Chapter 29 is now, and no joke gag thing here today
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C2 new The many faves of Shiruba Kurosaku...
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Samurai; You have no idea how rough
Soulhope; But no one ever bothered to do that to Naruto...to see if he was the fox, or human...Haku isn't fighting Sasuke today
VFSNAKE; Sure then, just check the 600th floor and your find them
Spiderfox; Does Guy have a harem? No and if he even acted slightly "YOUTHFUL", the girls would pound it out of him, and the fox would burn it away
Dead; These are the preliminaries, a lot of people are going to be hurt
Rixell; Whata are the other, large cliches in fanon then? I'm curious about it, just minus the Homo stuff. Oh, and I'll make up for the harmlessness to Pinky, it also fuels my stories plotline. Decides, I personally thought that the fight between Temari and Ino wasn't bad either
Tobi; Doesn't Guy do that...been a while since I saw a subbed Naruto episode
Konan retains her lead, however slightly
This chapters Phenomenom starts now...did I already use that?
Mitrashi Tower hallways
'Have to get away, have to get away' Sakura thought in a panic as she fled from the preliminaries. Chunnin rank be dammed, she wouldn't fight that, monster! Whatever he was, he wasn't human, and she'd be ripped to shreds.
It didn't matter anyway, her mother had told her that by the end of the exams, they'd be in control of Konoha. She'd be promoted, along with her Sasuke-Kun, while the baka and his bitches were stripped of their ranks. The baka would be executed like the criminal he was, and his whores would be Sasuke-Kun's slaves.
The civilians and civilian born would rule!
As she continued to flee from the death matches, she found herself in the path of a dark cloaked figure. The figure appeared to be hazy, without a solid body apparent, and to her annoyance, a large chest was apparent.
"Hey, get out of the way..." the figure stared at her, as Sakura froze in fear. The figure rose its hand as it slowly approached her wide, terrified eyes.
"No, get away, get back...AHHHH..." silence as Sakura collapsed to the floor, still. Only shallow breathing revealed the fact she was still alive.
Back to the fighting; Mitrashi Tower
Fluffy sniffed the air, and growled in fury. Taisune gave her a look.
"So, she's here too then?" Fluffy shattered the empty sake bottle in her hand with Tsunade like force.
"That bitch...she and her bastard Uchiha are back, and from the dead. Honestly, can't they just stay dead..."
"Tell that to Tobi" Taisune sighed. Down below, Hinata and the dark skinned Kumo female were about to square off.
"So, your the little Hyuga from all that time ago, Hiashi's brat. Ha, your a Hyuga, you look like a terrified little brat" Hinata flinched. Neji glared down at her.
"Humph, the little weakling probably got the worst match up she could have gotten" Neji smirked "this is going to be enjoyable to watch" Tenten and Lee glared at him.
"That is so unyouthful. You should support your family, at least you have one!" Lee yelled. Neji gave a chuckle.
"Hey, I envy you two, no deadweights in power, no evil traditions, I'd trade my life with yours anyday" Fu and Haku didn't seem hopeful for her either, but Naruto was trying to be.
"She's Samui-Chan's teammate, right? Since she got knocked out, she's bound to be weaker then her" He reasoned. Haku shook her head.
"Even if that's true, she had a sword, allowing for her to keep Hinata-San easily out of range, and I'd be willing to bet she has some sort of long range attack" Haku shook her head "Its a problem with clan style fighting, they all fight the same way, allowing for easy counterstrategies. For example the Akamichi fight with Taijutsu exclusively, and the Yamanaka fight mainly with their minds,and you saw how that ended"
"In a way like that, its almost better to born outside of one of the exclusive jutsu clans, lets you diversify, the Sarutobi, Hatake, and even dare I say the duck heads" Fu shrugged. Naruto smiled down at the fight.
"Hey, don't sweat it, its always the quiet ones who pull the win out of nowhere, Shino-san did" Fu and Haku gave him a look.
"Naruto-Kun, that saying goes to thieves, killers and perverts" Naruto's eyes went wide.
"Oh, my bad...its not like Hinata-san's any of those" they missed Hinata sneeze.
"Begin" with a cough, the two girls began their fight, Hinata starting off by activating her Byukugan.
Hinata flew at Karui and attempted a gentle fist strike, which Karui easily avoided, before elbowing Hinata in the back. Hinata stumbled backwords, disheavled from the attack, before Karui gave Hinata a roundhouse kick, smashing her into the wall, sending up a cloud of smoke.
At least, she thought she did, as the smoke cleared, only some rubble from the two earlier fights were in her place.
"Substitution" Neji huffed "Little coward" Tenten gave him a look.
"Hey lay off her, last I checked that was a jutsu your laws let you use" Neji huffed.
"And when do we ever use such, weak techniques outside the academy?" he countered. He never did, and now Karui was wildly looking around for her.
"Damm, where did the little brat go" she growled, before she heard several running like sounds, and turned around to see Hinata charging at her. Drawing her long sword from her back, she swung it at Hinata like a cleaver knife, and it passed right through her.
