Dimension travelers 1: pokemon world

Hello, I am compleatly under excited about the lack of reviews. Review!!! This chapter's pokemon is psyduck.


David's POV

Brock had taken us to a place called scissor street.

"There sure are a lot of beauty parlors." Misty remarked, and I knew why Brock had brought us here. Ash wasn't so enlightened and asked Brock if there was anyplace he had in mind.

"Wait a minute, I just remembered that scissor street is some times called breeder lane." Misty said and Ash got most of the picture. Brock described what breeder lane was about and I noticed Jeffery taking special interest. Then a poster of an appalling ekans and koffing caught Misty's eye. I don't know how anybody could call those monstrosities cute. Misty started to drag Ash to the parlor and the rest of us followed. Then Brock spotted what he was looking for and headed to it. He regarded the place like it was a temple or something. We saw the owner of the shop, Suzie, massaging a chansey. Being psychic means no more worrying about names. The chansey's trainer was something to behold, if you liked to behold freaky things that should never be seen in public.

"Can I help the next customer?" Suzie asked, Ash was about to answer when Brock shoved him out of the way. Then Misty shoved him out of the way to get a better look at a vulpix.

"Vulpix, a fox pokemon, it's six tails are extreamly beutiful and as it evolves it grows even more."

"It is a cuddly pokemon." Joesph said, then Misty's desire to hug the little pokemon got the better of her and she picked it up. Only to get a face full of flamethrower. Before Misty fainted she said something that sounded like very cute. Dexter piped up at this point.

"Vulpix uses powerful flame attacks."

"Duh." Ash said to himself

"Please pordon vulpix, it doesn't like to be picked up or hugged by strangers." Suzie apologised

"Um, Suzzie?" Brock asked nervously

"Yes?" She questioned and Brock began to trip over his words.

"Brock, remeber to breath." Jeffery reminded him, then he collected himself and asked Suzie to take him on as a pupil.

"I don't have pupils, Brock. Breeding takes up all my time." Suzie answered

"What make's her such a great breeder anyway?" Ash asked innocently and got an earful from Brock about all Suzie's achievements.

"Ok Brock, we heard you clear and loud." Ash said and Misty asked about the vulpix. She got a similar response to the question Ash asked and Brock rattled off all of vulpix's achievements. But Ash interrupted him in the middle. Suzie then invited us for some herbal tea.

"So all eight of you are travleing on a pokemon journy together?" Suzzie asked

"And getting a little more than we bargained for." I said, pikachu and pikabule were munching on Brock's pokemon food. I might have joined them, it looked like Brock had outdone himself.

"Your pikachus have beautiful shiny coats." Suzzie complimented."Are you the one who prepares all of the pikachus' food Brock?"

"Yes I do." He said at attention, then pikachu offered some of the food to vulpix. Vulpix ate it happily and Brock was ecstatic.

"I can't believe vulpix is eating the food I made." Brock said in disbelief

"Why wouldn't it? I love your food." I said and Suzie cocked an eyebrow."You know how some people say 'there's more to this then meets the eye'?"

"Yes." She answered

"Well there's a lot more to me then meets the eye." I said and a spark of realization came over her. Then Misty asked about the salon run by Team Rocket.

"Ever since that place opened people have been trying to make their pokemon look as flashy as possible." Suzie said

"I don't know why anyone would do that, those pokemon on the poster look awful." Jeffery commented, then Ash and Misty got into a fight about weather the outside counts as much as the inside.

"Shouldn't you stop them?" Suzie asked

"That's like trying to stop all of reality." I answered and everybody gave me a strange look, then Ash gave Misty the idea of taking psyduck to the salon.

"You'll be jealous when we get back and psyduck is even cuter than pikachu." Misty said and walked out to the salon

"The day that psyduck is cuter than a pikachu is the day that the world ends." I remarked, then Suzie began to express self doubt. Brock set her straight in an instant.

"We have to stick up for what's inside together, right pikachu?" Ash declared and pikachu agreed

"How are we going to do that?" Suzzie asked

"If they want to put style over substance then we'll have to give them substance with style!" Brock cried, we got everything ready and began a class about pokemon care. Pikachu was enjoying himself. Suzie gave the information and the rest of us gave the visual. After a few minutes psyduck appeared without Misty.

[What's up psyduck?] I asked

[Misty captured!] He exclaimed

"Team Rocket's got Misty." I told the others and we all took off, I was in battle mode when we entered the salon.

[What happened to your face?] I asked in open telepathy

"Dumb boys." She muttered under her breath, we demanded Misty's release but Team Rocket refused. They began to babble their plan and offered a trade.

"Your pikachus and the pokeshifter for the girl." Jesse said

"Not on your life." Joesph said and the battle began

Ash's POV

I commanded pikachu to go into battle and Brock sent out geodude. Geodude used seismic toss on ekans and pikachu was bowled over by the ekans.

"Pikachu use thunder shock!" I commanded and pikachu tried to zap Team Rocked, but it didn't work. David tried a flamethrower and got better results. Their protection was destroyed, but koffing used sludge and got it in our pokemon's eyes. As Team Rocket was about to attack vulpix stepped up, then David used some telekinesis to remove the sludge from his face. Vulpix used an ultra powerful fire spin that contained Team Rocket.

"Looks like Team Rocket's blasting off again!" The shouted as the took to the skys. David then showed some major respect to vulpix. After that all the trainers who had taken their pokemon to Team Rocket's salon removed the makeup.

"Thanks to all of you, I believe in what I'm doing again. You helped me regain confidence in my beliefs." Suzie said

"It's not hard when the person you're helping is as great as you are." I remarked

"Brock, I was very impressed with the way you handled your pokemon in a crisis like that. I have a lot more to learn about breeding pokemon, even if I do have a championship. I'm still a student, not a teacher. Looks like you and I both have journeys ahead of us." After that Suzie went on to say that now she and Brock were rivals."I'd be grateful if you took care of vulpix for me. You're the first person other then me that vulpix has been friendly with. Right now I believe that you could do a better job raising vulpix then I could."

"Thanks, I don't know what to say." Brock said and promised vulpix that he would take good care of him. Brock then captured vulpix. I was smiling, then I looked a Misty and started to laugh again. Afterwards we continued on our journey.


Hope you all enjoyed that last chapter.

Signed, Psychicshipping