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Year: 14 BBY

Chapter 29: Stopping Vader's Attempt

Jenna Farlay, a Jedi Knight that have been the 2nd and to the best of her knowledge last Padawan of Master Mark Alan Zane, walks through a small village that was about 5 miles from the place she crash. It was a very small village, maybe a quarter of a mile long. Through the Force, she senses that Nomad uses this village. Unlike most villages that the Nomads of Naboo build, this one has people living in it all year around due to it being a place where a lot of trading does.

Jenna for sure that she looks like a mess with patch up Jedi Robes that she has brought along from the other dimension. Her robes and tunic are slightly more damage due to the fact that she have crashed roughly.

She sense something very dark coming toward her. She hear bunch of screams and some people falling down to the ground dead. She looks up and sees a man in black leather and black metal walking toward her. He is wearing a golden helmet that reminds her of the masks and helmet that Mandalorians wear sometimes.

Though the Force she can sense that the Dark Side radiate off of him as if he had no ounce of Light Side to him. A being of complete darkness, which seem impossible, but she knows it true. There have been Sith in the past, well before 1000 BBY that there have very little or none lightness in them, and they were very powerful.

Even through there is something familiar about him, but it was slightly off. She watches as a bloody red plasma blade erupted through a 4 year old girl forehead as she have the misfortune to cross the path of the Sith Lord, whoever he might be.

She could sense the mother was in a panic. "Take this as a warning, stay out of my way, or you will die like this pathetic child." say Sith Lord evilly as the Force of the gravity on the dead 4-year-old girl pull her downward, which made the Lightsaber cut from the spot between her eyes, up thought her brain and out of it. Once the dead girl's body was off the plasma blade, which cut the upper quarter of her forehead, it falls down to the ground.

"How dare you attack an innocent little girl? What sick son of a bitch gets off killing a little girl!" snaps the mother. Jenna sense this was a bad move when the Sith Lord laughs evilly.

Through the Force, she can sense that the Sith Lord enjoyed taking the life of an innocent child. "Maybe, you should have taught your daughter a little bit about not closing through my path!" say Sith Lord raising his hand and used the Force.

The mother's arms went parallel to the ground with her palms facing the Sith Lord. Her legs begin to become parallel to the ground. There were a series of snaps and the mother screams in pain as her arms bent backward breaking and her legs was snapped upwards with the Force. Then with the Force the Sith Lord rips the broken arms and legs off the body of the mother and toss her down to the ground where she bleed to death. Death came to her in matters of seconds.

Jenna was paralyzed in horror of what she witness. The only Sith she ever witness battling was Count Dooku during the Clone Wars or even seeing Darth Vader up close killing people was not even a quarter of bad as this Sith. Compare Darth Vader and Count Dooku that she knows, this Sith Lord makes them look like playground bullies.

As the Sith Lord walks closer to her, she has a sense that the Sith Lord is after her. So in order to save the people of this little village she took off running back to the site where she crash. She sense more and more deaths happen to those who has the misfortunate to get into the Sith Lord way.

She uses the Force to speed her way to the crash site. Whoever the Sith Lord is, he is a dangerous one. When she got to the crash site, it was the first time she notice there was another Starfighter that crashed. Jenna toss off her patched up brown robe into the air as she draws one of her Lightsabers from her belt and activate it. A blue plasma blade erupted from the sliver hilt.

She sees the Sith Lord walk through the trail of trees. "You are monster you know that!" shout Jenna Farlay as she glance at him. "Hmm, I think you find out those who oppose me would consider that a great understatement. In their eyes, I am not a monster, I am the monster! I am going to give you a choice young one. It a life and death deal. You join me or you die." say the Sith Lord clipping his Lightsaber.

"Well, that is a simple question that deserves a very simple answer, but I think I would like to rearrange them a bit. I guess I will have to die then, but do not think I am just going to let you end my life. After all, I am a Jedi Knight trained by one of the best Jedi that have being in our order." say Jenna with pride as she brings her activate Lightsaber in front of her in a defensive state.

"Such unwise choice, no matter who taught you young one, you are not a match for me." say the Sith Lord as he uses the Force to summon his Lightsaber to his right hand. Jenna looks down at his belt and notices 4 black hilted rounded bottom cylinders that are his Lightsabers. She has seen Force Sensitive carry two but never more than two.