"A clone..." Karui said surprised, before she felt a sharp strike to her arm. The real Hinata had landed a hit, and she dropped her sword from her impacted hand. Rapidly, Hinata struck her in two other points of her arm before jumping out of further range of her other arm.
"See Neji, that was youthful thinking" Lee smiled "Using a clone jutsu as a distraction, then getting a strike via her Gentle Fist. It is an idea you should try" Neji shook his head.
"She's weak, so she needs little, civilian tricks like that" Neji scoffed. Karui was angry now.
"MY ARM, you will pay for that!" She focused, as the Song of Thunder Genjutsu formed around her, rumbling thunder clouds sending off ode to joy like music. Hinata stared at her in fright. Guy growled.
"So Lee-kun, that's the rival power you warned me off...the Song of Thunder" Lee nodded vigorously, as Neji paled.
"She can summon that kind of Genjutsu at will...you know, I may dislike that weakling, but that's a little over the top" meanwhile her sensei was grinning.
"Yes, she's using my new technique with static! Prepare to be made estatic!"
"URG, you can't be serious, you perfected that, unholy jutsu"
Samui shivered as she saw what was about to occur.
"I really don't want to know"
"LIGHTNING RELEASE: THUNDER NOTES!" the Genjutsu started to shimmer, as the notes started to form out of it, coated in electricty. The notes formed around Karui, before she used her one good hand to point at Hinata, as the musical notes flew at Hinata.
Hinata, with her Byukuan activated, shivered at the oncoming notes, before using her gentle fist to strike them, but the notes just passed through her attack, and then electrocuted her. Electricity covered Hinata, who screamed.
"HINATA-SAN!" Kiba, Fu, Haku and Naruto gasped out at once. Kurenai and Shino gave her a concerned look. Hinata stumbled out of the attacks range, her hair smoking slightly.
"Give it up, weakling. You can't win, hah you weren't even worth that incident. Ha, in fact I bet that your father wishes we'd have taken you off of his burden" Hinata shivered. Naruto had enoguh of it.
"HINATA-SAN, Don't listen to her taunts, she's just trying to hurt you! Don't let her bully you like that!" Fu and Haku smiled sadly. Naruto had incidents like that a lot in his youth, so anything similar to that he caught sight of angered him easily. Neji scoffed.
"The idiot doesn't get it. Hinata-Sama is doomed to be a failure, nothing he can say will change that" Hinata, however, looked up at Naruto with a smile.
"Naruto-kun" She whispered to herself, before she looked up to her sensei, who then gave her a curt nod. Hinata nodded, as she forced herself up, deactivating her Byukagun.
"Still trying you weakling...don't bother; LIGHTNING RELEASE: THUNDER NOTES!" dozens of electric notes flew straight at Hinata, as a multicolored glow of Chakra surrounded her. Kurenai smiled.
"What the..." Kiba said shocked.
"That, that hasn't been seen in hundreds of years" The Hokage sputtered "I thought it was just talk" Taisune was in shock, and Fluffy appeared to be absent.
"Been years since I saw one of those, who knew sunny girl there had it" Fluffy said absently
"Hey, isn't that something out of the new Princes Funn movie?" Naruto said confused. Neji looked, terrified.
"No, it can't be, she can't..." Hinata did the handseals Bird, Horse, Bird and Tiger
"AURORA RELEASE: BOREAL LIGHTSHOW!" a dozen streams of red, green and blue streams of chakra flew from Hinata's glowing arms, striking into the notes, and obliterating them, before smashing into Karui, who was sent screaming and crashed into the wall, where she lay knocked out. Hayate gave it a minute.
"Winner, Hyuga Hinata" Hinata panted, as the glow dissipated from her body. Lee was confused.
"Neji, what was that strange light she had around her, and Aurora release...I never heard of something like that?" Neji seemed to be stuttering much like his cousin did, but in shock more than nervousness.
"The...Aurora release...trait is...immensely rare...amongst the Hyuga...like one in a thousand..."
"Wait, Aurora's are those lights int he north, right?" Tenten asked. Neji nodded. She chuckled "So what is it then, the 'one light amongst the arctic clan or something?" Neji shook his head.
"You could...say that...the trait...while weakening the Byukugan...of the possessor...grants them range..."
"So, what elements does it combine then?" Guy asked "Kekkei Genkai combine two or more elements..."
"Its not" Neji said aburtly "It's, a Kekkei Tota, three elements together...wind, water and lightning...ironic isn't it?" Gaara was stairing at the tired Hinata.
"She'd be a good way to prove my existance" Gaara commented. Kankuro was shocked at the performance.
"And I though the Hyuga were just nasty on puppetmasters...now that! This is going to make the plan more difficult"
The next match was up now
Kinuta Dosu vs Kurotsuchi
"Good, they ommited my name like I asked" Kurotsuchi commented from her lone spot "But still, that guy's going to be tough" both the genin jumped down to battlfield, where she looked up to where Team 11 was. Dosu looked like a mummy, and also had on him a straw cape, and a metal arm
"Still, wished I could've fought blondie there...but no matter" Taisune sighed in relief at this.
