Author's note – Because of the poll I am likely to be breaking up B:FW into fifty or a hundred chapters. I was also informed by one of the readers that they started a troupe page for this.
User Name: Oshikko
Story: Ichigo's Twin Sister: The True Story
Summary: Kurosaki 'Amity' Tomoe is Ichigo's twin sister. She thinks herself special and complains because she is so normally bland. Truth of the matter is, she is not as nice of as people make her out to be.
Rating: M
Genre: Family/Fantasy
Fan Work Number: 1.5.3
Warnings: Teenage pregnancy...
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Author's note – I am going to wait to see how Jolene Meyer's reacts to this chapter. I'm actually wondering how a few other people are going to react to this story.
Ichigo's Twin Sister
Total Disrespect
Sitting on the floor leaning against a box will only get a person so far when it comes to protesting their parents actions. Amity finally stood up and moved over to the bed and sat down on the small bed. A cloud of dust greeted her airwaves and she began to choke on the dust. She took in the length of the bed and realized that it was made for a much smaller child. Actually, it was likely the bed was used when she was younger.
She clicked the flashlight on again and looked at the bed frame and gagged. It was painted in a cute pink color and had flowers and hearts also painted on it. Her father had a major sense of lack of fashion and popular trends. She glanced out the window and then got it through her head that she could simply just sneak out of the house and go see what was going on around town. She didn't need to stay in this boring place at all.
She opened up her suitcase to get dressed for a night on the town, only to frown at the fact her father hadn't packed anything worth mentioning. "How am I to get into a night club like this? She picked up one outfit, wishing she had some sort of scissors to make the skirt shorter and the neckline reveal some cleavage. She let out a deep sigh, before putting on the dress. She opened up the door and noticed that no one was in the hall way.
She crept down the stair way and began to move through the hall when her foot suddenly hit a crick in the floor. The room to her brother's room suddenly snapped open and Ichigo glared at her. "Where do you think you are going Tomoe?"
"It's Amity!" She hissed. "Want to go to a night club with me?"
"Are you nuts? We're only fifteen." The boy let out an exasperated sigh.
"We're almost sixteen you moron." The girl stated.
"I suggest you get back up to your room before I tell dad you're up. He's upset enough, not to mention he is going to have to go to our school and register you for classes." Ichigo then paused for a few minutes. "You will be able to test into the school, right?"
"Do I look like an idiot to you?" Amity snapped the words out in irritation. "Oh wait, my brother happens to be a flake when it comes to studies and is in fact a moron and wouldn't understand what it means to be intelligent."
"I make good grades in school." The orange haired teen glared at his sister. "Seriously though... how many times to I have to tell you things that should be rather obvious."
"Loser." Amity held up her middle finger only to have her brother grab her arm.
Ichigo's tone grew dark. "If you think I'm going to let one of my sisters go out a night where it is dangerous then clearly you are mistaken."
"Then come with me."
"Not an option." The boy stated. "You know full well that I can't let you."
"I've got nothing to do!" Amity protested, only to have her brother drag her into his room. He pulled a blank journal from his school supplies and then shoved it and a pen towards her.
"Why don't you just go write out your angst upstairs keeping in mind dad and I are both guarding the stair way. It would not surprise me if he was waiting for you downstairs to make sure you don't sneak out."
"He's an idiot."
"That may be so, but you haven't been on the end of one of his sneak attacks." Ichigo stated, shoving her to the stairs.
Amity walked up the stairs and stomped on the stairs, causing a complaint to come from the three people downstairs. She honestly didn't care. She opened up her journal and began to write.
My father is the lamest person I have ever met. He doesn't get the thrill of being with the person you love simply because mother has been dead for so long. He has ripped me and my boyfriend apart so that I am now in the same situation as Romeo and Juliet. His idea is that young ladies need to remain in the kitchen as housewives. He thinks that we should also dress as if we are from a hundred years ago, prim and proper. It is absolutly disgusting.
Karin is ugly. She has this dark hair. She wasn't blessed with mother's charm and I doubt she'll ever be able to get a boyfriend once she gets older. She is WAY to ugly and WAY to into sports. She is WAY to masculine and not the ideal that a guy would want. And Yuzu... Yuzu is way to pacifistic, to much like a perfect little doll. She sits there acting like dad's fucking ideal, not to mention no guy is going for the sugar coated girl anymore. The ideal is me.
And then there is my retarded brother who tried telling me I was stupid. If I am stupid then I must be mud because his intelligence is that low. He tried telling me to do what he wants me to do and I wouldn't be surprised if he tried to rape me. He is that vulgar of a guy and he talked about sneak attacks. To note, I need to get a key to the lock on the attic door as soon as possible. I can't trust any of my family. I wish they would all just die.
Amity's head suddenly darted up when she heard screaming from down stairs. Letting out a deep sigh, she flopped down onto the bed. "Either dad is really abusive, my wish is coming true or I'm absolutely delusional."
OMAKE
"u suk" came the review from a very young reviewer.
"y" Osshiko wrote back.
"bekas u b men to jolin meier she writs lik meyr an iz betr den u" Cutie 3 Pie wrote out.
"meyr az u cal er iz a wozy writr how dost new ow to writ her boks are terible an de mak no cents at al an bela sud jus di a ling an panfl deft"
"i cant unersant whit u writ"
"Right back at you!" Osshiko stated.
Rukia then went and commented with her account Chappy Chan Chan. "I am guessing that this takes place when Ichigo and I first meet. If so, does this mean Amity is ignoring the fact her family is being attacked by a hollow? This makes me want to personally kill her!"
"Well, that is the way Jolene wrote Amity in her fanfic, but Jolene is blind to her own characterization. By the way, you are taking this pretending to be Rukia very far."
Macho Nacho then replies. "Can you have Amity have a relationship with Asano Keigo?"
"You know what... supposed Asano Keigo, I might just do that."
