It's the final chapter! Well, no, last chapter was the last chapter. I didn't lie when I titled it that. This is just responses to the last few reviews I got, and the final allegiences for the clans at the end of this book. I THINK I got it all right. -_- I'll be writing non-stop, and I'll update this story ONE more time to let you know when it comes out, but as of your reading this, it is marked as complete.
Anyway.
iDragonSpyro wrote: "YUUUUUSSSSSS THE DOUCHE IS DEAD! ALL HAIL BRIGHTPAW!"
Reply: "YESSS
JOIN ME IN CHEERING
AND CELEBRATING
HERE HAVE A CAKE IT HAS TINY MARSHMALLOWS IN THE SHAPE OF BRIGHTDAWN'S KITS"
Featherfrost of StormClan wrote: "Can I have an Oc in the new story?"
Reply: "Hmm...well, if you'd like to submit an OC through review or PM, you can. I make no promises, however, if and where they show up, and I might tweak appearance or personality to fit in with the story and family. But keep in mind, they're more likely to be background characters."
RiverClan
Leader
Featherstar - pale grey tabby she-cat with yellow eyes and long fur (named Featherkit at birth because her ears/tail were extremely fluffy and active for a just born kitten, 1/9 lives left, mates with Snowbelly, mother of Cinderfrost, Shellwhisker, Applekit, Doekit, Creekkit, and Sootkit)
Apprentice, Shadepaw
Deputy
Rainears - dark blue-grey tom with blue eyes (mates with Lilystep, father of Swiftstep and Nightbriar)
Apprentice, Beetlepaw
Medicine Cat
Goldensky - Black tom with ginger-brown tabby-tortie pattern and green eyes
Warriors (toms and she-cats without kits)
Snowbelly - light brown tabby tom with several white streaks along his belly from a battle when he was an apprentice (mates with Featherstar, father of Cinderfrost, Shellwhisker, Applekit, Doekit, Creekkit, and Sootkit)
Apprentice, Adderpaw
Troutface - pale silver tabby tom with blue eyes and black paws (named because hes really good at catching trout, and went around bragging that he was so much more handsome than the others, that the fish leaped to their deaths for his face. Featherstar named him that to humble him, but after a while it stopped feeling like a cruel name and more like his name. Mates with Mossflower, father of Stoneclaw and Brookleap)
Frostheart - silver tabby she-cat with yellow eyes (mates with Sandstripe, mother of Brightdawn, Otternose, Scorchtail, Dawnflight, Shadekit, Hailkit, Cloudkit, and Dustkit)
Apprentice, Greypaw
Mossflower - dark brown tabby she-cat with copper eyes (mates with Troutface, mother of Stoneclaw and Brookleap)
Apprentice, Pricklepaw
Dawnpool - golden-brown tabby she-cat with green eyes (mates with Eelspots, mother of Mudfoot, Yellowstorm, Adderpaw, Pricklepaw, Lizardpaw, and Specklekit)
Apprentice, Nettlepaw
Darkstorm - black tom with yellow eyes (mates with Otternose)
Apprentice, Lizardpaw
Mudfoot - dark brown tom with amber eyes (son of Eelspots and Dawnpool, mates with Hawkclaw and Blueshine, father of Swallowpaw, Beetlepaw, and Splashkit)
Blueshine - deep blue-grey she-cat with yellow eyes (mates with Mudfoot and Hawkclaw, mother of Swallowpaw, Beetlepaw, and Splashkit)
Hawkclaw - black tom with blue eyes (named when he saved some kits from a bird of some sort-possibly a heron, mates with Mudfoot and Blueshine, father of Beetlepaw, Swallowpaw, and Splashkit)
Stoneclaw - dark grey tabby tom with yellow eyes (son of Troutface and Mossflower, mates with Mistystream, father of Greypaw, Silverkit, and Smokekit)
Brookleap - pale brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes (daughter of Troutface and Mossflower)
