Hi there,
Just to let people know, I have edited a part of chapter 16. I made a big thing about Logan using lightning in the previous chapter, forgetting what I had written before. The next chapter is nearly finished, I was, it turns out, over ambitious, bordering on delusional when I claimed I could have it done in a week. I do promise, however that it will be up very shortly. I am finding less and less time to spare on this but I really want to keep going.
I hope people are still interested in this, please keep reading and reviewing!
