this is my first fanfic and i am open to any type of critic. Please let me know what you think
-hali- Disclaimer; i wish i could say i own twilight and the characters but i am not lucky enough to be the genius that stephenie meyer is and because of that i give all credit to her...
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Chapter 29- Found
BPOV
He flung Mike off of me, and for a minute my body rejoiced from the lack of pressure. I tried to push my body up off the floor but his fingers grasped my throat, and he yanked me up by my neck, watching me flail. My nails clawed at his, fighting for a little breath of air. The hatred in his eyes made me know my attempts were in vain.
-"You've known about Jamie this entire time. You knew she was MINE!" My fingers continued to pull at his, gasping for air. They squeezed a little tighter.
"I didn't know you didn't know!" I choked out, regretting the use of much needed air. I was jerked out through the door and the sweet smell of Edward filled my nose. It put me at a simple, desperate kind of peace state. I could die happy in this room at least, where it almost felt like he was with me. We were moving again, my legs flailing for something to brace myself. My body was flung into the mirrored room again and James approached me, as I just lay there, fighting the tears coming to my face. I had nothing left to fight him. I couldn't muster anything but regret. Something in his eyes told me that this was the end.
-"I have no need of you, my Rachel is back." I pushed myself up gingerly.
-"They'll all run. Edward will know, when they get back he'll feel it."
-"There will be no proof!" I heard the door above us slam, and I felt hope.
-"HELP ME!" I screamed as loud as I could and James back hand came out of nowhere. I was flying across the room and I heard a crack as my head hit the glass and I could picture it spider webbing out from my indent. The smell of blood hit the air and James moved forward.
-"I don't know how I am going to hid that, but it was a pretty effect. You were so pretty Bella." He crouched down in front of me, examining my bleeding head.
-"I promise I'll stay with you till the end. You'll bleed to death, and I'll watch." The door behind him opened silently as the haze in my vision began to set in. An Angel stood there, his face completely pained. I didn't need him to save me anymore.
-" Edward…" I whimpered almost silently, he needed to know one thing. I had to find the strength. I closed my eyes and let out a whisper.
-"Edward I love you." I was ready to go.
EPOV
I ran into the house. I could feel Bella's fear, almost smell it.
-"HELP ME!" The scream ripped into me, and I followed it down to the hall leading to the kitchen. I fumbled through the passageway, listening cautiously. I had to be sure the door I was opening, and I knew I had to quickly. Finally my hand on a knob, I could almost feel her heart beat, it wasn't fast and . He was telling her he was going to watch her die. Her eyes found mine, and I knew how weak her heart really was, the blood was pooling to the floor. It took all of me to concentrate on not rushing to her to be sure she'd be okay. I had to take care of James first. He had to die.I could hear whispered mutters. I opened the door slowly. Bella lay sunken to the floor in front of James, his back to me, mirrored cracked behind where her head was leaning
-"Edward…" She stopped for a breath, and my heart leapt at the way she said my name. She closed her eyes mustering inner strength. I felt something big happening, my arms shook as a single tear slid down her cheek.
-"Edward I love you." Her head sagged to the side and James leaned forward to check her pulse. He had no right to touch her. A low growl erupted from my chest as I lunged forward at him. I was ready to kill him, her body just lying there. We fought for a few minutes before the door burst open, Aro and another man pulled us apart, restraining James from me. The man pushed at me, looking worse for the wear as well.
-"Get to Bella, CHECK ON BELLA!" He seemed just as panicked as I was. I flung myself next to her, I pulled her into my body and as glass sprinkled onto the floor, blood trickled down my arm. I could feel her pulse, a weak beat. Rachel appeared and took in the room.
-"Jamie, go call 911, tell them we found Bella Swan and need an ambulance immediately." I heard the footsteps pad away. Rachel was pulling off her jacket, throwing it in my arms.
-"Edward you have got to slow the bleeding! That's the only chance we've got!" I held it to Bella's head, but if I pushed too hard I would only send the glass deeper into the skull, into her brain. Her pulse was slowing more and I clung her limp body closer to mine.
-"No Bella, please no! You have to fight just a little bit longer baby! Please NO!" I felt the tears taking over as someone's hands were pulling her away from me. I shoved them away with a firm NO! Glaring angrily at the person through my tears.
-"Sir we need to take her." The EMT moved forward again, and this time I let him pull her body away from me. He checked her pulse and I felt his worry pass through me as he started instantly shouting commands. We got out on the grounds and over to the ambulance. Rachel had Jamie held to her as Aro and the other man led James to the police car. The other man got inside as well, I was a little shocked. I put my head in my hands and I heard them charging up the paddles. I prayed as I felt the shock shred through her body, she couldn't be dead. I could feel her, sense her.
' God please, you can't take her away from me again, please, don't leave me with no hope!'
The EMTs looked at me. Bella's face was soft at peace. They made room for me as stood slowly. The walk to her felt like forever. I took her cold hand, waiting for the blush that always rushed to her cheeks when I did that. She wasn't dead, she couldn't be dead. I stared longingly at her mesmerizingly, beautiful face. I leaned over her to give her a single kiss. The last kiss I could ever give to her. The flat buzzing noise blocked out of my mind. I felt my tears splash onto her cheeks, and I pressed my lips to her cold ones, as gently as I could without letting the desperation take over me. I all but collapsed, bawling over her body. My face buried deep into her hair, the hint of strawberries lingered and it forced the knowledge of my surroundings on me. I heard a startled gasp behind me, and then a single beep.
