I usually critise my work but i like this chapter xD. remember to leave a comment if you read :D

"So kids. What do you want to do this weekend?"

"Camping!" Natalie shouted

"Okay. And you Milo?"

"I don't care"

"Is everything okay buddy?"

"Yeah yeah. Let's go camping" Milo said pretending to be excited

"Okay. Let's"

They arrived at the camp site and Derek set up camp whilst Natalie and Milo went down to the lake. Natalie sat down on a rock and watched as Milo threw stones into the lake.

"I hate your mother" Milo said, Natalie clenched her fist and shot Milo a deathly glare

"Take that back!" She shouted at him

"No! Your mom's a stupid bitch" Milo shouted at her

"Well your mom's nothing but a stupid slut!" Natalie shouted back and got off the rock and walked towards Milo.

"Shut up. You're a stupid bitch like your mom. And don't you ever talk about my mom"

"I can say whatever I want to about her. My mom says that daddy didn't stay with your mom because she was a dirty whore"

"I don't care what you, Derek or the bitch has to say. My mom is the best mom in the world" Milo said as tears trickled down his face. He ran off down the lake and heard Natalie shout at him.


"Where's Milo?" Derek asked when he only found Natalie down by the lake.

"I don't know" Natalie shrugged

"What do you mean you don't know?"

"He just ran off"

"Which way?" Derek asked in a worried tone. Natalie pointed in the direction that Milo had ran and went towards Derek.

"Daddy I want to go home"

"Okay but first we have to find Milo"

"We can just leave him"

"Natalie, he's your brother. And let's go" Derek said and took Natalie's hand and they started walking.

About a mile up the lake they found Milo sleeping against a rock. Derek let go of Natalie's hand and bent down to Milo. Derek scooped him up into his arm and Natalie hated the sight and tugged at Derek's shirt.

"Daddy my legs hurt" Natalie whined

"We're going back now. Milo's sleeping"

"But my legs hurt daddy" Natalie said this time slightly louder. Milo woke up and Derek found his eyes red and blood shocked and knew that he had been crying.

"Hey son. You alright"

"Yeah. You can put me down" Milo said and slowly got out of Derek's arm.

"Daddy I'm tired" Natalie whined. Derek picked her up and started walking and Milo trailed behind. They arrived at the camp site and Milo sat in silence and Derek put a sleeping Natalie inside the tent.

"So what's up buddy?" Derek asked. Milo didn't answer and was still caught up in his own world.

"Milo?"

"Oh sorry. Can I go home?"

"Why? Natalie asked me the same thing before. What's up with you guys?"

"Do you really think my mom is a dirty whore?" Milo asked. Derek was shocked that his son had asked him that and he quickly replied.

"No. Why would you think that?"

"Natalie said. You know what, I just want to go home"

"Wait when did this happen?"

"I don't want to talk about it actually. Can we just go?"

"Sure" Derek said and he packed up the things again. On the car journey back home everyone was quiet. Derek didn't know what was wrong but he knew that they probably had a fight or something.