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hey guys...thanks for the reviews!! Made my day...anyway, what will happen to poor Jake?


Jack and Sally landed in a suggestive heap on the cobblestone street. Jack got up and helped Sally to her feet. Sam fell onto the ground about a foot away. She got up.

Jack did a quick head-count.

"Where's Jake?" he asked. Sally and Sam looked around, and all three's eyes grew wide.

"Oh my God..." Jack said in shock, "Jake's still in the Human World!!!"


Jake kept pounding on the wall.

"Please? Please let me back!!" he cried out to no one in particular. He gave up, and slid down the wall. He put his skull in his hands.

He was not going home. The portal was closed, and he would be stuck here for at least a year. How would he survive?

As Jake pondered this, he heard a voice.

"Hey!" Jake looked around. "Hey! You, kid!" Jake spotted a goth at the begining of the alley.

Jake put on a tough face, and wiped his tears away. "What do you want?" he said in a maucho voice.

"Is you dad Jack?" the goth asked. Jake couldn't make out his face, as it was turned down, but the person was dressed in a long black trenchcoat, had ripped jeans, a black T-shirt with a skull on it, he had dog tags hanging from his neck, and was wearing combat boots.

"Yeah, what's it to you?" he said. This person was interupting his moping.

"I'm friends with your dad. My name's Spike." said the person.


Jack called a town meeting. The citizens thought it was to congradulate them on their spectacular Halloween work. But they knew something was afoot when they saw their King pacing the stage.

"Listen, everyone! We have an emergency!" Jack started. The citizens whispered anxiously to themselves. "My son, Jake, was trapped at the portal! He is still in the Human World!" Jack announced. The whispers turned to nervous calls.

"Does anyone know of a way to open the portal?" Jack asked. The audience silenced. A single hand went up.

"Dr. Finklestien?" Jack asked.


"How do you know my dad?" Jake asked suspicously.

"We shared a cell...aren't you his son? The one who busted the cell?" Spike asked.

"Yeah, that was me." Jake said, with just a whiff of pride in his voice.

"Oh! Spike!" a female voice called. Jake and Spike turned to see a girl goth running towards them.

She was dressed in jeans with large holes in the knees, a black tee with the sleeves ripped off, a dog collar on her neck, and was also wearing combat boots. She ran up to Spike and threw her arms around him.

"Hey baby..." Spike said gently, stroking her hair. The girl buried her face into his neck. "Oh Spike...I was afraid I lost you...what happened to you?" she asked, pulling away. Spike chuckled.

"I got booked and stuck in a cell overnight." he said. "Oooh...poor baby." she cooed, "Were you alright?" she asked. "I'm fine, thanks to this kid." Spike said. "Jake, this is my fiance, Jamie."

The Jamie looked at Jake. Jake looked at Jamie.

"Thank you for rescuing my Spike...can we repay you?" she asked. Jake stood. "Well, actually, I was kinda hoping you would help me out...I'm in a bit of a situation."


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