"My Master has trained me to deal with Sith scum like you." say Jenna looking at the T-shape visor. "Who do you propose is your Master? I bet I could easily kill whoever it is." say the Sith Lord with a sick grin on his damage face that Jenna could not see due to the face plate of his helmet hiding it from view.

"Jedi Master Mark Alan Zane! Before the Jedi Order fall, they say I was his best Padawan." say Jenna Farlay. She senses the Sith Lord was shock but at the same time pleased. "Oh, I am going to enjoy breaking you, not matter what you say, you will join me!" say the Sith Lord as he sends a very powerful Force Lightning at Jenna Farlay.

Jenna uses the Force to slide backward. When she got near her crashed Starfighter, she did a back flip and landed on the other side. She uses the Force to lift the crashed Starfighter, which is still on fire, even being on two days. Then again is has been leaking fuel lightly and slowly to keep the fire alive. She focuses the Force to ignite the flames until the whole Starfighter was on fire. She then tosses the blazing Starfighter at the Sith Lord who used the Force to bat it away as if he was batting a fly away with his hand.

Jenna was surprised when the ground begins erupting around her as if it was a volcano. This Sith is powerful indeed, but she know there have been those that is either as powerful as this Sith before back before 1000 BBY or slightly more powerful. There were a lot of powerful Sith, but they all have one thing in common, they all somehow fall. No matter how powerful they were, or how close they caused the Jedi Order to become extinct, they always somehow lose.

"Oh big deal, you can explode the ground." say Jenna as she glare at the Sith Lord. Then she was gasping in pain. It feels like someone wraps their hands around her heart. The Sith was using some type the Force to tightly grip her heart to prevent it from beating.

Her Lightsaber drop and deactivated but she use a very powerful Force Push at the Sith Lord as she falls down to the ground and rubbing her chest. Her heart still hurts. She focuses on the Force to help to ease the pain and heals it slightly. The Sith Lord was caught surprised by this.

"I told you, I was train by one of the best!" say Jenna as she uses the Force to throw back a bunch of purplish black Force Blast that was coming at her. Like her former mentor, Jenna was considered greatly talented and knowledgeable in the Force.

She let go of the Force she was using to deflect the Force Blasts back at the Sith Lord. She leaps out of the way, as the Force Blast hit the ground where she was just standing and it exploded a bit. If that were to hit her and if she was no using the Force to help to dim the effect of the Force, that would have blown a hole through her body, which would kill her instantly.

She opens herself to the Force and sense 3 strong presences nearing them. Two of them are very strong. She could sense it was her former mentor. Through the Force she could tell that he has been weaken seriously due a coma.

While she was being distracted by this, Darth Vader sends a Force Lightning at her. It barely reaches her when a tall figure leaps in front of her and a blue plasma blade erupts from a sliver hilt.

Jenna looks at the person and was shocked when she saw Anakin Skywalker's face. "I presume that you must be Jenna Farlay. Force, don't you look a lot like the one I know, beside that scar." say Anakin as he keeps blocking Darth Vader's Force Lightning.

Then leaping to the either side of Darth Vader was her former mentor, Mark Alan Zane and Obi-wan Kenobi. Looking at Obi-wan Kenobi, she notices how young he looks compare to the one from the other universe. She knows by watching some HoloNews in the nearest village that the year is 14 BBY, but still even if this Obi-wan is a year younger, he still look as he does when he was in the Clone Wars.

The one from her universe was almost all gray with just a few streaks of auburn. She figures it must because he has not had the stress of being exile. She has learned many things about this universe through the Force. She have found out that her former mentor had completed his mission and kill Palpatine and manage to change the Jedi Order to allow marriage. It was strange how the Force seems to give her all the answers. Then again, it was the Force will to bring her here.

Oh, how much she wishes she could tell Master Yoda of her universe that Mark has finished his mission. Anakin shouting at her break her out of her thoughts. When he uses the Force to throw her backwards and leap backward before the ground exploded where he was standing.

Jenna landed hard on her left arm as she went sliding to a stop. Anakin landed on his feet beside her. "You could have done it lighter!" say Jenna. "If you weren't daydreaming, I wouldn't have to push you. Now stay down, Darth Vader is not someone to take it easy." say Anakin.

Jenna eyes widen how could that Sith be Darth Vader if Anakin was supposed to be Darth Vader. That does not make any sense. "ANAKIN GET HER OUT OF HERE!" shouts Obi-wan as him and Mark is both dueling Darth Vader.

