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Rated M for language and sex.
The OC -John Black- Belongs to Ghost 1998
guest 2-A bit extreme in Lightning spanking Rayne's rear for lying to him and loosing the race on purpose but not too excessive and its enough to make seriousness sink in after playing stupid.-Not really too extreme, my father would do the same thing when I did something really, really stupid and I was a teenager at that time.
Entertaining at the end of the chapter too where Lightning and Sally had another night in bed together.-I thought that you guys would like it.
Its clear that Storm only wants Rayne for sex as he is going round getting off with other girls behind her back and constantly lying to her. -Rayne is too naive and inexperienced to notice his treatment of her. But don't worry, Storm get what coming to him.
The last time I wound up suffering a hangover was one of the worst times of my life. I could barely keep my eyes open and I had my arm round my sisters shoulder considering I couldn't keep my balance with the alcohol upsetting my system.-That's pretty much what mine was like. When I woke up the next morning, I thought my head was going to explode. But when Lightning explains to Sally that drinking as much water before going to bed(in distractions) helps with not having a hangover. - It really does work, well at least for me it works.
Tiny-Finally we got some loving fropm Lightning and Sally! that's what we were asking, thanks so much! I'm glad you take care of what you readers want and don't offend yourself if there are some critics, you know, we all can be rude but always it's the writer who desides what wants to write, so you don't have to take our critics seriously ;)-Nope, some days I don't take myself seriously.
Well I said that about Rayne and Storm just to give an example hahaha I didn't mean it to give any spoiler there. XDGreat that I give you some ideas, I'm glad to help you ;) and keep going as always your job is pretty well done. You surprised me once again because I've never thought you would update today so thanks for this "extra long chapter" ;)-You guys are getting another chapters this week, because I have a cold and don't have any energy to do anything other than sit at the computer and write. Yesterday I didn't even feel like doing that. I just laid in bed and had my own personal "Dragon Riders Of Berk" marathon. I think I watched all of season two and part of season one.
HMG-Yay! the wait is over, I loved every part of this chapter since the fight between Rayne and her father, it was time to Lightning to put some order in her and we had a L&S moment at last, you make me so happy. LOL this is when it cames the idea of Lightning angry and Sally tries to "distract him" and relax, am I right?-Yes, you have that right. But when you read the following chapter, Sally's plan didn't work.
Wow, racecars must be sexually driven ;) I mean, they are surounded by hot female cars from their sponsors like the Dinoco girls and their own fans.- Yep, even in real life when you watch a the awards ceremony at the end of the race, there are always hot, scantly dressed women hanging off them. As a female, I find that disgusting.
You done the hot scene very well without our help, as you said you are having your mind out of ideas for scenes like this so I thought you'd want some help but I realize that you don't need them, you done it perfectly by yourself ;)-If you guys have any ideas I would love to hear them. I know it's my story, but you guys think of things that I don't and that makes the story that much better.
Ghost 1998-Damn-Thank you, I'll take that as a complement. Oh by the way, check your inbox, I left something there for you.
Chapter 29.- Reactions -
Sunday afternoon: Lightning was so upset with Rayne that he could not keep his mind on his own race. Every lap Lightning seemed to struggle to keep up with the race leaders. His extremely sore axle did not help either. Every a couple of laps, his vision seemed to blur from the pain. Doc tried to convince Lightning to withdraw from the race, but he refused. Sapphire won the race with Chick coming in a close second, and Lightning finishing a distant third. "I'm so sorry Doc." Lightning said coming up to him after the race. "I…I…was awake most of the night worrying about Rayne." "I understand Kid, you just didn't have it today" Doc said. "We'll get'em next week. I want you to sit on some ice before we load up and head to the next track." "Where's Rayne?" Lightning asked, "I haven't seen her since breakfast this morning." "I saw her running around with Chanti." Doc said "But that was before the race. Don't worry she knows better than to leave the stadium with out permission." A few hours later Rayne returned to the trailers and they headed to supper together. Lightning and Rayne did not say a word to each other. Late Sunday night: Sally, Sophia, and John said their goodbyes and headed to the airport so Lucy could fly them home. Mack and Abby hit the road for the next track.
Rayne's reaction to her father's punishment quickly turned from tears to rage. In fact, Rayne seemed so angry with her father, and vice versa, the two cars hardly spoke to one another at all over the next two weeks. "Ouch!" Lightning cried "What did you do now, Rookie?" Doc asked, looking around the corner of his own trailer. "Nothing" Lightning mumbled, stopping for a moment to let the searing pain in his axle die down. He turned his wheels a little too sharply, resulting in the harsh pain radiating from his undercarriage. From ten meters away, Rayne had glanced up at her father's outburst, but looked away she learned it was just his axle acting up again. After the pain had subsided some, Lightning returned to his task of unloading his trailer. He avoided looking to where his daughter was reading in a ray of sunlight. His feelings of resentment towards her dating Storm or what the media was calling "Rayne-Storm" (Lightning was repulsed), were still strong, but he missed his daughters company. Lightning was even starting to miss hearing Rayne's funny little quirks, such as her slightly inflated ego. Eventually, Lightning's self-control failed him, and he looked to where Rayne was sitting. Lightning could tell whatever Rayne was reading interested her. She seemed to absorb every word as her lips silently read the text. A moment later, Storm rolled over to where Rayne was reading. Rayne smiled and kissed Storm, her blue eyes wandering over to where Lightning was. He looked away quickly and cautiously turned around to see Doc watching him. "You miss her." "Yeah, I do" Lightning said, a melancholy expression darkening his face. "A lot" "Then apologize to her," Doc suggested. "It's a two-way street, Doc," Lightning sighed. "It's not as simple as it sounds." "I know" Doc said. "I think she misses you too though." "Maybe so," Lightning said, once again returning to unpack the trailer. Lightning unloaded the remainder of his belongings from the trailer and set up camp for the next week. He situated himself on top of his icepack and decided to take a nap. The sunrays hit Lightning and warmed him comfortably. Before he knew it, he was fast asleep.
