: The Brief Interlude And The Next Two Fights


"So that irreplaceable battery pack has run out." The Mizukage states, talking low about Yuga.

"What? Now you despise her?" Tsunade yells at the wicked Mizukage.

"Of course not. It was her own fault for being taken over, and now she wants to be an Uchiha's slut. Do you really think I would care about her now?" He asks her.

"Maruzo, you're a fool..." - Gaara

"NANI!!" - Mizukage

The frog monster begins to move around, and begins to look around. "We'll destroy you all! This isn't over!!"

"This annoying piece of shit is pissing me off." Reid says, stepping onto the railing. Apollo flies overtop the railing and down towards the creature.

"Hi no Ougon(Golden Fire)!" Apollo breathes fire at the frog, completely incinerating the creature. Since the demon was made of ice it was no match for the god's flames.

The ice frog though somehow survives the attack, but seems to have lost all his ice spears on top of its head and its anglers. "Damn you bitch! I'll make you my newest target!!"

Chunin guards get before the frog demon, as Kakashi and Jiraiya pull Naruto, Yuga and Sasuke from the scene. Apollo holds her right hand up, having it turn into a giant axe. Without even noticing the weight increase she leaps into the air then slams the weapon down, slicing the monster in half.

It instantly freezes up, then scatters into ice particles. Apollo lands on the ground, reverting her hand back to normal. "Yeah! Who's the chicken now!?"

"She does know that was just for fan service right?" Reid says in a low voice, sighing at her hot headedness.

'This is the power of the gods? It truly does surpass our own.' Tsunade notices, looking down at the golden chicken woman.

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(Haou: Why does Ten Commandments continue to call her a chicken? She doesn't even look like one!)

(Kenshin: Yes she does. She's Mega Ultra Chicken.)

(Haou: Yes, kowaii no niji, we get the joke. It went old in the last episode.)

-- Some Time Later, Maybe 5 Minutes

"So, what can I do for you master?" Yuga asks her master Sasuke.

"Uh..." The Uchiha has no clue what to do with her. The two of them were alone outside of the stadium while the battlefield gets cleaned up.

"You can start by proving your loyalty to him." Naruto whispers to them from a tree above.

"Naruto, shut up!" - Sasuke

A glint appears in her eyes. "That's right! I'll prove it by giving my innocence to you!"

"What!?" Sasuke pales; he doesn't want to have sex yet, especially not in some forest. He wouldn't have taken her serious though if she hadn't started sliding down her yukata.

"Now wait hold up! I'm not really into losing my virginity until I'm married." He says, trying to get her to stop. In the forest, Naruto snickers behind a tree.

Within mere seconds though the tree behind him gets frozen, and icicles begin to try and impale his scrotum. Running away and into the open, Yuga, while still holding onto Sasuke, threatens, "Get out of here, or you'll never produce an heir."

"Y-yes sir!" Naruto shouts, then runs past them. Yuga gets mad again though for the 'sir' comment. But she instantly returns to being aroused to place her hands into his clothes.

"Sasuke-sama, I want you now..." She whispers to him, but Sasuke pushes her back.

"Sorry, but let's wait until we're married." Sasuke says with a frown, then says with a smirk, "Then I'll make love to you until you-(the current dialogue has been deleted so not to offend the audience, though that wouldn't make sense because there's a citrus scene in a few seconds.)"

"Okay master..." Yuga says to him, but slides down to his pants. "But I want to at least give you something to make you want to marry me sooner."

"What?" Sasuke then feels a whole lot of pressure within his lower abdomen, as Yuga wraps her hands around his penis within his hakama. Pulling his pants down she then gets a good look at it, and licks its shaft. "Oh god, this feels good!"

"I'll make it better master." She removes the shirt part of her yukata off, letting it drag down on the side. Her breasts are now completely exposed to her master.

She soon puts Sasuke into a sexually enduced gaze when she places her boobs around his cock. While sucking on the tip she continues going up and down while bobbing her head in the same manner to make him cum faster.