Apprentice, Beechpaw
Cinderfrost - pale grey she-cat with blue eyes (Daughter of Snowbelly and Featherstar)
Shellwhisker - Fawn spotted tabby tom with amber eyes (Son of Snowbelly and Featherstar)
Yellowstorm - Lilac-grey tabby tom with copper eyes (son of Dawnpool and unknown tom)
Apprentice, Lichenpaw
Otternose - dark grey tabby she-cat with yellow eyes (daughter of Sandstripe and Troutface/Frostheart, mates with Darkstorm)
Apprentice, Swallowpaw
Scorchtail - deep ginger tabby tom with amber eyes (son of Sandstripe and Troutface/Frostheart, mates with Nightbriar)
Apprentice, Tumblepaw
Nightbriar - brown white-speckled she-cat with blue eyes (daughter of Rainears and Lilystep, mates with Scorchtail)
Swiftstep - skinny white tom with blue eyes (son of Rainears and Lilystep, mates with Brightdawn)
Brightdawn - cinnamon tabby she-cat with blue eyes (daughter of Sandstripe and Troutface/Frostheart, mates with Swiftstep, mother of Tumblepaw, Beechpaw, Shadepaw, Nettlepaw, and Lichenpaw)
Apprentices
Adderpaw - dark brown spotted tabby she-cat with yellow eyes (daughter of Eelspots and Dawnpool)
Pricklepaw - dark brown tom with yellow eyes (son of Eelspots and Dawnpool)
Lizardpaw - black tom with green eyes (son of Eelspots and Dawnpool)
Greypaw - dark grey she-cat with yellow eyes (daughter of Stoneclaw and Mistystream)
Swallowpaw - dark grey tom with amber eyes (son of Blueshine and Mudfoot)
Beetlepaw - black tom with yellow eyes (son of Blueshine and Hawkclaw)
Nettlepaw - golden brown she-cat with black paws and yellow eyes (daughter of Brightdawn and Eelspots)
Tumblepaw - quite small and undersized ginger tabby tom with cream chest/belly/face and green eyes (son of Brightdawn and Eelspots)
Lichenpaw - pale grey she-cat with pale brown paws/ears and amber eyes (daughter of Brightdawn and Eelspots)
Shadepaw - extremely tiny and slender cinnamon caliby [calico tabby] she-cat with yellow eyes (daughter of Brightdawn and Eelspots)
Beechpaw - brown tabby tom with pale grey paws/tail and amber eyes (son of Brightdawn and Eelspots)
Queens
Lilystep - white she-cat with silver spotted tabby markings and blue eyes, mother of: Mallowkit (pale brown tabby she-cat with yellow eyes) and Minnowkit (grey she-cat with white patched pelt and blue eyes)
Featherstar - see leader description, mother of Snowbelly's kits: Applekit (reddish brown tabby she-cat with white muzzle, paws, and belly, and yellow eyes), Doekit (pale brown she-cat with blue eyes and long fluffy fur), Creekkit (grey tabby tom with white belly and paws and blue eyes), and Sootkit (dark grey tabby she-cat with long fluffy fur and amber eyes)
Elders
Blackwater - black tom with grey-speckled fur and yellow eyes (father of Sandstripe and Goldensky)
ThunderClan
Leader
Oakstar - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes (mates with Sedgetail, father of Birchpaw, Brackenpaw, Briarpaw, Mosskit, and Tawnykit)
9/9 lives left
Apprentice, Brackenpaw
Deputy
Robinfur - ginger tabby she-cat with amber eyes (mother of Whiteclaw, Foxstorm, and Goosedawn, father unknown)
Medicine Cat
Mintstorm - pale grey tom with white paws and blue eyes
Apprentice, Fallowheart
Warriors
Patchfern - grey-and-white patched she-cat with greying muzzle and yellow eyes (mother of Mintstorm and Shrewnose, oldest warrior in the clan)
Shrewnose - pale grey-brown tom with amber eyes (mates with Cederstep, father of Fallowheart, Pouncefoot, and Greywhisker)
Apprentice, Briarpaw
Pineblaze - dark brown tom with yellow eyes (father of Oakfur and Poppywing, mother deceased from greencough)