When Lightning woke up, he was blinded by a magnificent sunset. He was at his favorite track in the country, the Tampa Bay International Speedway. He liked it for its climate and he raced well on the track. However, today was a unseasonably hot and humid day. "Did you have a good nap?" Doc asked, glancing up from the forms he was filling out. He had a large fan blowing on him and Lightning thought he look very comfortable. "Yeah" Lightning said, stretching gingerly. He glanced around the camp. "Where's Rayne?" Lightning asked "She and Storm left an hour ago to go to dinner" Doc said. Lightning nodded. His daughter ate dinner with Storm every night. At first, it was Rayne's way of annoying Lightning, but it since then it has turned into a habit. "Both Rayne and Storm have to stop losing on purpose" Doc said heavily. "I think the racing officials are getting suspicious with them." "They are?" Lightning asked uncomfortably. He did not want Rayne to be suspended. "Well, I don't know for sure," Doc said "But they're making it very obvious. Storm and Rayne have been alternating weeks they have been winning and loosing." "I know," Lightning said unhappily. "But I can't talk to her about it." "She's your daughter!" Doc said heatedly. "My all but estranged daughter." Lightning replied sadly. "Why don't you talk to her, Doc?" "I just assume one of us still has good relations with her" Doc said dryly. "And I'm not her father." "You're as good as her father," Lightning said. "She likes you a hell of a lot better than me right now." "That's not true," Doc said. "Rayne loves you. That's why she's not speaking to you. She's afraid of disappointing you. If Rayne didn't care about your opinion, she'd be more social than she's acting right now." "Maybe" Lightning said slowly. His stomach rumbled. "I'm starving. Do you want to get something to eat?" "Sure" Doc said. "I don't feel like fighting off your crazed fans though. Let's just get something to eat at the track restaurant." "You read my mind" Lightning said. "Besides its too hot today to go anywhere than a few minutes drive."
The racecar and crew chief drove to the center of the restricted sections where the track restaurant was located. Lightning and Doc drove into the structure and parked in a dining spot. They just stood there for a few moments, letting the air-conditioning cool their hot bodies. "Rayne said she and Storm was eating here, right?" Lightning asked, scanning the dinning room for his daughter. "Yeah" Doc said. "Why?" "There're not here" Lightning said, frowning. Doc quickly scanned the room over. "Well where could they be?" he asked. "Believe me, I'd love to know Doc," Lightning said grimly, suddenly he was not hungry any more. "I'm going back to the trailer to wait on her" Doc nodded. "I'll bring you something back" he said. "Thanks" Lightning said. He quickly drove back to the trailer, almost running into several cars in his haste. Rayne was nowhere to bee seen Lightning got there. He looked around camp and checked both trailers, hoping that Rayne was in one of them cooling off, but she was not there. "Where is she?" Lightning asked under his breath. He called Rayne's phone but got no answer. As much as Lightning absolutely loathed the idea, he knew he was going to have to go to Chick's camp. Lightning sighed and set off to his rival's lime green trailer. Lightning drove at a swift pace, although it was slightly slower than his previous one, the oppressive heat was making it hard to drive anywhere fast. When he got there Chick and his wife was parked in front of several industrial sized fans having a conversation. When Chick realized Lightning was there, he shot him a strange look. He broke away from Halli and drove over to Lightning.
"What do you want, McQueen?" Chick asked, although his expression conveyed he already knew what Lightning was there for. "Is Rayne here, Chick?" Lightning asked quietly. He felt almost sick, and it wasn't from running around in the heat. All he wanted to do was find his daughter. "She and Storm are eating at the track restaurant." Chick said, acknowledging Lightning's defeated stance. "They're not there" Lightning said heavily. "Doc and I were just there, getting dinner ourselves." Chick's face went blank. "They're not there?" he asked, surprised. "No" Lightning said. "Then I don't know where they are." Lightning hesitated before asking something he had been planning to as Chick for a while. "Chick listen," he began. "I know we have a lot of differences, but I'm pretty sure we have the same opinion about my daughter and your son dating one another." "I haven't spoken to Storm in weeks" Chick said. "I tried to be open about it, but he's just pushing us away. When Storm's here, he's in his trailer or off doing something by himself." "That sounds really familiar" Lightning said. "What should we do?" Chick asked, looking Lightning square in the eye. "I don't know if there's anything we can do," Lightning sighed. Chick nodded glumly. "If you see Rayne, just tell her to come back to our trailer," Lightning said, pulling away. "Okay," Chick said. "Do the same for us." "Will do," Lightning said. He drove several circuits around the large parking lot in search of his daughter, but he could not see her or her boyfriend. Feeling both worried and conquered, Lightning headed back to the trailer. Doc had returned with the food, but Lightning refused to eat it. He paced back and forth for a while, trying to think of where his daughter could be. Lightning was so worried that he continued calling her phone every few minutes, Rayne never answered it.
