Dimentio713 got inside his TARDIS and pressed a few buttons. He stepped outside and found himself in Rougeport. "Last stop..." He said. He looked around and from the distance, there were three children.

"I swear! I'm SO bored!" One of them said. He was Filipino and had glasses.

"Oh be quiet Dimentio713!" Another said, she was a female Filipina and only glared at the boy who recently spoke, "Listen, after this... You guys are TOTALLY gonna meet my parents."

A boy with swirly glasses sighed, "Let's just check on the seal of the Shadow Queen. Let's go Dimentia!"

Dimentio713 slowly followed the younger versions of he and his friends as they made their way to the Thousand-Year Door.

"So when we meet my parents... Be very careful." Dimentia713 said smiling, "Anyways, I think we should live there from now on! After this mission, we're done!" The door opened, "Let's go!"


The older Dimentio sighed as he shook his head, "How could things go so wrong. I came here to investigate the Shadow Queen..." He followed them into the lair.

The younger Dimentio713 tapped the coffin containing the Shadow Queen, "She seems to be sealed guys!"

"No... I'm not..." A demonic light as the candles in the room became dark fire. The Shadow Queen burst from the coffin and saw the terrified faces of the three children, "Oh, are you confused? I was able to talk to a certain man to free me from this coffin. In exchange, I would serve him for all eternity..." She started to laugh, "However, once I kill the three of you, I will destroy him and begin my plans anew!"

The older Dimentio713 gasped behind the door.

The Shadow Queen knocked all of them away, Dimentio713 with his face down the floor and Fawful212 making a trail of blood behind me and loomed over Dimentia713, who got up and shook her head.

"Hm... The girl seems like a good vessel to use... Perhaps I should possess her."

"Oh no you don't!" The older Dimentio713 threw his sword at her, "...Wait, that was a stupid move."

"The man who talked to me looked quite like you." The Shadow Queen said, glaring at Dimentio713, "And yet... He isn't."

"Whatever!" He re-summoned the Purity Sword in his hands, "SHADOW QUEEN! YOU WILL BE DEFEATED RIGHT HERE! RIGHT NOW!"

"...I think not boy... Serve me and we shall-" Dimentio threw his sword again.

"IMPUDENT CHILD! PREPARE TO BE DESTROYED!"

"NO!" Dimentia713 got up and suddenly her eyes became pink, "YOU WILL NOT HARM ANYBODY ELSE!" A psychic aura surrounded the Shadow Queen.

"Impossible!"

Dimentio looked at the Shadow Queen and Dimentia713. Dimentia started to sweat, "Come on..."

"You're too weak aren't you!" Dimentio realized.

"NO!" She grasped the boy with glasses, "I MUST KILL YOU ALL!"

"Fawful!" Dimentia cried out.

Dimentio713 pressed his Sonic Screwdriver and pointed it toward Dimentia713.

"Ma'am! I'm making you stronger! KEEP PUSHING!" He cried out.

Dimentia713 cried out as the Shadow Queen became smaller and smaller. The Shadow Queen started to shake.

"HE TRICKED ME! I'M WEAKER THAN BEFORE!"

That's when she became an orb and Dimentia713 brought her inside her body.

Fawful212's face was torn. He was bleeding profusely.

The older Dimentio713 ran up to him and he snapped his fingers, "...Of course..." They were all sent back to Dimension D.

"But why?" He shook his head and walked back to the TARDIS.


Dimentio713 was currently holding a sonic screwdriver in a orange and purple background, a green light emitted from it. Words started to pop out.

Kawashita yakusoku wasurenai yo
Me o toji tashikameru
Oshiyoseta yami furiharatte susumu yo

There it was. In a Black script similar to that of Comic Sans MS. Maskwitness Reviews.

Itsu ni nattara nakushita mirai o
Watashi koko de mata miru koto dekiru no?

Dimentio713 had new clothes. What type of clothes? Well, for one thing he was pale and had a blue jacket and strangely gray eyes. Perhaps he wasn't Dimentio713, but someone else.

Afuredashita fuan no kage o nando de mo saite
Kono sekai ayundekou

Dimentia713 was currently in cage. Her clothes were torn-up and she was crying. Interestingly enough, a purple monster was overhead, watching her. She looked up to see Dimentio713. She smiled as the purple monster fought him.