Sedgetail - brown she-cat with yellow eyes (mates with Oakclaw, mother of Birchpaw, Brackenpaw, Briarpaw, Mosskit, and Tawnykit)
Apprentice, Sparrowpaw
Nightpelt - black tom with amber eyes (mates with Seedstripe, father of Hollyclaw, Pricklepelt, Blackpaw, Volepaw, and Sparrowpaw)
Seedstripe - brown tabby she-cat with yellow eyes (mates with Nightpelt, mother of Hollyclaw, Pricklepelt, Blackpaw, Volepaw, and Sparrowpaw)
Cederstep - light brown tabby she-cat with green eyes (mates with Shrewnose, mother of Fallowheart, Pouncefoot, and Greywhisker)
Apprentice, Volepaw
Thornleap - brown-furred tom with white paws and chest and amber eyes (mates with Hollystar, father of Goldenkit, Scorchkit, Lionkit, and Mousekit)
Hollyclaw - black she-cat with yellow eyes
Pricklepelt - black tom with yellow eyes
Whiteclaw - white she-cat with mismatched amber and blue eyes
Owlfang - pale cream colored tom with green eyes
Apprentice, Birchpaw
Oakfur - brown tom with amber eyes
Poppywing - dark brown, almost black she-cat with amber eyes
Pouncefoot - pale brown she-cat with white chest, paws, and muzzle, and amber eyes
Apprentice, Brackenpaw
Greywhisker - pale grey tom with yellow eyes
Foxstorm - ginger tabby tom with amber eyes (son of Robinfur)
Goosedawn - very pale grey she-cat with yellow eyes (daughter of Robinfur)
Apprentices
Fallowheart - pale brown tabby she-cat with green eyes (medicine cat apprentice)
Birchpaw - almost completely white with some brown speckles tom with amber eyes (son of Oakclaw and Sedgetail)
Brackenpaw - brown tabby tom with yellow eyes (son of Oakclaw and Sedgetail)
Briarpaw - dark brown she-cat with yellow eyes (son of Oakclaw and Sedgetail)
Volepaw - dark grey tom with white paws and amber eyes (son of Seedstripe and Nightpelt)
Sparrowpaw - pale brown tabby tom with yellow eyes (son of Seedstripe and Nightpelt)
Goldenpaw - golden-brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes (daughter of Hollystar and Thornleap)
Lionpaw - small pale golden-brown tom with yellow eyes (son of Hollystar and Thornleap)
Mousepaw - pale brown tom with yellow eyes (son of Hollystar and Thornleap)
Queens
Elders
Sootleap - lithe pale grey she-cat with very pale silvery-grey paws and green eyes (younger sister to Patchfern, retired early after a bout of greencough that also killed her kits)
Rowanfur - dark reddish-brown tom with yellow eyes and grey/white speckled pelt (father of Robinfur)
ShadowClan
Leader
Sunstar - dark ginger tabby tom with yellow eyes (mates with Quicknose, father of Amberkit and Flamekit)
6/9 lives left (he's a bit of a coward, he lost two lives to greencough)
Deputy
Ravenblaze - black she-cat with yellow eyes (mother of Nightpaw, Fawnpaw, and Pricklepaw)
Medicine Cat
Sharpnose - tawny brown tom with brindled pelt and amber eyes
Apprentice, Petalpaw
Warriors
Owlwhisker - white tom with pale brown speckled pelt and yellow eyes (mates with Dapplecloud, father of Petalpaw, Silverpaw, Spottedpaw, and Specklepaw)
Toadclaw - dark grey tom with green eyes (mates with Goldencloud, father of Sunpaw, Larchpaw, Duskpaw, Newtpaw, and Nightkit)
Apprentice, Specklepaw
Stoatfur - golden-brown tom with white chest, paws, and muzzle, and amber eyes
Blossompelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with ginger paws and black ears and blue eyes (mother of Petalpaw)
Apprentice, Flamepaw
Goldencloud - pale golden she-cat with yellow eyes (mates with Toadclaw, mother of Newtpaw)
Dapplecloud - grey she-cat with white spots and blue eyes (mates with Owlwhisker, mother of Silverpaw, Spottedpaw, and Specklepaw)
