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Please do NOT start reading here. This Chapter contains some very strong and important information regarding the story and
its progression, continuing to read this installment without having read the chapters before this will give you a
painfully large spoiler. Although, said spoiler shall only affect you if you decide to read the rest of this story because you like it. Regardless, I
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Author's Note:
Today, I have a very special message to give out. You ready for it? Are you sure? Aaaabsolutely sure!? W'okey, here's goes nothing:
Happy Birthday Ashe! ^_^
Although it's a tad late, I hope you had a great day and wish you all the best! I really can't give much, but I hope this and my
never-ending support will suffice! ^_^ To celebrate, take a bite outta the computerized text below. but be careful to chew, those italics can really
get stuck in your throat... XD
Reminder:
Corpus' normal thoughts are in normal text. They don't affect anyone or anything in the story, it's simply a narrative.
His inner thoughts are written in Italics. These are addressed to himself and will affect and influence himself and others in the story.
His sub-conscious thoughts are written in (Bracketed italics). These are similar to his inner thoughts but not entirely the same. They are his sub-conscious mind making remarks about his actions and thoughts. Sorta like a character that lives in his head.
Enjoy!
I'm stood here, staring at him. The pony who's been labelled as a murderer. Next to him shrouded in his red aura is a piece of paper with a pen at the ready. And above him, a jet-black Pegasus with a bucking ugly face.
There's no doubt about it, he's the murderer. His weapon? That scrap of a notebook floating at his side.
The anger dwelling inside of me is rising to new heights, exceeding what I would assume to be its boundaries. Why...?
Because he planned on killing two of my friends. As soon as he knows someone's name and face, he can kill them whenever he wants and however he wants. Thus is the power of the Death Note. I think my stunt with the window halted Applejack from giving her name. And guessing from his language, he hadn't just asked Big Mac for his.
I pay attention to the pain writhing around in my injured wrist,
Although that cost me any immediate physical action, I should have ensured my friends' survival by his hand.
As we prolonged intense eye contact, his smile only seemed to slightly alter, and his eyes seemed to grow a little more gentle. Only to become as sharp as razors the next instance, broadly displaying the true evil in his heart. No doubt my own eyes were like that once; fueled by the thought of killing nonchalantly, 'exterminating' the 'pests' that ran across our planet. It makes me sick.
(As you can see, the situation seems pretty bad. And it seems AJ has a few questions for you.)
Taking notice of what Ly had said, I began to feel AJ's hoof on my shoulder as she lightly tried to grasp my attention, a mixture of a peeved and a relieved expression dawning on her face.
I don't care. I can answer those later. But him... I need to deal with first.
Tracing my eyes back to the Unicorn, he finally opened his mouth. A warm, almost egotistical tone escaping from within.
"Good. I see you understand where you and I stand here. So I'll make it brief," His grin grew more sinister, and his eyes hardened into a thick scarlet hue, "Hand over the Death Note, and your name. If you do not, then I'll kill off your friends one-by-one."
! Wh- what!? Damnit! Don't tell me...
My challenged faltered for a moment, fear striking across my face at his words.
Did he get AJ's name before I came down!? No... that's not possible. I jumped as soon as he asked, she had no time to reply!
Recovering myself, I fix the crack in my stare and strengthen my resolve.
Which means-!
"I'll repeat myself once more," His face turned from being dastardly and coy, to corrupt and nearing pissed off, "Give me my Death Note, or your friends will die."
Heh, no chance, idiot.
(Wait Corpus! Don'-!)
"I know you're bluffing." His eyelids flickered by a couple of millimeters, I caught him off guard with that comment, no matter how much he tries to hide it. "I broke through that window and grabbed everyone's attention a second after you asked your question, so the mare next to me didn't have time to answer."
"..." The Unicorn stared me down, soon surrendering the contact and giving a smile as he closed his eyes. "Okay, I guess you win... Oh, better not forget," He applied the pen's tip to the paper, piquing my curiosity, "Next week... meet Big Macin-"
Shit! He isn't bluffing!
"Stop!" I hold my hoof out, a desperate plea flying from me to him. But with that sudden deterioration of my mental defenses, I lost the complete focus I had fixated on him, allowing all of the visible and audible distractions around me to get into my head.
"Would somepony please tell me what tha hay's goin' on!?"
