A/N: So I was looking around the new story rules and I discovered that you're not allowed to do commentary. I won't delete the story, instead, I'll do something that I've always wanted to do since I started reviewing this...

Chapter 30 The Revvel!
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"Are you" said BrakenFur.

"WHY WONT QNYONE BELIVE ME" said starGleam and she ran uot of the cmap.

angry!

That's it. I can't handle this anymore. I'm invading the story and changing it.

HOW cloud BrakinFor noy belivfe her after!11!11 And atfer averythign she done as a amaxing kit!

"Oh, that's rich." I laughed as I stepped into the story.

"OMGGGGG hwo r uu!1!'' srekkd starGeam

"And the first thing I'm going to do," I snapped, "is fix this awful spelling!"

"Hey, my speech is spelled right!" shrieked Starpaw. "No! Everything is spelled right!"

"You have been my enemy, and a curse upon the fandom!" I stepped forwards and snatched the purple Mary-Sue out of the story and into the world of gigabytes. "And because of that I must destroy the monster that you are!"

"OMG! I'm not a monster!" Starpaw yowled. "There must be some mistake!"

"Stupid as ever, I see!" I snapped my fingers. "Just for kicks, let's add some Undertale to this."

Starpaw turned into a red, floating heart. "Mysterious Figure is angry at you." read the text in front of her.

"What is this?!" asked Starpaw in a panic. She flailed and pressed "ACT."

"wat?" asked Starpaw. She pressed "Attempt to Negotiate."

"Mysterious Figure is unwilling to negotiate." read the text.

"You are a racist, godless Mary-Sue," I snapped as I flung my arm down, spinning the box her SOUL was confined in randomly as flying knifes and computers wreaked havoc, "and must die!" The stupid she-cat ran helplessly into every single piece of shrapnel, depleting her HP to 1.

"Now that I have your weakened SOUL," I reached out and snatched Starpaw's SOUL, "I can do what I want to you!" I pressed RESET victoriously and reset to the time that her mother Dawnsparkle was born. "Time to end this non-canon disease where it started." I entered a fight with the kit as she emerged from her mother and killed her with a single blow.

"This kit was born dead." Littlecloud announced as he pulled the dead kit away from her mother.

"No!" Starpaw's SOUL shrieked. "What did you do to my mother?"

"Killed her and undone your timeline." I replied. "Let the true timeline live again!" I did my best Flowey laugh as Starpaw's SOUL began to fade.

"Who are you?" whimpered Starpaw as she began to vanish from existence.

"Some call me VolcanicPizza, others know me as Alexander North." I replied. "Your creator and the other trolls that perpetrate monstrosities and defects on the true timeline like you will know me as the Moderator. I moderate the Warriors history as I will by destroying your technological essences and will for every poorly written trollfic that is a defect on the timeline that I can."

And then Starpaw, that monstrosity of trollfics and Mary-Sues, was dead.

A/N: If anybody wants to turn this chapter into a YouTube animation or something, you are free to as long as you tell me where I can access it.