Apprentice, Newtpaw
Adderstorm - pale brown tabby tom with dark brown stripes and hazel eyes
Apprentice, Spottedpaw
Lizardclaw - dark grey, almost black tom with blue eyes
Marshcry - dusky brown tom with hazel eyes
Clovershade - pale grey she-cat with white paws and amber eyes
Apprentice, Silverpaw
Dovetalon - grey tabby she-cat
Sunblaze - golden tabby she-cat with yellow eyes
Larchwing - pale grey-brown she-cat with green eyes
Duskstorm - dark golden-brown tom with amber eyes
Apprentices
Petalpaw - white she-cat with ginger, black, and brown patches, and yellow eyes (medicine cat apprentice)
Newtpaw - dark grey she-cat with green eyes (daughter of Goldencloud and Toadclaw)
Silverpaw - pale grey tom with blue eyes (son of Dapplecloud and Owlwhisker)
Spottedpaw - pale brown she-cat with white spots and blue eyes (daughter of Dapplecloud and Owlwhisker)
Specklepaw - grey tom with dark grey speckles and blue eyes (son of Dapplecloud and Owlwhisker)
Flamepaw - ginger tabby tom with yellow eyes (son of Quicknose and Sunstar)
Nightpaw - black she-cat with yellow eyes (daughter of Ravenblaze)
Fawnpaw - fawn tabby she-cat with amber eyes (daughter of Ravenblaze)
Pricklepaw - pale brown she-cat with brindled pelt and amber eyes (daughter of Ravenblaze)
Queens
Cherrydapple - calico she-cat with lots of ginger spots and copper eyes, mother of Marshcry's kits: Mosskit (black-and-brown patched tom with yellow eyes) and Applekit (brown tabby she-cat with white belly, chest, muzzle, paws, and tail tip, with amber eyes)
Quicknose - chocolate tabby she-cat with copper eyes, mother of Sunstars kits: Thistlekit (dark reddish brown tabby tom with yellow eyes), Falconkit (light brown tabby tom with copper eyes), Vixenkit (pale ginger tabby she-cat with yellow eyes), and Brownkit (brown she-cat with light brown and dark brown patches and amber eyes)
Nutstrike - brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes, mother of Ferretleaps kits: Russetkit (small reddish brown tom with yellow eyes), Oakkit (dark brown tom with light brown paws and amber eyes), Twigkit (tiny brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes), and Quailkit (brown tabby she-cat with pale brown belly and yellow eyes)
Elders
Stormheart - dark grey tom with blue eyes (mates with deceased she-cat, father of Toadclaw and Dovepaw)
Ferretleap - skinny reddish-brown tom with partially white-speckled pelt and yellow eyes
WindClan
Leader
Runningstar - white tom with one orange eye and one blue eye
Apprentice, Mallowpaw
Deputy
Swallowdrop - dark grey tabby she-cat with white paws and blue eyes (mates with Icepelt, mother of Mintflower, Haystripe, and Silvermask)
Medicine Cat
Mintflower - silver tabby she-cat with green eyes
Apprentice, Dewpaw
Warriors
Fernsky - pale grey she-cat with greying muzzle, white-speckled pelt and green eyes (mates with Webfang, mother of Runningheart, Swallowdrop, and Woollyfur)
Molefur - dark brown tom with stumpy tail and green eyes (*mates with deceased she-cat, father of Falconeye)
Apprentice, Darkpaw
Kinkear - brown tom with slightly twisted-looking ears and amber eyes
Woollyfur - pale grey, almost white tabby tom with very fluffy fur and green eyes (mates with deceased she-cat, father of Sootspots and Dewpaw)
Apprentice, Pebblepaw
Icepelt - pale silver tom with orange eyes (mates with Swallowdrop, father of Mintflower, Haystripe, and Silvermask)
Spottedtail - pale golden spotted tabby she-cat with large spots like a leopards and yellow eyes and very long slim tail (mother of Tigerkit, Spiderpaw, Darkpaw, and Emberpaw)