In my distracted state, I involuntarily look to my side to see a rather pissed off Applejack shooting glares at me and the murderer in front of us.
"You!" She aims her hoof at the unicorn, directing her hardly subtle anger toward him. "What's yer real name? What're ya'll doin' on mah farm?"
"I don't see any reason to answer your questions. You're simply a bargaining chip to me, nothing else."
As shock flashed over her face, AJ retreated her head and posed an even angrier voice. "Wha- A bargainin' ch-!?"
"The Death Note, now." He brought me back into his vision as he expelled Applejack from further conversation.
"Don' you-!"
"Ap-!" Hearing me begin to speak her name, Applejack turned to me, still looking annoyed.
Crap, can't say her name!
"A-AJ. Don't pursue this further. This is between me and him, I don't want you getting mixed up in this."
A brief aura of understanding flowed from her, only to be immediately covered by an objection. "But Ah-"
"What in Equestria is going on he- Corpus!? You shouldn't be up!" I turn my head, seeing Dr. Nusbaum approaching me, completely astounded. "Your horn's back! F-furthermore, you shouldn't be out of bed!" He turned his attention to the mare next to me. "Apple-"
"FAAAAAHCHYO!"
Jeez, that was too close...
Startled, both Nusbaum and Applejack turn to look at me.
"Corpus, what are you-"
I aimed a hoof at him. "Don't say anyone's name!"
"Wha-"
"Just, trust me. Saying anyone's name won't end well!"
"What's goin' on out here!? Who's smashing glass!?"
Oh no...
Following the voice, an elderly, green pony walked out of the house's rear entrance, Applebloom accompanying her.
"Applej-"
"FAAAAAHCHYO!"
Saying that is pissing me off.
"What're ya-"
"No-one speak! All of you just stand there and be quiet! No saying names, no asking questions, okay!? I'll tell you all what's happening later, just don't make any noises... okay...?"
Silenced by my unexpected retort, the ponies surrounding me simply gave a nod and kept their mouths shut.
The Unicorn exhumed a fairly loud breath, his eyes narrowing. "You're beginning to push your luck. You have ten seconds to hand over the Death Note, else your friend dies. Ten."
My left leg started to quiver, uncertainty and fear nestling in.
"Nine."
My throat started to dry itself out, stress adding on to the already existent mental ailments.
Shit, what do I do!? I don't have it! Do I tell him?
"Eight. Seven."
Crap! How'll he react!? I don't know!
"Six. Fi-"
"I... don't have it with me." A mucous-y lump of fear began to churn in my chest, and I could feel my heart pounding away with greater force than necessary.
He paused, looking at me un-amused. "Are you telling me you broke our agreement...?"
Wait, what?
"What agreement?" Though I returned some fervor to my voice, I'm still too afraid to move from this place. I don't know what he'll do if he thinks I'm trying to aggravate him...
(Listen, I'm going to need you to do exactly as I say for the next few minutes. I'll explain everything as we go along, so I promise you won't be in the dark by the end of it.)
W-where did that come from?
"..." The pony's peeved glare evolved into a conniving grin, as if he had thought of a fun procedure to engage in. "Alright, I can wait a bit. After all, it's not my friend that's dying." The pen landed upon the paper and began scribbling away.
(Quick! Tell him you have it!)
Following Ly's instruction, I immediately lied. "W-Wait! I do have it! Just stop writing!"
(Now open up your left wing.)
What Ly's asking me to do isn't making any sense, this won't help at all! Regardless, I unfurled my wing and... the... Death Note fell out!?
"Hm. Now stand still while I collect it. Any movement, and I'll finish what I started." Finishing his sentence, both his horn and the Death Note shone with the same red glow, the Note making its way to his face immediately afterward.
(Phew, that was close...)
What was close!? How did the Death Note get under my wing!? I thought I left it at Fluttershy's place!
Opening the Note to its first few pages, the pony started reading through it whilst making sure he was aware of any movements I made.
(You did. I left last night and retrieved it from her place while you slept. I don't know how or why, but I can manifest myself into a physical form and leave your body... at the cost of your horn.)
My hor-!
Stricken with worry, I rushed my hooves to my fore-head and searched around for my horn, finding it as soon as my hoof came close to my head.
(It returned as soon as I re-united with you, so I assume that it'll still work.)