"Naruto has it great!" He mutters to himself, realizing how lucky Naruto is with at least 7 women who can do this to him. His penis soon reaches the boiling point, seeing as he has no experience in holding it in. 'I'm about to cum!'

"Cum for me master." Yuga purrs, as Sasuke finally climaxes and he yells out in response to it. Cum comes flying out his dick onto her face and down her boobs. After the second eruption she places her mouth around the penis tip, allowing the rest that he would shoot out go down her throat.

After he cums for the fifth time in her mouth she swallows the massive load of cum that was in her mouth. With the cum not flowing from his penis anymore she licks up the cum all over their bodies, including on her breasts and her face.

"Did you like your present master?" She asks him, rubbing the stem part of his penis with her left thumb while gripping it lightly.

Sasuke moans in pleasure from her action. "This is a great gift; Maybe we'll have sex after the Exams, then I can show you to Hana."

"Who is she master, another one of your slaves?" Yuga asks him, still rubbing his penis then licking it.

"Ooh. Actually, she's suppose to be my fiance. As a clan member I have to marry more than one girl in order to restore the Uchiha clan after I kill my brother." He explains to her, leaving Yuga to frown.

"Oh, so I have to share your love after all." She sighs in depression, not wanting to have to give anyone else a chance to love Sasuke.

"Don't worry. I'll make sure I'll have a little extra at the end of each day for you..." He says to her, then presses his lips onto hers. It was something they should have done later, for Jiraiya was watching them from above the stadium.

"This is so hot! It'll be the toast of my newest manga!" He cheers. He really shouldn't have though, for Jiraiya was heard by Yuga and Sasuke.

The hot blue haired woman shot an icicle at him, tearing through his notebook like a gun shot. He cries in shame as he now has to redo his research.

--

"Oh Naruto-sama! Fuck me harder!!" Hinata screams, panting through screams and yelps while being bounced up and down beside a tree.

Her fiance Naruto has her left leg in his right hand lifted up so he could enter hard into her. Hinata's purple pants were dropped down along with her panties and her husband was pounding his hard cock inside of her continuously, putting great emphasis on the words harder, deeper and faster.

Anko was beside them licking onto Hinata's clit while his penis rams in and out across her tongue as well. Having an oral sex fetish Anko couldn't find anything else that could turn her on even more. 'I love having Naruto's dick touching my tongue.'

"Hinata, am I hurting you?" Naruto asks her, as he stops from pumping. Hinata has a look of pure satisfaction from the sex, but was pissed to have to stop so suddenly.

Honestly she says, "You're going rough, hard, and painful enough to be considered light rape; just the way I asked you in the beginning my dear lover."

"Oh right." And so still freaked with Hinata's masochism Naruto pounds inside of her with ferocity, leaving Hinata to moan once more and Anko to like up and down the shaft and clit as it moves.

"Fuck me harder! I'm about to cum!!" Hinata moans, lifting her other leg onto his waist and wrapping her arms around Naruto's body.

Anko fingers herself while Hinata's tongue constricts around his penis. 'This is making me so horny! As expected from Naruto-kun!'

Within seconds both Naruto and Hinata cum in/on the other, with Naruto shooting his sperm seven times now inside of Hinata and the Hyuga lubricating and soaking Naruto's penis and Anko's tongue. The snake mistress swallows the liquid and licks up whatever was left on his penis.

Hinata falls limp onto Naruto's body, as he pulls himself out of her. Naruto then takes two fingers, from his right hand of course, and widens her vagina so his cum can fall out of her. It leaks down onto Anko's face, who or course licks it up as it falls on her face. But instead of waiting for the rest she slurps it out of her vagina directly.

"Did you girls enjoy that?" The two girls nod at once, then Hinata leans herself off of him.

"Naruto, when you've become Chunin, I'll congratulate you all together with the others." Anko says seductively, licking his cheek the exact same way she did back when he was 12. Naruto shudders like back then, but this time it had a hint of lust. "Not with my pussy though. I love having oral sex with you only..."

