29. Fishing

This story has one chapter left (plus possibly an epilogue). But, considering that the last two chapters seem to have gone over like lead balloons, I think I'll wait to get a little feedback before I finish.

I write mostly for myself, but I do want to write a story that others enjoy as well. And I want to continue to improve my writing. So let me know: what did you like? What did you not like? What did you think of the story overall, and the last two chapters in particular?