W-why're you just telling me this!? This could push the hold he has over me even further!
The Unicorn closed the Note and looked back to me... smiling.
(...He has no hold over you.)
"You know, you're dumber than I thought you were." He moved the Death Note to his side and re-opened it, the pen gliding straight to its surface. "You're going to give me the name of everyone here, including yourself. Failure to do so shall result in Big Macintosh here dying."
"Wha-"
As I was about to speak, everyone around me burst into a huge uproar at the pony's threat, throwing out the first few syllables of what they had to say before I turned around.
"Shut up! All of you!" At my sharp order, all noise produced by them shrank into nothingness. Leaving just their blank faces to look taken by me. "I need to think, and your noise isn't helping!"
Feeling frustration leaving me through words, I turn my head back to the Death Note user in front of me.
Crap, this isn't good... If I refuse to tell him, then Big Mac'll die. But if I tell him everyone else's names, then he may end up killing us all! Argh!
An evilly arrogant smile bent the pony's lips, his scarlet eyes falling upon me almost pitifully. "I'll give you one minute to make up your mind. But as soon as that minute's up, you're getting no more chances. Your friend will die."
Feeling trapped like a rat, I recall back what Ly had said earlier. Using that one lead as a final lifeline to grab onto.
...You said he had no hold over me. What did you mean exactly?
(I meant what I said, you're the one in charge here. He's cornered, and is holding on desperately to the one thing that gives him any chance to escape from this. There's almost no way you can lose.)
How!? He's holding everyone here hostage! How the hell can I beat him when I've got no power!?
(HE has no power. Listen, what's the situation?)
He's holding everyone hostage! He knows Big Mac's name and possesses the Death Note! There's no way to beat him here!
(You've just given yourself the answer.)
Wha-
(The only hostage he has is Big Mac. Everyone else will be completely unaffected by the Death Note. This guy's no idiot, so he knows this as well.)
Even so, he'll kill Big Mac if I don't give him everyone else's names!
(Yeah, he probably will. But only as a bluff.)
A-...a bluff? the hell kinda bluff is that!?
(A bluff used in a conflict over a Death God's notebook.)
I'm not sure how much time has gone by, but I should really wrap this up quickly. If I don't give him answers, then-...
(What will he do after killing Big Mac? What can he do?)
He'll... he'll...
Ly's right... there's nothing he can do...
(Big Mac's death will be the equivalent to a cat puffing up its fur to look bigger. He'll be demonstrating his power and will to kill you all without hesitation, but only to throw your mind into disarray. This type of tactic is only used by those whom prefer to play with their prey, or those who have only deceit and bluffs to survive on. Fortunately, I can tell you that the former has a zero percent chance of existing.)
So... he's trying to distract me from the position he's in...?
(Exactly so, yes. But I wouldn't challenge him, otherwise he'll still kill Big Mac. So instead, I propose that we take a different approach...)
Ly spoke softly yet profoundly, giving details of a plan he had, just this moment, thought up. It's... amazing... It's almost flawless, despite being made in such a small window of time. Is he really my sub-conscious...?
(We only have one chance with this, and only a second to react with every action. So if we don't get this right, our victory will come with the loss of Big Mac. Are you ready?)
More so than I thought I'd be.
(Good, then-)
"Your minute's up, have you decided?"
(Let's go...)
"Yeah, I have..." I take a bold step toward him, giving him a glare as hard as my new-found resolve. "I'm not giving you anyone's names."
A smile befell the pony's face, something that shouldn't exist when one's about to kill another. "Oh? Then maybe Big Macintosh can tell me? After all, that's what I've written for him to do before he dies." With a final shimmer of those ruby beasts, the pen scratched the God-forsaken parchment's surface.
(Now!)
My eyes flashed with intense focus, a strong orange aura engulfing my horn and the magic surrounding the Death Note.
Once my aura had enshrouded the Note's surface, the Unicorn's pen slipped up and off the parchment. The transparent sunset-glow preventing any contact between the two.
"Tch! Don't try it!" Fully aware of my intentions, the pony intensified the power in his own magic, enlarging it by several times its previous size and, as expected, dissipating my own magic surrounding it.
But, a flash of an identical colour illuminated the area in front of the murderer, a confused Big Macintosh appearing in front of him.
"Big Mac! Buck him, now!"