"You sound like a whore when you say that." Bad move; Anko knees Naruto in the groan, causing him to fall to the ground in extreme pain. Hinata backs away in fear, pulling her pants up with her panties. "Sorry! Sorry! I didn't really call you one, I was just saying-"

"Naruto, I love you, but please do not call me a whore, a slut, a tramp, or anything relating to those things." Anko soon has tears in her eyes, but her tough exterior makes her wipe them away. "Please, just don't refer to me as one of them again, it hurts especially coming from you..."

Naruto looks up at her, and sighs. "Sorry. I'll never call you, compare you to, or say any set of words with your name and those words in it."

"Thank you." Anko says, then holds her hand out to him. As soon as he stands up, she kisses Naruto on the lips, as they both make out while Naruto pulls his pants up.

"Oi Naruto! Are you there?" Genma asks Naruto, looking for him. Passing through the stadium entrance Genma spots Naruto kissing Anko and Naruto.

"Whoa! Now that's some fan service!" Genma states, causing Naruto and Anko to stop kissing.

"Sorry. Is the next match ready?" Naruto asks, wiping his mouth free of Anko slobber.

"Sure, but give us more fan service will ya?" - Genma

"Nope!" - Naruto

--

Naruto, Sasuke and Yuga are now within the stands where the other finalists are. All except for Hanabi and Konohamaru are there. Yuga of course has her arms around Sasuke, pouting while staring at Naruto.

"Why is your girlfriend staring at me?" Naruto asks her while frowning.

"How close is the friendship between you and Sasuke-sama, Futa-usagi." Yuga says to him. Naruto tenses in rage upon hearing those words.

"Futa? As in futanari? Did your girlfriend just call me a fuc-"

"Calm down, Futa Usagi. It sounds allot better than calling you a baka usagi." Sasuke replies, winning against Naruto with a sit burn.

Naruto then smiles. "I dislike being called anything but a guy, especially when I'm being called a lady boy rabbit, Bonkotsu."

"DARE GA BONKOTSU, FUTA USAGI?!"

"And now we begin the next match, with Hyuga Hanabi vs. Sarutobi Konohamaru. Begin!" Genma announces, allowing the two to begin their battle.

'I don't want to fight my beloved Konoha-kun, but I want to become a Chunin just like Nee-sama. It's a good thing I prepared that letter...' Hanabi's thoughts were completely focused on making sure both Konohamaru and herself didn't have to get hurt.

'Naruto would love to see me now, a great ninja ready to become a great ninja just like Oji-chan!' Konohamaru's thoughts were innocently based on his promise to Naruto in becoming a great rival to him. He has no idea of Hanabi's attraction to him.

"Here I come!" Konohamaru yells, drawing a kunai out from his pouch. He then comes running after Hanabi, who pulls out a letter and holds it before him.

Konohamaru stops in his tracks. "What the? What's this?" The genin takes the letter and opens it, then reads it in his mind. The words listed on it made his eyes pop out in puzzlement and shock.

After they return to normal, he looks at her. "Are you serious?"

After seeing Hanabi nod, Konohamaru starts blushing now. The crowd watches in suspense, wondering what could happen next. Konohamaru and Hanabi then walk over to Genma beside Hanabi.

In plain English he says, "I quit."

The crowd, including Genma and the other Genin, fall down hard to the ground in response to his words. Tsunade, the first to rise up, shouts, "What?!"

"I would like to give this fight to Hanabi." He says to Genma, who gets back up on his feet once more.

"What did that letter say?" - Genma

"I don't think that's really important; I said I want to forfeit, so I do. Are you disrespecting the future Nanadaime Hokage?!" Konohamaru shouts back almost confidently. Naruto, Sasuke and Yuga rise back up, with the blond hair ninja smacking his forehead with his right hand.