Mezameta kokoro wa hashiridashita mirai o egaku tame
Muzukashii michi de tachidomatte mo
Sora wa kirei na aosa de itsumo mattete kureru
Dakara kowakunai
Mou nani ga atte mo kujikenai

Dimentio713 was in the TARDIS and was shaking his head.


Dimentio713 was wearing a Magical girl outfit and was facing a purple mist.

Corrector Yui Episode 1


Dimentio was in the TARDIS and checked the screen, "...All this time... I didn't know... I saved myself...and doomed my girlfriend." Dimentio sighed.

"...The trauma must've been too much for my child self to bear..." There was a sudden twirl.

"WHOA!"

Dimentio713 was tossed around like a rag doll, up, down, and all around. He was suddenly absorbed by the TARDIS screen.

As he got up, he groaned, "...This isn't good..." He said as he saw 0's and 1's all around him, transforming into his house...and the demons he fought with Steel.

"...And that's my cue!" Dimentio ran into the review room before the demons got him.

"...Alright, so... This thing reminds me of an anime where the main character went into the world a technology AND is a Magical Girl anime. This anime is called Corrector Yui!"

"So we start with...a very slow and gentle opening theme." Dimentio blinked, "Well... We're going on an adventure... I guess."

"So we start with our heroine, Yui talking to her dad about...a virtual reality theme park." Dimentio blinked, "Virtual reality? Isn't that kinda a flop."


Yui: What, really Daddy?

Yui's Dad: Yes. Tomorrow...

THE WORLD WILL BE MINE!


Dimentio grinned, "I'm serious! Letting everybody sit on their butt while their mind becomes mush... THAT'S GREAT!"

He blinked, "Oh right... There's nobody with a snarky comment to make toward me... Um..."

Dimentio made a high-pitched voice similar to that of Akira, "Tch, please Dimentio! Your mind becomes mush when playing Kingdom Hearts 3D!"

Dimentio grinned, "THERE WE GO!"

"So as Yui's dad tells his plan to conquer the world by transferring people's minds into a theme park where men can cross-dress, like I do, Yui is obsessed with a dress."


Yui and Dad: Galaxy Land! The land of dreams! Galaxy Land!

Galaxy Land! The only theme park where you can sit on your butt all day!

Mom: Both of you! We're in the middle of breakfast!


"So as it turns out, Yui's Dad is very dead-beat and just wants to spend time with his daughter! Um... Here's an idea... BRING HER TO A REAL AMUSEMENT PARK! Granted you have a job with computers, but who wants to sit on their butt all day doing nothing but being on their computer playing games, reading fanfiction, reading blogs and...stalking Tohokari-Steel..." Dimentio blinked, "Um... Forget I said that."

"Anyways, as they start to eat their food, we're treated to an old man who is lost in the woods and welll..."


Old Man: Now, you are the last one, IR.

The last one?

IR: Professor Inukai, is this really the end?


Well, considering he's probably gonna die soon... Most likely.

"Anyways, I have to enjoy IR's simplistic design because it kinda makes sense... Though he DOES remind me that Paper Clip in Windows 2000..." Dimentio blinked, "...Oh man... Clippy... How much I wanted to...play around with you..."

He blinked, "Oh, right... Nobody to blink at me with my weird comment."

He then spoke in an awful Fawful212 voice, "Really? He's as annoying at DAL!"

He promptly spoke in DAL's voice, "NO I'M NOT!"

Dimentio went back to his normal voice, "Yeah! DAL's like 20% cooler!"


Inukai: I entrust you with the virtual world of ComNet.

And I swear if you suck at your job, I'm putting you into 4chan!


"So Professor Inukai then states he needs one last thing. Most likely a magical girl..."

Teacher: In order to access ComNet for the first time it's important to note the data which appears on the monitor.

So if you're busy on that Fanfiction website, you're fired.

Teacher: Make sure you record the colon, the "at" mark, and the period. Understand?

Dude, just say, type this in, do this stuff... Or check the Internet. Plus, these kids are in what, middle school? HOW DO THEY DO THIS STUFF!