Darth Vader was having two of his 4 Lightsabers activated and was dueling both Mark and Obi-wan. He seems to be unmoving and easily fighting both of the highly trained and highly respectable Jedi Master as if it was hardly a fight. Darth Vader swings his Lightsabers downward at a 24-degree angle. Mark and Obi-wan dodges, but the tip of the Lightsaber cut Obi-wan's light brown tunic and touch his skin slightly.

"Now, Vader let me tell you something, if you ever dare to try to corrupt any of my former Padawans, I will make sure that the last thing you hear from holes in your ugly head, is my victory over you." say Mark as he uses a massive Force Push and Force Pull at the same time to strain Darth Vader's body. While this happens, Mark and Obi-wan swings their Lightsabers and cut the 2 of Darth Vader's Lightsaber hilt in half.

Then two very powerful Force Push by both Mark and Obi-wan nailed Darth Vader. Both Force Push rips the ground a bit and sends Darth Vader crashing through the trees.

Mark groans as he falls down onto one knee. Obi-wan sensed it was a weak spell; one might call it, due to Mark recovering from the coma. Obi-wan stand guard over him as he watches Darth Vader appears out the trees and sends a powerful Force Lightning. "Forgive me if this is rude, Mark." say Obi-wan as he lifted Mark up from the ground and tosses him toward the trees.

Mark overcomes the moment of weakness to use the Force to summon vines that wrap around his wrists and he swings climbs up a tree branch to rest. Mark knows that Anakin would be taking Jenna back to Varykino.

After Mark regain some of his strength back, he leaps down and begin fighting alongside Obi-wan. Mark leapt down with his Lightsaber activated he manage to slash at the helmet which did not damage it that much, merely scarred. Figures it must be something Lightsaber resistance metal.

Mark remembers what Dooku was telling him about how it seems like the armor is all Lightsaber resistance, so it is only going to be that much harder to get rid of Darth Vader. Obi-wan and him twirl around Darth Vader and try to cut him in his sides but Darth Vader used the Force to send them flying away.

When they landed on the ground the ground, which they landed on, exploded. All of a sudden, Darth Vader sensed pain. With that he smile greatly, the Sith can use hatred and pain of other to make themselves stronger through the Force.


Anakin was in the driver seat of the Speeder, which was speeding toward. How fast and recklessly he has been driving would most likely cause Mark to complain that he might be worst than Rachelle. Anakin had always been the more reckless type, coming with plan that seem would not to work. Even the Clone Captain Rex got used to them.

Right as he was heading into Theed and have to slow down, something flare through the Force as he felt Mark got hurt and Obi-wan got hurt slightly. Still there is no time to worry about that. A group of Dark Jedi, which Anakin is more than willing to bet his life on that they are with Darth Vader, was chasing them.

Unlike Mark had planned, on the way there, Anakin have to come up with a way to throw them off. He is not going endanger his wife, the possible future wife with of his former mentor, the children or Maria safety by leading a bunch of Dark Jedi to their house.

So as he approaches Theed he spins the Speeder around and went through the around the city. He uses the Force to slams the incoming Speeders into a bridge, which they exploded on contact. There was a Speeder got lucky and was not drawn into the Force that slammed the other 4 Speeders.

The engine in his Speeder explodes and it sends both Anakin and Jenna flying through the air. They both lands on their feet and activate their Lightsabers. "Master Skywalker, you will do well handing over her now." say a male Bothan as he draws his Lightsaber and activates it. A cold dark gray plasma blade erupts from the hilt.

"You are not getting her, so you might as well as leave while you are not hurt." say Anakin as he twirls his blue plasma bladed Lightsaber on his right side and in front of him while Jenna got into a defensive stance with her Lightsaber holding up diagonally from her right hand to her left shoulder, much like how Mark does it.

"So be it, Jedi scum." say the Bothan as he sends a Force Blast and the other members send Force Lightning at them. While during this a greenish blue Twi'lek male Dark Jedi tried to stab Anakin in the back. Anakin quickly spins around and slash at him. Way to fast for anyone to reacted. The Twi'lek arm was cut off 2 inches above the elbow.

Jenna then uses the Force to send the injured Twi'lek at the Dark Jedi in hopes that they will stop their attack to save one of their own. Force, was she wrong, a very powerful Force Blast that almost beheaded the Twi'lek who falls dead to the ground nailed the Twi'lek. Blood was pouring out the neck. The Dark Jedi did not seem fazed about just killing one of their own.