Hearing me shout out from behind him, Big Mac turned his head and readily understood, briskly turning his body and priming a strike. In response to the sudden shift in action, the murderer tried to back away from the large farm-pony. But only to still lie in the wake of the twin red columns that struck into his chest, sending him flying a couple of meters where his momentum was only halted by a single tree that his back collided with.
Softly returning his hooves to the dirt beneath him, Big Mac kept a watchful eye on the stationary Unicorn.
"Thanks Big Mac, I'll handle it from here." I walked past him, offering an appreciative nod as I glanced back.
"Eeyup." Though I suspect that there's still a lot of anger whirring through him, he still seems to give the near stoic replies as always.
With his final remark, I coat the Work horse in my aura before sending him to the others, inside of the barn. I had sent them all there once the murderer was distracted with Big Mac's sudden appearance, as to keep them from any potential harm in case Big Mac hadn't reacted in time.
(Now to just take his Death Note. After that, we call the authorities and have him arrested.)
I approached the bloody and unconscious pony, grabbing the Death Note with my magic.
(I'm afraid this is check-mate, Li-!)
Without either me or Ly expecting it, a light brown hoof shot onto my chest. Although it caused no harm, it made me instinctively jump back from my standing point.
"Not... yet...!"
Breathing heavily, the pony stood back onto all of his legs. All the while, I felt powerless to move. He had blood running from his head and mouth, both caused by the impact of both the buck and his collision with the tree, and a mark on the breast of his jacket showing from the buck as well. How the hell is he conscious after a hit like that!?
"I won't lose!" With a trickle of liquid as crimson as his eyes dripping down his face, the pony grasps the pen with his aura and writes in the Note once again.
"Shit!" I rush towards him. My magic will be useless is he's using his, so getting there physically is my only option. After a travel time of just a mere two seconds, I thrust my horn into one of his shoulders and knock him onto his back, allowing him room as he clings to the hole in pain. I take the Note for myself, glancing at the recent writing inside of it... words failing to describe how I was feeling at that point in time. "...No... it... can't be..."
Big Macintosh will shout out the names of everyone on the farm.
He finished it... he must've written the latter part earlier, filling in the name just now...
A slug to my chest smashes me out of my trance, knocking the Death Note loose from my grip all the while. I look forward, seeing that murderer holding the Death Note with a great anger stirring in his eyes. It felt like something inside of me snapped, a repressed limit holding me back from killing him. It snapped. Broke. Indescribable fury seeped into my mind as I gritted my teeth. This monster had just killed my friend. I want to kill him. I want him dead.
I want to rip out his throat. I want to murder him!
I lunge at him, the full intent to kill surfacing from its depths within me.
(C-calm down! you'll only just-!)
I stopped in my tracks, much like Ly did with his speaking. The pony was stood there, a level of fear transcending anything I've ever seen before painted across his face. His chest was rising and falling slowly, each individual breath could be heard pathetically crawling out of his mouth. There's a claw around his neck. A pitch black claw, linked to an arm stemming from the black Pegasus behind him.
"Since I don't have my Death Note on me, I guess I'll just have to resort to a more physical method."
The pony turned his head slowly, looking Ryuk fearfully in the eye. "Wha..."
"I already told you, didn't I? I said that I would be the one to kill you in the end. This is where your life ends. If I don't kill you, then this pony here will."
Un...believable... That's what this is... A scary presence seeping out of the God of Death threatening to kill the murderer where he stands... and, isn't that what he said to me not long after we met? That he'd kill me himself in the end...?
"I...I'm supposed to... die here...?" His eyes had reverted back from red to brown, quivering as he did at this circumstance before him.
"Yes. It was fun, Light Yagami."
Ba-bump...
Light... Yagami...?
Ba-bump...
That's... that's my name...
Ba-bump... Ba-bump...
I remember now, my name and everyone else's!
Ba-bump... Ba-bump... Ba-bump...
My name, the Death Note, Kira, L, Near, Everything! I remember it!
Ba-bump Ba-bump Ba-bump Ba-bump
Why did Ryuk call him Light? I'm Light! I'm-!
"Give me the eyes!"
My thought process is shattered by 'Light's' voice. I return attention to him to see him with the claw almost squeezing his throat.
