Oh, sorry I wasn't here yesterday, but a little story like a trailer is up; Mysterious power; Final Reqiuem. Well, time to do this chapter as well...oh and my bad, not 100,000 words, 1000 reviews. I'd love to try to get that, so I need all your help, at the moment I estimate that milestone around chapter 77...and I doubt I can extend the story that far, so review, review and tell your pals to review.

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Reveiw Reply stop... Mei Temuri appears

Hey, what the hell are you doing here, your not even in this story?

That's the problem! I'm the most popular Kage, and I look good doing it. Why aren't I in the story!

You got mentioned...

So did Twilight

DO NOT SAY THE NAME, decides your staring in the next story

I'd better, or else I get to test Lava Release; Ball melting technique...leaves

Shiver

Review Reply, again

Vesparian; I was refering to Killer Bee, Omoi had mentioned in one of his little absurb fear spouts an alien invasion, and looks like he was right.

Hektols; I thank you. Hey, your Hektols-Senapi after all...um ignore the Tobi moment there. Resonable requests will be taken that don't deviate the story off the course

Naruhina; Hey, I kept Samui alive, and both look like their make Chunnin.

Ashley; That will come later, around Sakura's demise...confirmination, Sakura will die in the course of the story

Soulhope; Possibly,

Shadow; Thank you, the official list is Hinata, Fu, Haku, Temari, Tayuya, Isaribi, Tenten, Samui and Kurotsuchi. Of them, only Temari and Kurotsuchi are lacking the love for Naruto as of now, Tenten will show that this chapter

Monsay; Your see this chapter

Smoke; What, I find not showing the characters appearences is a bad writing trait.

Salem; Yin is in my opionion, an average release like Earth and Wind, and its a component in Aura Release. No Steel and Swift, but Lava is already in

Dbtiger; Wow, you never here that about Oc's these days

Shingami; Read the story

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The next chapter, of the Diary of Jane, begins now...hey no Fluffy phone rings

Hello

GO AWAY FLUFFY

Office of the Raikage

The Raikage was depressed. Highly, utterly depressed. He wanted to see how his beloved brother's students were doing at the Finals, but no he had to be held back, with the enemy of all civilized man.

Paperwork

This had to do with the new Genin of theirs, Dozu, who defected from the Hidden Sound. The information he provided for them on the village, and its leader, was actually quite good.

Kumo never let its guard down, the village did once in the old days, and nearly got destroyed in the old wars. That would never happen again. They'd make sure to be at their most powerful, and information was vital to that.

That was part of the reason his predecesor, his father the Sandiame Raikage, had attempted to abduct a Hyuga...and of course that didn't go well. While the Byukugan was important, it wasn't the only Kekkei Genkai out there.

Kumo had most of its Kekkei Genkai wielding Shinobi killed off during the early shinobi wars. The only ones they had left was the storm release of the Kazeran clan...and maybe the sound of Thunder as well. After all, it was a teaching style that has passed on from members of both his and his brother's clan for generations, like the 'Flames of Youth' in the Maito clan did. One apparently there had been a 'Sprit of the Breeze' 'Heart of water' and the 'Willpower of stone', but they had been killed off for some reason.

The Raikage couldn't image why

In the Tsuchikage's doctor

"Tsk Tsk, really Tsuchikage-Dono, you really need to be careful on your back" his medical nin complained. The old man was fuming. He wanted to see his granddaughter destroy Konoha nin, not get stuck with back surgery.

"You know, you really should retire"

"If I find a replacement, I will. But I haven't, so will you all shut up...OW MY BACK!"

Back at the stadium

The next match was about to begin, with Tenten staring down a always arrogant Sasuke.

"So little girl, hope your ready to loose. I need a good show anyway. And once I defeat you, you will become one my wives..."

"Yugao-chan will kill me if I let this go on...begin" Tenten promptly tossed a shurikan at Sasuke, who dodged it just as qucikly, activating his Sharingan as he did so.

