Alright guys, be honest with me: how many of you have cavities from Halloween? How many pieces of candy did you sneak before you went to bed? And how many pieces did you have as your before breakfast, lunch, and dinner snack?
I'm guilty of all of these.
Anyways, how ya guys doing? Ready for the cold weather a.k.a sweater weather? I'm pumped. Which also means, I'm going to do little cute short chapters of Pallie maybe on this or on a different document thingy. I'll tell you guys when I make up my mind.
This chapter is in the infamous Peter's perspective when his love is in a coma. This is how he deals with it. And yes, tissues may or may not be needed.
Also, one more thing before you continue on, this beautiful story has over 258 favorites and 268 follows. I still cannot express how thankful I am to all of you. You guys are one of the best things that has ever happened to me - considering there is some crazy shit going on in my life at the moment, and your reviews and PM's just make a smile appear on my face.
Sincerely, thank you. :)
Sσмєωнєяє Bєтωєєη Cнαρтєя 30 αηd 31: Mу Lσνє
"Tнє cυяє ƒσя αℓℓ тнє ιℓℓѕ αη∂ ωяσηgѕ, тнє cαяєѕ, тнє ѕσяяσωѕ, αη∂ тнє cяιмєѕ σƒ нυмαηιту, αℓℓ ℓιє ιη тнє σηє ωσя∂ 'ℓσνє'. Iт ιѕ тнє ∂ινιηє νιтαℓιту тнαт єνєяуωнєяє ρяσ∂υcєѕ αη∂ яєѕтσяєѕ ℓιƒє." - Lу∂ια M. Cнιℓ∂
Cнαρтєя Sσηg: Oρєη Yσυя Eуєѕ - Aηdяєω Bєℓℓє
"Open your eyes now.
Open your eyes now.
It's time to see,
if you can reach me,
Open your eyes now.
Open your eyes now.
It's time to leave,
it's time to leave me.
Open your eyes now
Open your eyes now.
It's time to see,
if you still believe me.
Open your life now.
Open your life now.
I'll try to be,
all that you need me,
to be.
She'll be a star now
I will follow her lead.
She'll be a scar now
I will still let her bleed.
Open your eyes now.
Open your eyes now.
Try to speak,
like you can see me.
Open your eyes now.
Open your eyes now.
I'll try to be,
almost everything
you need me to be.
She'll be a star now
I will follow her lead.
She'll be a scar now
I will still let her bleed,
all over me.
She'll be a star now.
She'll be a scar now.
She'll be a star now.
She'll be a scar now.
She'll be a star now.
She'll be a scar now.
She'll be a star now.
She'll be a scar now.
She'll be a star now.
She'll be a scar now.
She'll be a star now.
She'll be a scar now
I will let her bleed,
all over me.
All over me."
THIRD PERSON P.O.V
"Mister Parker," a nurse snapped for the third time, attempting to get his attention. But it was all focused all on the girl laying in the hospital bed. She didn't know why he cared so damn much about the brunette, but once she saw the tears escape from his eyes once more, her gaze softened.
The young guy - Peter Parker - had been in the same room where she laid still in coma for the past three weeks.
Twenty-one days.
Five-hundred and four hours.
Thirty thousand, two hundred and forty minutes.
And over what seemed a million plus and infinity of seconds.
She never moved. Never shifted. Never did anything.
The nurse sighed, watching the tears stream down his face, and placed a hand on his shoulder. "Visiting hours are over mister Parker. You have to leave."
He shoke his head. "I-I can't. What if she wakes up and I'm not there?
She didn't want to sound rude but her reply was, "Miss Memphis has been in a coma for three weeks. I don't-"
"Don't you dare!" Peter growled, whipping his head around to face the nurse. "She is going to wake up! And I don't care how long it takes; she will wake up."
The nurse gasped, the tears brimming in her eyes from the sudden fierceness of the young guy. It was then she realized how much he cared about the brunette in the coma.
Peter sniffled, running his fingers through his messy hair. "I-I'm sorry. It's just... I... I-I miss her so much."
She nods, understanding the whole situation of how he spent his whole day in the small hospital room. "It's alright. What's her name?"
He looked back over to his love, his eyes relaxing as he saw her chest rise and fall. "Hallie. Hallie Memphis."
"I noticed a ring on her finger," she said, referring to the said object on the young girl's finger. "Are you her husband or...?"
"No," Peter shoke his head. "I'm her fiancé. I proposed to her a while back."
"She said yes." the nurse observed.
And for the first time in a those miserable weeks, a small smile appeared on Peter's face, as he remembered when she said yes. Her large smile that showed her dimples and her bright golden brown eyes, that made his heart flutter.
"Yeah, she did. It made me the happiest man in the world."