"So it turns out the Yui is computer-illiterate, which I kinda am, but at least I know how to access that!"


Yui: Colon? At? What the heck is that? What am I to do?

...Really? Your dad is a tech genius! Just do what I would do! Ask him! Or at least learn some basic grammar.

Yui: What am I to do? Whoever invented the PC?

Konrad Zuse created the first computer, BUT you'll want to look to Steve Jobs for help on that. Of course, he's dead, so talk to Bill Gates!


"Essentially, Yui is so horrible at computers that she doesn't even know about computer words. She confuses 'access' with 'excess'."

"Anyways, the teacher is either a) an A.I. or b) is calling in sick or c) ...So. Freaking. Lazy. Heck, the class only takes like half a minute to finish. However, they have to do for homework. Now I might not be an expert at computers, but I'm pretty sure I can pass this class with flying colors!" Dimentio grinned, "Hey! She reminds me Clara...in the first few minutes of The Bells of St. John. Run you clever boy and remember!"

"Also, as it turns out, they use floppy disks in the far, far future of...20XX! Dimentio grinned, "...Okay, I know it was made in the 90's, but really, it's so funny that they think that we'll still use floppy disks!"


Yui's Friend: Yui, I'll see you in the library!

Don't go on any naughty sites... You know what I mean Yui! Don't go on Fanfiction or Planet Insania!

Yui: Huh, aren't you gonna help me?

Haruna (Yui's Friend): I, Haruna Kisaragi, will give you, Yui Kasuga, some friendly advice.

Video streaming is impossible, talking to people online is unsafe, revealing your real name online is horrifying, and MySpace is the future!

Haruna: Think of the computer as your friend and try finding a way to make it work.

Or you can think of it as your worst enemy and brutally kill the son of a gun!


"So instead of doing the logical thing and...going home... Yui stays there to do her 'homework' and then we see...a yellow raccoon thing..." Dimentio looked around, "Okay..."

"So as it turns out... Yui's father can't make it. Well, gee, my parents never came home... In fact, I never knew my parents." Dimentio blinked, "Yeah, I'm pretty much an orphan, but I'm sure my parents are there somewhere!" He scratched the back of his neck, "Geez, I'm sounding like a Gary Stu now..."

"Essentially, Yui is-" A demon started to beat down the door.

"This is a computer program!" Dimentio sighed as he became female, "DON'T RUN IN!" He started to shoot at the door, "Anyways, Yui's Mom says that her husband's busy. I know my mom always said my dad was busy. Well, if I had... Parents? Oh well, it's not like I'm a test tube baby or anything!"

"Oh! And here's the thing... Apparently, there's a camera phone...which uses a TV screen. That...makes no sense. There's FaceTime, but why does he hold a FREAKING PHONE!"

"So as it turns out the professor guy is driving and as it turns out there's this EVIL program that, as you guessed...wants to get these programs the professor created. He also reminds me of Bill Cipher from Gravity Falls. Well, kinda..."

(Bill: Remember, reality is an illusion, the universe is a hologram, buy gold, bye!)

"In response, well..."

(Car blows up with professor inside.)

(Goku: Dark)

"So not Bill, because right now he looks like Mewtwo. So I'm gonna call him MewBill summons a doggie called War Wolf."

There was a silence, "Yes I said doggie!"

"So at this threatening note we have... A 4KOMA!"


Yui (as father): Yui, I'll take you to the amusement park tomorrow.

Yui: Yay!

Oh the irony!

Yui: Rain...

Rain, rain...STAY!

Yui (as father): That's okay! We can have fun in the virtual reality game I created.

Yui: Yaay!

Hey! That's how I would describe you! A tool! Much like Fox News.

(Ba-dum-tishh!)

Yui (as Father): Oops, I didn't finish all my work.

Like Obama!

Yui: Aww...


"So Yui does her homework. Or is going to go to TVTropes when her computer shuts down... OR DOES IT!"

"Actually, her computer starts to speak to her... Or IR does and he reveals one of the most useful things about the Internet... STALKING!" Dimentio looked at the door, "I wonder... Can I see Steel..."

"So IR proposes that he can send Yui to ComNet and by that, I mean KIDNAP!"

