Well that was a long time coming, sorry about the 2+ weeks you have had to wait. This isn't even a good chapter, it's is short and poorly written but I hope you can forgive me as the ending is only 3 chapters away and I have had homework up to my ears (Not literally) Ok so yeah...

Reviews:

Snowpelt: Won't happen in this story

AvatarCat13: Yes, yes it is

Blue: Interesting? I suppose so

Splashpaw: Sorry again that you have had to wait.

Moonblaze: They won't chase any more out

TotallyUnofficial: Ermm, illiterate? Not the right word, that means a person is unable to read or write, you probably mean my grammar is wrong, and it is, in some places but I try to spell correctly and use the correct grammar as much as I can.

Leader of the Wolves: I don't really use Starclan or the Dark forest in my stories, I don't know why but I don't. However if I do mention the Dark forest I will make sure that your OC is in there :)

Petaldawn: Yes she does but her heart stopped (She had a heart attack) and i'm not sure Starclan could fix that so she died

Dogsrule: Thank you so much, I will read your story when I have time

Purplesunrisedragon: Hmm that would be interesting but I don't think that that would happen.

DarkStormShadowClan: Wait until you start to do GCSE's (Or american equivalent) and that might happen if I ever decide to a sequel

Skystar:Too. Much. Homework...

LuvRain: Thanks.

Flamewing: I love eeyore (Don't ask me why) And about that note I would phone the FBI get them to do a fingerprint scanner (Might be a little expensive but it's worth it) collect the finger prints of all the people in you class and try to match them up, when you find the culprit get the MI5 to kill her/him (Most probably a girl) Problem solved! In all seriousness I would ignore the note and continue on my day but that doesn't always work for some people.

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Chapter 28

Darkheart watched her brother leap up and call the clan to attention. Her watchful eyes glared hatefully as he started to speak.

"I have been given my nine lives from Starclan" he shouted and the clan cats roared in excitement. Only Darkheart noticed the dark expression cloud his features as he mentioned Starclan.

"I will now announce the new deputy, it shall be…" He paused and looked up at silver pelt. "Raggedwhisker" he said finally, again his words were met with a round of cheering, cats congratulated Raggedwhisker as he walked past them and he thanked them in return. She saw Swallowshine beamed at him and gave him a comforting lick as he stood in the deputy's place. Darkheart narrowed her eyes hatefully, wanting to erase the memories of the feelings that she had of him, the way his pelt had sparkled in the sunlight and sparkled danced in his eyes, the way… Darkheart growled at herself. She did not like Raggedwhisker… not anymore. She adverted her eyes and tuned back into Lionfan- Lionstar's speech.

"-Patrol routes, but first the issue of Darkheart. I have decided that we will wage war with Darkheart and end her menace once and for all. We will battle her and then we will kill her. She has torn this clan apart and will continue to do so if we do not kill her, any who helps her will also be punished severely" he gave Tinystorm a meaningful glance but she just gave him an innocent look then, when he turned his attention away, she smiled slyly in Darkheart's direction. Darkheart, shocked, almost fell off the branch. How had she known she was there? She was well hidden, wasn't she? She told herself it was merely a coincidence and that she was really smiling to herself but deep down she didn't really believe that.

"We will start training tomorrow morning, for now we will discuss the battle plans" She slithered down the tree silently and started sprinting towards her den where her warriors were waiting. She reached it in no time at all. Firewisp, Smokefang and Hawktalon had all gone to sleep and when she entered the cave it was filled with warmth and soft snoring. She curled up, covering her nose with her tail and fell asleep quickly.


"Alright warriors" she meowed as she marched in front of the siblings.

"We have a problem on our hands, there are cats who want, and will if we let them, kill us" She let them mutter for a moment before she silenced them again.

"However, we are going to practice, and we won't stop until I am sure you will not die, let's go"

She worked them relentlessly all day, running them through various training exercises. When they tired out she would let them rest then she would start the training again.

"If we keep this up we'll be dead before the battle even start. They won't be able to kill us because you will beat them to it" Firewisp spat. Darkheart flicked her sharply with her tail.

"I'm only doing this because I care" she meowed gently. Firewisp looked up at her innocently.

"What was that?" she asked teasingly. Darkheart growled.

"I'm not repeating it"

"Oh really" Firepaw flew at Darkheart ready to knock her down, Darkheart moved at the last possible moment letting her back legs graze Firewisp's head. The sudden unbalance sent her tumbling towards the ground. Darkheart dismissed her and sent her to practice with her brothers who were messing around in the stream. She climbed a tree and sat there, watching them fight.

Do you really want them to die for your battle? Voice two asked her, Darkheart sighed and started to reply when voice one interrupted her.

It's you or them, which life is more valuable? She looked over the cats that she had raised from kits. It's you or them, the voice echoed. She gazed over them once more Firewisp had stopped her brothers from playing and was now getting ready to fight, she waited until they were fully engrossed in the sparring before she stood up, balancing on the branch.

She twisted until she was facing away from the kits and started to bounce her way through the trees away from the cats and away from her home.


I know it's a bit cheeky of me to ask for reviews after so long but... please review.

I would say that the next chapter will be up so but I have no idea when I will next be able to upload, just wish me luck and hope it is soon