UPDATE JUNE 25, 2014
Hello everyone!
So I just wanted to let you all know that I'm planning on posting the new/revised version of Fire's Rose(or Love Me, Hate Me; I'm still thinking about a title change) on Fanfiction! I don't know when I'm going to post it, but hopefully it will be soon. I'm not done with the whole thing, but it's already 142 pages on Word. The original version is 239 pages on Word. So yeah. Stay tuned for updates(at goldenstainedsatin tumblr. com)!
Here's an excerpt from the revised version:
Although I will admit, Noelle's words weren't to be taken with a grain of salt.
He's infatuated with you.
They made me uneasy. First of all, a guy liked me. The last time that happened I was heartbroken and a total wreck. Secondly, Mace was a prince. I was just some girl from Florida. While commoners and royalty can get married, I'm not fond of them. Princes are stuck up jerks(with the exception of Mace) and princesses are bratty. I wanted nothing to do with royalty. The only royal that I can tolerate is Mace. He's a nice guy with a nice girlfriend. Which brings me to my third point. Mace is a prince who is dating a girl that could become a loyal, dutiful princess. I don't want to be the cause of Mace and Sari's breakup and Sari is proper and elegant. I'm not proper or elegant. Because let's face it-I'm not princess material. At all. Mace is better off dumping me in the middle of nowhere. I'm not saying this because I hate myself. I'm saying it because it's the truth. I'm not the right person for Mace. Even if I was rich and proper like a princess, Elizabeth would have my throat first. She would introduce him to Nicole and Yasmine and persuade him to marry one of them instead. Mace and I are never going to work out. End of story.
Differences:
1. Noelle(she's a new character!)
2. Olympia(or Cinderella, I don't remember what name I use in this version) doesn't hate Mace's guts
3. Mace is dating a nice and loyal girl...instead of a bitch. Will he break up with her(Sari) for Olympia? Or not?
4. Olympia is A LOT more mature. She's so immature in the original version LOL.
5. Kinda spoiler: The plot is somewhat similar up until when Olympia gets whipped. After that, everything is different ;).
6. Mace hasn't confessed his love for Olympia...yet. It might not come until book 2. I don't know yet.
So...stay tuned?
Oh by the way I changed my username to SterlingInkedSilk. :)