The Bothan slashes at Anakin. They had direct orders that if the Jedi escapes him, to only harm but not kill the Jedi he is looking for, which is Jenna Farlay. The Dark Jedi know that if she dies, they will be executed by Darth Vader.

The Bothan lunge forward, Jenna spins her Lightsaber and slashes at him. His hands were cut off and a slashed appears in his chest as he falls down to the ground dead. This seems to enrage the other Dark Jedi to find out that their leader has just been killed.

"Oh crude." say Jenna sensing they are angry. All of the remaining Dark Jedi raises their hands and uses Force Lightning mixed with Force Blasts and they were aided along with a powerful Force push. Both Anakin and she leap out of the way. Anakin leaps on the a part of the bridge while Jenna slides into the trees as the road that they were currently traveled on begin to be damage by the various of Force Blasts that were fling at them.

Jenna notices how they seem to not want to hurt her as much as Anakin. With a little aid through the Force, Jenna sense why that is. Yes, Jedi do not normally invade other people minds, but in a situation like this, she decided it is called for, to make up a plan. She have found out that their leader, not the leader they she killed, but their big lead the Dark Lord of the Sith, Darth Vader had order to bring her in alive.

She could use that in the fight. She launches out from the trees and uses the ability Force Blindness to blind them and then use the ability Force Stun. As the name suggest it stuns people. There are three levels of the spell there is Force Stun, then there is the slightly more advance ability of Force Stun called Force Stasis and the more powerful ability called Stasis Field.

Force Stasis is very similar to Force Stun but powerful it also freezes people in place, but Stasis Field is more advance because it can be used on more than one enemy at once. The stronger it is the harder it is to overcome it, but also the stronger it is to use, the harder it is to use. That is why she use bunch of Force Stun instead of Force Stasis. When it comes to Force Stun, they might be able to move a little bit but with the other two advancer abilities, they would not be moving at all.

Anakin leaps down from the bridge with a smile on his face. "Nice thinking, now let's get out of here, before it wears off." say Anakin as they begin to run down the road and into an alley.


Okay, I would like to point of something that was mention a tiny bit within this chapter. As you know, nearing 0 BBY Obi-wan Kenobi had graying hair. I figure, that it was most likely due with the stress of being a hunted criminal within the eyes of the Empire and have to be in Exile. Also throws in the problems he have with the Lars family or most likely Owen Lars who does not want Luke to become a Jedi because he believes it leads to a dangerous path.

So, I figure that without the stress, Obi-wan remain youthful. So that why even a year younger than his universe A counterpart, Obi-wan looks as he did during the Clone Wars.

Yeah I know it is kind heartless of what I made Darth Vader did to the innocent girl. I put that in their to remind people just how evil Darth Vader is, as you can see be compared to universe A Darth Vader and universe A Dooku. Serious who kills an innocent little child like that just because they walk in your way and then when that mother stands up. How much more eviler could he get.

My original plan was to have Darth Vader try to pose as Mark to trick Jenna into serving him, but would failed due to the fact that Mark shows up. I had this whole idea of Darth Vader pretending that the Dark Side and Light Side was reverse in the universe, but I decide I like this way better, having Jenna stands up to him.

Oh I am currently thinking about for a new Sith Apparentice for Darth Vader. I think it will be great that is someone could provide some ideas. I would like him/her be of a different race than a human. If you want to, thank go ahead. If not, I might be able to think of something. If I use your ideas, or base a character off your ideas, I will credit you on giving me the idea in the first place.

I was also reading about the extended version, and I am wondering about your thoughts of Palpatine/Sidious coming back to life. I will most likely make a poll out of this on my profile. Despite whatever the results are, I will decide rather or not to use it. I on the edge. Just want to see your thoughts on the subject, because I think it might make appearance in one of the future stories of this series. I highly doubt the next story in the series.

Also I wonder what your thoughts of making Anakin Skywalker a Jedi Master, no he will not be on the High Council right away. Remember just because you are a Jedi Master does not mean you are on the council. If I do make him a Jedi Master, it might be some time in the future that he might be on the High Council.

Once again I have recieve a PM asking me how many stories I am doing in this series. As of right now, I have no exact number. I plan on going on for awhile into at least into the New Jedi Order, that is if I have my ways with the thought.

Next, the ending between the fight of Obi-wan and Mark VS Darth Vader.

Until next time, enjoy.