"Ha, is that all you have, you little girl! Fire Release; Great Fireball Technique!" a giant fireball was spat towards Tenten, who rapidly grabbed at the scroll on her back, and unsealed the sword she used against Omoi.

"That's it Tenten, show him all your training!" Lee yelled from above. She focused her chakra flow into the sword.

"Earth Release; Earth Blade!" earth chakra flowed into her blade, reinforcing its structure and endurance. With it, Tenten slammed into the fireball, before knocking it back like a baseball.

"Nani!" Sasuke was slammed with his own fireball, flying into the wall with a giant slam, before he forced himself back into it.

"Ha, so a girl who actually can fight? Lightning Release; Surge of Lightning!" a blast of lightning chakra flew from Sasuke towards Tenten, as Killer Bee stared in shock.

"Hey, that's Samui's jutsu!" The sandiame frowned.

"This isn't going to be fun" the blast flew towards Tenten.

'Little bitch probably doesn't know Lightnin beats Earth. That bimbo is going to get fried, and then I'll really have one hot bitch' Tenten dodged the attack with swift agility, before reappearing behind Sasuke.

"Chidori!" the two attacks collided, Earth sword against Chidori. The sword held, before it was blown out of Tenten's hand and into a tree. Sasuke, with a triumph, plunged Chidori towards Tenten's heart, before his eyes went wide. Ninja wire was restraining his arms.

"Didn't expect, did you pretty boy" Tenten smirked. Sasuke smirked.

"Of course I didn't, but luckily I don't need my hands for Jutsu" he stared into Tenten's eyes, as his eyes morphed into a different shape sort of like an atomic symbol. Taisune shivered.

"Mangekyo Sharingan, so the Uchiha was teaching him" Tenten froze, trapped in a Genjutsu.

"Tenten!"

In the Genjutsu

Tenten was floating in a dark abyss, as weapons began rising forth from every nick and corner of her vision, as they began to fly at her, piercing her skin...

This was no ordinary Genjustu. The pain, it was real! She gritted her teeth, as she began to focus her anti Genjutsu training...

"RELEASE!" nothing. She tried another technique, as she found herself looking like a female Lee...to no avail. So, horror didn't work either. Then, she saw a light in the distance.

Flashback

Tenten had sought Naruto out for one reason, and one reason alone. She had waited days until he was alone, before approaching him.

"Oh, your, Tenten right? Bushy-Brows team" she chuckled to Lee's nickname, before nodding.

"Yes. Naruto-San, I'd like your help...you seem to have skills in seals, right?" he nodded. "Well, you know that seal that my opponnent had...do you think you can make something like that for my storage seals. I'll pay..." he shook his head.

"Don't, all the payment I need is the Uchiha's ass kicked. Decides, I'd hate to see someone hurt by the jerk"

End Flashback

Naruto didn't even know her really, but he had helped her regardless. And without even asking to really get payed, or asking for something possible.

Tenten knew that she probably couldn't defeat Sasuke, while he was a jerk, he was a skilled jerk. She instead focused on refining her skills to pass to Chunnin.

He did it from the bottom of his heart...and it didn't hurt he was good looking. The scroll on her back then began to hum, with a little of her chakra. She blinked.

A anti- Genjutsu seal? Why did he add that, she didn't ask him to? Or did he do it, just from the goodness of his heart? A wave of chakra burst through the genjutsu, unseen to her as slightly red, sweeping the Genjutsu away.

Real life

"Umm...winner..." Sasuke, in his momentory glory, smirked, before Tenten forced herself back into the game with an intense kick.

"DYNAMIC ENTRY!" he was sent flying into a tree. Tenten began panting, that Genjutsu wasn't pleasant to deal with, at all.

"Thank you, Naruto-Kun" wait, kun? Sasuke forced himself up.

"What, your still up. Damm girl, your breed powerful Uchiha...Passing Fang!" he flew towards Tenten in a razor spin. Kiba growled from his audience seat, and the ninja in general had a air of disdain as the attack flew towards Tenten.

