Sorry if this is creepy- I'm being bold and full of flair by trying out new styles- (gives myself a pat on the head)


Prelude To Darkness

Let go of me
You're scaring me
Stop shaking me
Stop the darkness
Stop it!
I can't stand it any longer
Please, I beg you release me
He can see him all over again
HeCbr> I can't run away
I can't take another breath.
A choked sob catches in my throat-
Wildfire dashes across my vision
I reel back in pain
What have you done?
Please don't kill me
all over
again.


I have never done one like this before, so all comments would be appreciated. Drop this style or stick?