"If I'm to die here, then I'm taking him with me!" His red eyes, yet again, shift to me, wishing me death.
Silenced, Ryuk just stares at 'Light' for a few moments longer, an awfully deranged laugh erupting from him as he loosened his grip on the pony.
"So you're turning in your last remaining seconds for the eyes of a Death God? That's brilliant! You humans' sense of revenge is... interesting!" His smile grew into a strange aberration, razor-sharp teeth coming to a bearing. "All right then! I bestow upon you the eyes of a Death God, use them as you please."
Ryuk's eyes lit up a menacing crimson, an awful gift of power taking place.
08:14 P.M. Celestia's Castle, 3rd Floor, Balcony...
The dark Princess' eyes shot wide open, a shock running through her body and through those of the other ponies present.
"P-Princess, was that-?"
"Yes, it was." Her eyelids lowered to her pupils, an expression suited for seriousness crafted onto her sharp face. "Thritcher, send for Shining Armour, my sister and her Guard! Tell them to head to Ponyville! The disturbance there is undoubtedly not from our world!"
"A-a-at once, your Majesty!" Now under his first fatal mission, the guard quickly turned and left the balcony's surface, rushing to the Royal Bedrooms to awaken the sleeping team.
We have to hurry, we don't know what'll happen if anypony else makes contact with that human first. I wouldn't even like to-!
A second shock ran through her body, startling her to no ends.
"A... a second human?" She turned to her remaining Guard, Twilight and Cadence, aiming a hoof at them with the utmost urgency. "You six, head onto Sweet Apple Acres immediately! A second human is there, a similar disturbance has rung out from there!"
"But Princess, what about the spell?" Twilight took a couple of steps forward, raising her concern for her superior's well-being.
"Nevermind me, we must find that human before anypony else, otherwise the worst may happen..."
"I... I understand..." Burying her worry for the Princess behind his current objective, she walks past her and calls up the guard. "Come on, we've got to hurry and get to Sweet Apple Acres!"
Followed by a weak rally, the five Unicorns and single Alicorn swiftly depart from the balcony, leaving Luna to stand there on her own.
...Two humans appeared in such a short space of time? I don't like the odds of that happening...
Staring off into the hallway a moment longer, she shakes her head and turns around.
"I should wait here and keep a watch out for my subjects, I can't do nothing in this situation."
As she stared off into the sun, another, but much stronger, shock raves through her, making her entire being quiver.
"Wh-what!? A third human!? What's happening!?" She turns about and looks within her immediate vicinity, seeing no other ponies to send out after the new energy abnormality. "...I'll have to go to this one myself, there's no-one else I can call upon. But," She glances nervously at the sun, "No-one can watch over the spell whilst I'm gone, what should I do?"
"Go to Sweet Apple Acres with Twilight and Cadence, I'll watch over the spell for a few minutes."
Hearing that warm, comforting tone, Luna turns about to become greeted by her sister.
"Big sister! But, what'll we do about the third human?"
"I'll attend to that one personally, you go ahead and catch up with your group. I've been resting the past few hours, so I'll be able to hold this on my own longer than you can."
"O-okay, I guess I'll head off now then."
Presenting her younger sister with a nod, Celestia maintains a warm smile. Responded to said nod, Luna races off the balcony to cover ground between her and her group.
Seeing the younger Princess leave, Celestia turns to face the bright morning sun, allowing it to assist her face in radiating natural beauty.
"Three humans appearing one after the other? I think I may take a liking to the upcoming chain of events..." On her pure face, a seductively sly smile arises.
08:14 P.M. S.A.A, Western Field...
'Light's' eyes took on the same dastardly glow that Ryuk's had, his stare coming onto me. Suddenly, a maniacal laugh exploded from within him, the picture of insanity drawn on his face.
"Yes, I can see it! Your true name! You're not Corpus, you're someone else!" Two lumps appeared under his clothing, two light brown wings bursting forth the next instance.
Wha- What!? He's like that too!?
(I guess... all humans are like that?)
Grabbing the Note back, he re-applies the pen to it. "Prepare to die, scum!"
The pen etched its existence into the Notebook with an uncanny fervor. For most, this would be exceptionally scary. But,
"I'm afraid I won't die. Death Note users can't be killed by the Death Note if it's being used by another human. Only Gods of Death that have come to the human world without the intention of killing that person can kill them with a Death Note."