"Don't think about it, bub!" she drew the Anti-Neji hammer from the scroll, and with a harsh swing, slammed into Sasuke, who was knocked into the air by it. Dropping it, she drew a dozen Kunai, before tossing them towards the Uchiha, who glared at her annoyed.

"Leaf Hurricane!" he spun around, knocking the kunai out the way with his foot before forcing himself towards Tenten

"WATER RELEASE; WATER TORNADO!" she drew a sickle like weapon from her scroll.

"EARTH RELEASE: EARTH BLADE!" with earth chakra flowing inside of it, the blade overpowered the jutsu and restrained the prick. He growled, before his eyes began changing once again.

"Oh no you don't!" a kunai was flung at Sasuke, who had to disengage the new eyes to avoid loosing them to metal. However, the distraction allowed him to escape the metal restraints.

"I will burn you alive...FIRE RELEASE: PHOENIX SAGE INFERNO TECHNIQUE!" thousands of small fires flew towards Tenten in a great armada of sparks. Tenten smirked.

"Perfect, time to show my skills" she drew from her scroll "If this doesn't make me a Chunnin, I'm screwed" drawing hundreds of Shurkian and Kunai, the metal weapons were sent flying at the sparks, colliding into each and every fire. The crowd, and judges were impressed.

"Such weapons mastery, at her age"

"Another good Chunnin in the making, the Uchiha however, is too anger prone..." speaking of.

"How dare you, you Kunoichi are supposed to be worthless, weak..." she laughed "Then why is it, that half of the finalists are Kunochi then, mr. gay man?" that ticked him off for the final time.

"CHIDORI!" the lightning blade formed once again. His mouth was agape with fury, as was his face.

"This isn't even good enough, to deal with a parasite like you, kneel beneath my feet...RAIKIRI!" the lightning attack further evolved. The Jonnin paled.

"But, Kakashi-san fled, he never taught him that! How is it, he's using it!" Hayate gulped, this was bad! Tenten held steady, as he charged at her, with true killer intent.

"Damm Uchiha, I hope Gaara-Kun can handle him" Fluffy shook her head.

"Hey, if this keeps up, he won't have enough chakra to handle him" Taisune shook his head.

"Somehow, I doubt that will be a problem. I fear Uchiha has possessed Sasuke...and most likely improved the cursed seal. That boy, I sense chakra equal to Gaara's in strength, but he will still be winded" Tenten smirked.

"Time for my secret technique" she activated the magnetics seal, as her weapons flew towards her and began swirling around her like a giant storm. As Raikiri struck, Tenten yelled out.

"Ninja Art; Metal shield storm!" as the Raikiri was held back, and more.

"What the!" the lightning, in fact absorbed by the metal and redirected, blasting into Sasuke and sending him into the tree with the force to kill a Rhino.

But, it wasn't Sasuke there, but a kunai.

"What the!"

"CHAKRA STEALING TECHNIQUE!" Sasuke, using substitution to replace himslef, struck Tenten in the breast and began sucking away her chakra, replenishing him own. An advantage with weapons users like Tenten ,is they use little chakra, but this advantage is now gone the opposite dirrection. Tenten was now approaching dangerous levels of emptiness, while Sasuke was nearly replenished, before Hayate used Substitution to retrive the girl. She was outconcious, on death's doorstep.

"Tenten/san!" Naruto, his group, and her team said concerned. The vast majority of the colloseum was now furious at the Uchiha. Hayate glared at him as Tenten was taken away for emergency treatment.

"Winner, Uchiha"

"He is truly unyouthful! Gaara-san, crush him into a million pieces!" Gaara nodded.

"It can be done" The hokage glared down at the smug jerk.

"Itachi-kun, Fugaku-san, Mikoto-chan, your son, will never be a Chunnin after that. Not while I'm around"

Oc styles.

Earth Release; Earth Sword

Rank; A

Description; Earth Chakra is used to solidify a blades power

Fire Release; Phoenix sage Inferno Technique

Rank; A

Description; Large scale version of Phoenix sage fire

Ninja Art; Metal Storm shield

Rank; A

Description; Using a magnetics seal, metal weapons forms a storm of awesome defensive powers