"I think I know what it said; he whispered it to himself while reading it." Naruto says, gathering Sasuke's attention.

"What did it say?" - Sasuke

"'If you promise to give up I will rock your world for the rest of our lives.' Guess he must have thought it was a threat or something." Naruto says, to which both Yuga and Sasuke snicker at silently. 'Are all Hyuga women extremely horny?'

"Well..." Genma just shrugs. It was his choice whether or not. "Winner; Hyuga Hanabi."

The crowd didn't know whether to applaud, laugh, or boo them off the 'stage'. Tsunade was pissed by how much of a waste of time it was. Apollo was laughing and Let is groaning.

"Okay," Genma says, as Konohamaru and Hanabi leave the stage hand in hand. "And now the next two fighters will be Namikaze Naruto and...Tsukiakari Kazaana."

Said guy, a 5.6 foot guy with maroon hair and brown eyes steps forward. Jumping over the railing he lands painlessly on the ground. His brown pants, blood red haori, and black headband with the rock symbol could allow one to confirm that he's from Iwagakure.

"I won't wait any longer. Come down here boy." He says harshly to Naruto.

'He seems to hate me for some reason.' Naruto thinks while jumping down from up in the stands. Of course when he does his feet feel incredible pain from the impact. That's what happens when you jump from a high level without good shock absorbers.

'Oh good; Naruto's turn is coming up!' Apollo cheers in her mind.

'This should be good; I get to watch Kenshin's student in action.' These are Reid's thoughts, also known as Let by Apollo, Kami and Kenshin.

"Great. Now is time for Naruto to show us what his training has given him." Tsunade mutters to herself.

The other Kages watch with interest at this next fight, hoping it doesn't end as disappointingly at the last. Genma starts the match by yelling, "Begin!"

"I'll take you out fast and without haste; Doton: Doryu Shuchou no Jutsu(Earth Style: Earth Dragon Head Technique)!" Kazaana does some hand seals, then spits out a giant wad of dirt in the shape of a dragon head at Naruto.

Naruto holds his right hand towards it, releasing white electric like energy at it. But instead of destroying it, the attack is stopped in its tracks. "Good; Salvation works just fine."

"Salvation? You some sort of saint too?" Kazaana asks him. Naruto smiles while glaring at him.

Naruto then motions his hand at Kazaana, reflecting the head at him. The Iwa ninja jumps out of the way, and punches his left fist into the ground. As the Shuchou hits the walls, earth spikes shoot out from the ground at Naruto. Naruto jumps on one of the spikes to get from being punctured, and forms a sphere of energy within his right hand.

Dark energy gathers around his black claw, until it takes the form of a giant black demon fist. Naruto throws the sphere of light at Kazaana, who jumps back from the attack; bad move.

The minute he lost his chance to jump away due to being in mid air, Naruto jabs his black arm at him. It grabs onto Kazaana, getting a tight grip on him. Naruto then pounds the Iwa into the ground, three times, before making a final slam which broke the ground apart.

'This training Obasan gave me really did the trick. This hand really does bring destruction.' Naruto cheers within his mind, as his left hand reverts to normal.

There was great silence in the crowd, with most everyone shocked by the 'demon child's' power. Of course they would give him a chance before they would run out screaming since he took care of the frog monster.

Let for one smirks. "That was cool. It's something Kenshin would do."

"Honki!? Kenshin's that cool!?" Apollo asks Let, with stars in her eyes.

Let sweat drops at this action, even mentioning, "There are stars in your eyes..."

The Iwa ninja's body begins to move about, until it turns into mud. Naruto gets puzzled by this clever trick, wondering when did he pull it off.

"Take this, Namikaze!!" Kazaana yells from behind, part of his body fused with the earth. He pounds Naruto's face once, sending him flying into the wall.

Outside of the village, giant snakes begin to slither towards the village, accompanied by high level ninjas from Oto and Iwa. What this could mean leads to one true fact; the author must be redoing the same plot twist in the middle of the canon.


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