Heavyblaze - large, lumbering black tom with yellow eyes and long tail (somehow runs fast despite bulk, mates with Silvermask, father of Pebblepaw, Mallowpaw, and Blackkit)
Apprentice, Emberpaw
Haystripe - fawn tabby tom with hazel eyes
Silvermask - silver tabby she-cat with white mask and mantle and hazel eyes (mates with Heavyblaze, mother of Pebblepaw, Mallowpaw, and Blackkit)
Falconeye - brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Apprentice, Spiderpaw
Hawklight - brown tabby tom with yellow eyes
Sootspots - dark grey tom with light grey patches and green eyes
Meadowfrost - cream she-cat with amber eyes
Seedmoon - brown tabby with white stripes instead of brown tom
Apprentices
Dewpaw - grey tabby tom with green eyes
Darkpaw - dark grey, almost black tom with copper eyes
Spiderpaw - skinny black tom with yellow eyes
Emberpaw - black she-cat with amber eyes
Pebblepaw - grey tom with copper eyes (son of Silvermask and Heavyblaze)
Mallowpaw - white she-cat with blind blue eyes (daughter of Silvermask and Heavyblaze)
Queens
Rosetalon - pale ginger tabby she-cat with green eyes, mother of Haystripes kits: Hollowkit (dark ginger tabby tom with hazel eyes), Sneezekit (pale fawn she-cat with hazel eyes), and Sandkit (pale tan tabby she-cat with green eyes)
Rainwillow - blue-grey she-cat with hazel eyes, mother of Seedmoon's kit: Bluekit (blue-grey she-cat with amber eyes)
Wasptalon - pale golden-brown she-cat with black paws, ears, and tail tip, and yellow eyes, mother of Falconeyes kits: Sandkit (pale golden tabby she-cat with yellow eyes), Morningkit (pale brown tabby she-cat with white paws and belly and amber eyes), Sparrowkit (brown tabby tom with amber eyes), and Whitekit (black tom with white paws, belly, chest, and muzzle, and yellow eyes)
Elders
Webfang - white tom with scarred, greying muzzle and cloudy blue eyes, went semi-blind early in life and retired to elders den after several accidents due to it (mates with Fernsky, father of Runningheart, Swallowdrop, and Woollyfur)
Nightrunner - skinny black tom with white-speckled pelt and yellow eyes (mates with deceased she-cat, father of Heavyblaze and Wasptalon)
Puddlenose - dark blue-grey she-cat with green eyes and white-speckled pelt (mates with Harestar, mother of Molefur, Kinkear, Hawklight, and Rainwillow)
About to join a clan, currently staying with WindClan
Pig - pinkish grey she-cat with ribs showing and amber eyes (mates with King, mother of Prince, Duchess, Ginny, Smoky, Dew, Ginger, Cherry, Mint, Ash, and Fox)
Weed - dark grey tabby tom with black stripes
King - ginger tom purebred with green eyes (mates with Pig, father of Prince, Duchess, Ginny, Smoky, Dew, Ginger, Cherry, Mint, Ash, and Fox)
Duchess - silver tabby she-cat with amber eyes (daughter of Pig and King, mates with Weed, mother of Chicken)
Chicken - dirty white tom with yellow eyes (son of Duchess and Burr)
Madison - tiny tortoiseshell she-cat with yellow eyes and white patches
Cherry - ginger and white patched she-cat with yellow eyes (daughter of Pig and King)
Mint - grey she-cat with white patches and hazel eyes (daughter of Pig and King)
Ash - dark grey point tom with blue eyes (son of Pig and King)
Fox - ginger tabby tom with green eyes (son of Pig and King)
Off-territory loners and kittypets
Sam - pale brown tabby tom with white paws, tail tip, muzzle, and chest, and yellow eyes
Prince - ginger tabby tom with green eyes (son of Pig and King)
Thunder - black tom with yellow eyes