"Logically, Yui says..."

(Yui: How am I gonna get inside the computer?)

"By playing League of Legends! Okay, fine it's not inside. But it sucks you in."

"Anyways, Yui makes a magical girl pose and...goes inside ComNet. Anyways, IR explains things us...and Yui. And honestly, it makes sense why there would be an info dump. After, Yui doesn't know that MewBill, also known as Grosser, is doing all of this. And he wants to RULE THE COMPUTER WORLD!"

"...Well, I heard things that he wants more than that, but that's another episode."

"So they land in Galaxy Land and Yui wants to have fun! IR...wants to be discreet... Sadly, War Wolf notices them and changes the internal clock to make it night. Like most Pokemon players do when they want to catch certain Pokemon. ...I wonder..."

"So Yui sees her dad, but her dad doesn't see her and well... The dad and his team realize... They're screwed."

"So is this the end for our heroes? Nope, it's the beginning! Although... Yui is an idiot hero! For example!"

(Yui: Desert)

(IR: Delete! As in erase completely!)

"MORON!"

"So Yui finds out that she'll probably become comatose permanently if they don't stop Grosser's henchman.. And she has to save her father too. As they decide how to save themselves and her father, Yui comes up with the idea that they use an outfit from the park."

"The Element Suit!"


Yui: The Element Suit! But...I guess clothing won't do us any good.

If this was an RPG, they could be some help.

IR: YES THEY CAN! I can use my Real Scan functioning to give it various abilities and items!

Like a magical girl!

Yui: Then can I transform?

Transform? YOU CAN SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!

Yui: Yes, I'll do it!

Well, at least she isn't making a contract with a cute alien that wants to kill everything on the planet.

Yui: A heroine of justice has to be able to transform.

She also needs to become a Witch... Like all good magical girls.


"So IR gets the data from the Element Suit and cue...the actually pretty well animated transformation sequence. It's pretty good and honestly... I liked it!"

"So IR tells Yui how to fight... With her 'positive attitude' and her guts. So Yui does just that. But honestly, Yui just twirls her wand around and well... Does...stuff."

"So she's says her catchphrase."

(Yui: Prepare to go to the trash and be empty, empty, emptied!)

"Yeah... That. Anyways, she defeats War Wolf with a good animation and restores peace to Galaxy Land. So Yui still acts like a ditz when it comes to computers, which honestly makes me wonder why she says her catchphrase."

"So Yui returns to the real world and goes on to the next episode."

"What do I think of this episode? Well... I like it. I mean, it's kinda cliché, but that's alright with me! Plus, while it's blocky and the music is... Well... Dull, the series definitely is interesting... I mean, I'm excited to see more!"

"Anyways... Thanks for reading..."

A demon burst in room and Dimentio713 ran, "SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP ME!"

He kept running until he suddenly stopped. He was now pale and had a blue jacket, with his torso showing, and strangely gray eyes. He also had very long pants. Perhaps he wasn't Dimentio713, but someone else. He took out two kali sticks. He looked at the demon with a blank stare. He jumped over the demon and started to thrust the stick toward him. The demon tried to counterattack, but all Dimentio713 did was flip backward and hit with the sticks again.

The top of the sticks opened up and suddenly let out two bursts of energy, killing the demon.


(Yui: Prepare to go to the trash and be empty, empty, emptied!)

Pros:

Cute animation

Interesting introduction.

Cons:

Another idiot hero...

Final Verdict: 7/10. It's decent. That's all I can say.

Corrector Yui is owned by Kia Asamiya

Everything else is owned by their respective owners.


Dimentio713 then woke up, back in his TARDIS.

"What was that..." He looked at the screen, "Was it a dream?"

There was a sudden rumble, "...Oh dear..."

"WHOA!" He crashlanded into his living room. He ran outside the TARDIS...which then became a dull gray.

"Geez... That'll take ages to fix..." He said looking around, "Oh, hey! I'm back at my house!" He looked around, "Hello?"

"Hello, boy."

Dimentio looked behind him to see Dimentia713 surrounded by a purple aura, "Of course... You're the-"

"Shadow Queen." She grinned.


A/N: Everything is coming to a close.