"Well that'll work just fine, because you've never used a Death Note!"
I furrowed my brow, feeling almost disappointed with him. "I have used the Death Note. Every name in there-"
(Was written by him.)
...What do you mean?
(He's the only person who's ever written in that Death Note. You've never killed a person with it.)
Wait, then he can-!
"See ya, 'Corpus'." He laid his pen to rest, a satisfied look dawning on his face. The look of a man whom had accomplished his final wish before death.
But the same can't be said for me. I froze up, a pain brewing inside my chest. As time went by, it only grew fiercer and began to rip through my heart. Just about 40 seconds had passed, and it hurt... a lot...
... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
Over a minute... that's how much time has passed... and I'm still alive? Maybe he set the time for another day? Another hour?
"Wha-what...? How're you still alive!? The Death Note's never failed to work on anyone before!" I look up to my damnator, observing him more pissed off than ever "Why aren't you dead!?"
(Corpus, repeat everything I say aloud.)
H-huh?
What's going on? I'm confused...
(You didn't imagine my face as you wrote my name in the Note.)
"...You didn't imagine my face as you wrote in the Note."
"...What...?" He gritted his teeth, an unbearable anger arising inside of him. "I did imagine your face! How the hell couldn't I if you're right there!?"
(This isn't my real face. I'm a human, therefore the face needed to kill me would be a human one, not a pony one.)
"This isn't my real face. I'm a human, therefore the face needed to kill me would be a human one, not a pony one."
"The hell kinda crap are you spewing!? Just, die!" Infuriated and humiliated, Light threw the pen back onto the paper and started writing my name again, and again.
I'm not gonna lie, I was crapping myself all the while. I thought he was really going to kill me with one of those, but 40 seconds passed and I was still standing, so it's safe to say that Ly was right.
"Why...? Why won't you die...!?" He threw himself onto the floor, thumping his hoof against it as the Note and pen fell from him.
Meanwhile, the black Pegasus wheezed out a series of laughs, his face somehow not changing.
"The hell are you laughing at Ryuk...? You lost this too! You can't return to the Shinigami Realm!"
The Death God continued to laugh, "He got ya. He had this entire thing planned out from the beginning. He trapped you and left you with nowhere to hide. I had fun watching you fall, but that's not why I'm laughing. I'm laughing, because your natural lifespan had increased."
Both I and Light looked to him in surprise,
Wait, doesn't the Eye Deal half your life? How did his increase!?
"I'm guessing that it's because Smarty over here didn't kill you because you made the deal. Lucky you."
"...Wait, how much did it increase by...?"
"Eh, a couple thousand years. But that's only half of what it would be without the eyes. Although, I suppose you'd be dead without them." He released yet another horrid laugh.
"...Then I guess I'll... give up."
I return my vision to Light, seeing him laying on the floor still looking at Ryuk.
"I'm not going to win here, so I may as well quit. But don't get me wrong," He turned his head to me, those piercing blood-like irises staring into me, "I have over a thousand years to see you perish, and I shall be the one to bring it about."
"Over there! I see somepony!" Unfamiliar voices called from among the trees, gradually getting closer.
"I will kill you, and I will return to Earth. I shall become a God, and bring justice upon you."
"Wait, that's him! He's the murderer! Catch him!" Out of seemingly nowhere, an evil looking Unicorn launched out from within the trees and pinned Light down, followed by two others whom lifted Light up with their magic, keeping him locked in a cage of un-breaking will.
"I will judge you, Jake."
Jake...? Is that my name?
(Could be, but then again, we thought Ly, or rather, 'Light' was your name. We'll stick to any alias you want until we find it.)
Y-yeah... I suppose you're right...
But still, if the Death God eyes say my name's 'Jake', then it must be so. But why aren't I remembering anything? Why aren't any memories surfacing...?
With his final farewell, the Unicorns dragged him out of sight.
We took one casualty, but that battle's finally over.
Well, for now, at least...
Okey dokey, first things first: The next two or so chapters will answer most, if not all, questions that you got from this chapter. I purposely left
it 'incomplete' as to not ruin the flow by continuously switching viewpoints and time slots within mere lines of each other.
And I think you'll like your answers :3
Anyway, review on the good, the bad, and the myeh!
Until next time,
Bye bi!
