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Among the battlefield torn bodies lay in a field of bones. To the average man this sight would have caused nightmares. But to the few that had caused this sight this was nothing more than their job.

At the moment they were worried over their comrades. One lay with knives and kunai driven through her back. Pain was unknown to the person, for the world of darkness had saved her from the pain that would claim her.

The others moved slowly through the battlefield, trying to get to one of their fallen comrades. One knelt beside the person and whispered a name, then stood up and set off a flare.


"Stijn-kun! What the hell are you doing setting off a flare like that?" Shounta yelled at him. Stijn turned to her and looked at her very seriously, almost like a glare. "My onee-san is bleeding to death. What do you want me to do about it?" Stijn asked lowly in a warning.

Shounta gulped, having never seen Stijn like this before. She hated to admit it but he was scaring her. She nodded and said frightfully "Ok I get it. You were only trying to help Ayra-chan."


Stijn nodded and looked over at his sister. Slowly he turned to the others and asked "Do any of you know anyway we can help her for the time being?" He asked as he looked at the faces of his comrades.

"We could take out the knives and try to stop the blood." Lee offered helpfully. Stijn nodded and they all began to pull out the many knives and did their best to stop the bleeding. Only then did they really see how far the knives had gone into her back.

Stijn gapped at the injuries, he was amazed at amount of blood she was losing. He was amazed that she was still even alive… he wondered how she could keep going when most people would give up.


Shounta realized that she couldn't look at Ayra's injuries, and the fact that Ayra was deathly pale didn't help. Hastily she stood up and ran. While she was passing she saw all the dead bodies closely for the first time. She ran faster, going into the forest near the field… she vomited.

She didn't know how she could take that sight… even when she helped create that very sight. She supposed it was because she was feeling dizzy at seeing so much of Ayra's blood that seeing all the other bodies had made it worse.


The rest were all working quickly to cover her wounds… she was losing at lot of blood at this rate she would die in about two hours. They hoped that someone had seen Stijn's flare.

Within minutes a medic team had reached them. Two of the medic's had stayed to look over the worn ninjas, the others looked at the field of dead, searching for survivors.

They looked over the bodies to find that most of them were torn to pieces. Claw marks had covered most of them, showing that the tigers or even Ayra's new jutsu had killed them.

When the medic team had fix Ayra a little bit, Shounta decided that it would be okay to go back. When Shounta had reached the others she saw that Ayra was still deathly pale but she looked better than before.


"What happened to the others?" Stijn asked one of the medics. The medic turned to him and sighed.

"Choji-san and Neji-san are in critical condition. We were lucky that Shibi-san and Tenten-san had stopped the sound ninjas from taking them. Both of them were already weak from what we found, fighting one-on-one with a member of the Sound Four. It didn't help that they were already half-dead when the other sound ninja was dragging them." The medic started telling them.

"Shikamaru-san only suffered a broken finger, nothing to bad. Kiba-san had a wound to the side, but nothing life threatening. All in all the others are fine." The medic finished telling them.

Stijn nodded, it didn't sound to bad except for Neji and Choji. Stijn himself had a few cuts and burses, but he would live. He looked at his sister again and saw how bad she looked. Shino noticed the look of worry that Stijn was giving for his sister


"What about Ayralena-san. What's her condition?" Shino asked for Stijn, knowing that Stijn wouldn't be able to ask. The medic sighed, showing that he was tried.

"Ayralena-san has lost a lot of blood, it's very difficult for her body. We've done the best we can for her injuries, but we can't do anything about the blood lost. All we can do now is get her back to Konoha quickly." The medic finally said to the others.

"Then why are we waiting?" Stijn asked the medic, to the others he was looking at the medic in a very frightening way. The medic ignored the look and continued with his work.

"Because, there is a possibility that Ayralena-san's wounds could reopen if we're not careful." The medic replied. Shounta was getting angry, this was tacking forever that they were sitting ducks at the moment.

"Well, hurry up. We're sitting ducks here." Shounta said glaring at him. The medic rolled his eyes and worked as quick as he could.


While the medic was working on Ayra the others waited for him to finish. Lee noticed Gaara standing a few feet away from everyone else.

"Gaara-san!" Lee said greeting the silent man. Gaara turned to Lee and nodded. "Thanks for helping Stijn-san and me with that guy." Lee said smiling. Gaara nodded once more.

"It was no problem." Gaara said simply. "What is happening with the injured girl?" Gaara asked.

"Ayra-san lost a lot of blood. The medic says we can not go until they have finished with her wounds." Lee said gravely. Gaara nodded in understanding.

"I take it that Stijn-san is her onii-san." Gaara remarked. Lee nodded. "Hai. I've heard that they haven't gotten along very well for a long time, but it's getting better. Apparently they have gotten more like onii-san and onee-san senece their fight in the chunin exams." Lee told him all while nodding to himself.

"Hai. I remember their fight in the preliminaries" Gaara replied.

"Ok, we're all ready to go." The medic shouted. All the ninja nodded and got ready to finally go home.


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