She chuckled, patting Peter's back, before saying, "Just have faith mister Parker. She'll come back." and left the room.
Peter went back to the uncomfortable plastic chair near Hallie's bed, and sat down, grasping her hand tightly in his. He laid his head on the hospital bed, stroking his thumb along her had, whispering over and over again, "I love you," as if she could hear him. If only she did, he thought.
xxXxx
The hero found himself in front of his uncle's grave, sitting Indian style in front of it, and tracing his fingers along the engraved writing.
Luke had finally coaxed him out of the room to get some fresh air, so he could take over to watch over his sister. Peter agreed, but went to a much sadder place: a graveyard.
"Hey uncle Ben," Peter greeted, sniffling. "I hope you're doing alright... I-I'm uh, not. I wasn't able to save Hallie in time and now..." he rubbed the tears from under his eyes, "and now, she's in a coma."
Peter sat in front of the grave in silence for what seemed like hours waiting for any type of response, even though he didn't intend to get one.
"Hey, Parker," he turned around at the sound of his name and saw a tall girl with long blonde hair, brown eyes, dressed in blue jeans, a thick brown jacket, orange scarf, and black boots. He recognized her as Hallie's best friend, Julia. "I don't think we've had a proper introduction. You are my best friend's fiancé after all."
She joined him on the snow covered ground, holding our her hand. "I'm Julia Delmore. Hallie Memphis' best friend."
He chuckled, shaking her hand. "I'm Peter Parker. Hallie Memphis' fiance."
"So," the blond crosses her arms, "would you care to explain how my best friend is in a coma? I know my Halez is clumsy, but I didn't know she was that clumsy."
Peter shoke his head. No wonder those two were best friends... "You remember that electric guy fiasco a while back?" Julia nods. "Well, being stupid, Hallie and I tried to stop it, considering we knew how too. And, she kinda hurt herself in the process. She fell from a couple of stories. Luckily I was there to catch her in time."
Julia had her eyebrow raised, as if she didn't believe one word of it. Peter gulped. "Look, mister Parker," she jabbed her pointer finger in his face, "you don't ever let my brownie get hurt like that. Tell her that it's fucking crazy and that it's for the police to handle-"
"It's all my fault," Peter interrupted.
The blond's eyes softened as she shoke head, protesting, "N-no, it's not-"
"But it is! You're right!" he said. "I should've never let her come along with me or even let her get mixed up with this. I should've..." the tears started up once more, "I should've fucking done something..."
Julia bit her lip, taking a shaky breath as she felt tears become to form in her own eyes. "Peter," she placed a comforting hand on his shoulder, "it's not your fault. If anything it's mister electricity's fault. You two were just helping out. Don't... don't ever blame yourself, or so help me, I will slap you. Because you know, Hallie wouldn't want you blaming yourself for it."
He looked down to the snowy ground, "I know."
"Go." Julia spoke, her voice firm, like a mother's ordering voice, telling her kids to do their chores.
Peter looked over at the blond. "Go where?"
"Disney-world? Where else, dumbass?" Julia chuckled, standing up and wiping the snow from her jeans. "Go see Hallie. Right now. Say what's on your pretty little mind. They say that even though people are in coma's, they can still hear you."
A laugh escaped Peter's lips; the first laugh in months. "Thanks Julia-"
"Julez." she interrupted. "Call me Julez like everyone else does. And I expect an invitation to the wedding."
After she left, Peter finally stood up, looking down to his uncle's grave. "See ya soon, uncle Ben."
xxXxx
As soon as he entered the hospital, he got a pass from the front desk to visit Hallie's room, and headed straight for it. He stopped instantly in his tracks when he saw Luke in the room, speaking to someone. But he was the only one in there besides... Hallie.
Peter's eyes widened as he moved past the nurse and doctors in the hallways and pushed open the door. It seemed as if time slow as Luke moved out of the way to reveal Hallie.
She was awake. Her skin looked somewhat pale, but her gold eyes were full of life. Peter's breath caught in his throat as their eyes met for the first time in what seemed like forever.
He wanted to speak, say something, but he couldn't muster a single word. He heard Luke say something before leaving the room.
Instead of saying anything, Peter rushed over, holding his love in his arms. He held onto her, embracing her warmth, burying his face into her neck, his lips pressing a small kiss to it. He felt her heart beating beneath his chest, making a smile appear on his face.
His Hallie was alive. And that's all that mattered.
Aw, this was adorable! Hope you guys liked it and the little bonding moment between Julia and Peter.
What are your guy's prediction for the Amazing Spider-Man three? All I'm thinking of is how they're going to introduce Mary Jane because they were going to have a scene in the second movie but it got cut for some reason.
Alrighty, love ya guys! See ya soon.