"You know, I'm glad she didn't fight Naruto-Kun, she would have totalled him because he looks like his dad. Though sound mummy there is one of the tougher Genin here...this should be a good fight.
"Begin"
Dosu stood still, which only infuriated Kurotsuchi, who began to rapidly do handsigns
"Move it you lug...or I'll make you...FIRE RELEASE; DRAGON FLAME JUTSU!" a dragon made of flames flew from her mouth towards Dosu, who easily avoided the attack with unexpected mobility.
"What the..."she said in shock as he appeared behind her.
"Vibrating sound drill" He slammed his arm into Kurotsuchi, as sound waves began pouring off of the attack, disorienting her and causing her hearing to get shot.
"So, your a long range fighter? Interesting, but it doesn't matter, you loose today, my sound has damaged your hearing and messed with your bodily functions, this will be the knock out blow..." she then began to dissolve into mud as he finished. He stared in surprise.
"A mud clone and a substitution..." she appeared behind him with a evil glint.
"Not bad, and here I thought my clone would have you? I wasn't Iwa rookie of the year for nothing mummy, FIRE RELEASE: DRAGON FLAME JUTSU!"
"VIBRATING SOUND DRILL!" the two attacks collided, canceling her attack. He stepped back, and shook his head.
"That fire attack, my sound was off at the end of it. You used the fire to heat my metal arm, impressive, your smarter then the Uchiha, though that takes little...I give you this win" Kurotsuchi blinked, as did everyone else.
"Huh?" he sighed.
"The holes on my arm are specified for the use of my sound jutsu. If they are messed up by heat and expand, my skill repitour is highly weakened. Better to give up while I can still repair the damage..so I can fight who I really want to destroy" he looked up to the Uchiha, before leaving the battle room. Hayate looked confused.
"Okay...winner Kurotsucihi" Taisune smiled.
"That oto genin is a funny one, and has too much potential to loose. Fluffy, Kiri or Kumo?" she gave a thought for a moment.
"Kumo" Taisune nodded.
"Agreed, SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!"
"SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!" a independent set of clones of both of them appeared next to them.
"Can't risk the sound differences from other clones. Okay, both of you, bring the mummy to Kumo, they'd kill for his information on Orochimaru, and we can't risk it getting into Akatsuki hands. You know what to do" they vanished as the next fight began, where Shikimaru took home his teams only win against the last Oto genin, thus the entire team was knocked out. Then came the next match
Tsurugi Misumi vs Momoichi Haku
"Momoichi, as in the seven swordsman Zabuza, has she seen it" Tenten said, drooling like a sasuke fangirl in his shower...lets not think that one through
One of the creepy covered mouth, glass wearing teammates of Kabuo was now against Haku.
"Hmmm, what a pretty body, so sorry I'm going to have to break it" he chuckled as his arm started to roll and stretch unnaturally towards her.
"That, is disgusting" Fu said grossed out as the arm extended towards Haku rapidly.
"WIND RELEASE: GREAT BREAKTHROUGH!" a great blast of wind was unleashed from Haku's mouth, flying towards him, when his entire body unnaturaly loosenedt to avoid the attack, grossing out most of the genin, aside for Sasuke, Neji, his teamate and Gaara.
"You can't hit me, my body can alter itself at will" his body began to wrap around Haku's, restraining her arms and to her and the rest of the Kunoichi present furies, her breasts.
"Oh, they are so soft, your be fun to play with" he chuckled evily. Naruto was ticked.
"Hey, let Haku-Chan go you pervert!" he chuckled.
"Why should I, this will be fun" she tried to move her hands, and found only one could be moved. She sighed, before using one of her finger nails to let some blood out.
"Do you give up now, or do I have to break your pretty little body" He chuckled. She grinned as she did several one handed seals unseen by him.
"I have two words for you...SUMMONING JUTSU!" from her still free hand, the dark furred rabbit called Shirabbito appeared in a poof of smoke and hopped out of the attack. Hinata smiled.
"So cute" Kiba grinned, hungirly, as did Fluffy. Both had similar thoughts
'Dinner' Tenten laughed.
"A rabbit, what could a silly little rabbit"
"Shirabbito, maul him" the rabbit gave an insane laugh, as a graphic maulin began. The group shivered, some even looking away.
"That rabbit, its evil" Sasuke commented.
"That rabbit, is very unyouthful. You should never bite someone there" Lee said nervously.
"That rabbit is very nasty, and it de jewels men very fasty"
"KILL THAT THING, BEFORE IT KILLS US!"
"Um, winner Momoichi Haku, please get rid of that rabbit, cough" Haku desummoned the nasty rabbit. The next match was called, and Fu flinched, as the taki boy grinned.
Takiboshi Fu vs Bagugirai Jo
"So skeeter, ready to get squashed?"
The original techniques debuted today
Lightning Release; Thunder Notes
Rank A
Descritpion; Once the "song of thunder" is activated, notes shaped out of electricty are lobied at the foe. This technique doesn't require handsigns and can't be blocked by physical means
Aurora Release; Boreal Lightshow
Kekkei Toita (A)
Decription; Large bands of lights are sent at the foe, similar to Storm Release; Laser Circus
