Hello guys! Thanks so much for reading my story thanks! Also thanks so much for the reviews last chapter you all were so concerned for Connor it was so touching thanks! So yeah… Chapter 34!
Chapter 34: Kayleigh's pov
Ever since the prince had collapsed a week ago the selection was put on hold, because how could you have a selection for the prince without the prince. So far me and the other girls have just been hanging out in our rooms or the women's room. It was extremely grim and quiet since he's been gone because we all felt upset and scared for Connor.
The king and queen kept telling us he was in the same condition but I have a feeling they just aren't telling us everything. We were allowed to see him for the first two days then after that we were told we couldn't visit him anymore.
Aubrey's pov
Connors condition has been steadily growing worse. He was still unconscious and his heart was starting to fail. They don't know if he will wake up from this. Mom had us tested but none of her other kids has the heart disease except Connor.
I was so worried about him and hardly left his hospital room. I was panicking because if he didn't wake up either I or Cameron would become the ruler. Dad said he could change the law so that I could be queen but it would take time that he doesn't know if he has. It was so nerve racking not even knowing if I have to be nervous or not.
It was awful thinking about becoming queen. I hated even thinking about it because it meant Connor would uh you know. I couldn't handle losing Connor.
All the relatives had come to visit during this hard time. Aunt Kenna and Uncle James were here with my cousins Astra and Leo. Aunt May and her husband Uncle Zander, they had a 5 year old and Aunt may is expecting another before Christmas.
Uncle Gerard was also here with his fiancé Annabelle. She was nice enough but I just got a vibe I didn't like her. I put on a act for uncle Gerard though because I love him, he's that crazy fun uncle everybody has. Everyone came except for Kota though. I didn't even call him uncle he was practically disowned from the family and didn't even care that his own nephew was dying.
My aunt Marlee and Uncle carter also came with there two kids. Kile and Josie they were both odd but it was nice they came. The reason they are called aunt and uncle is because Marlee is practically moms sister, they are really close.
I also heard that Daniel would be coming again and I didn't know how to feel about that. I should be happy but under these circumstances I just didn't know. It was like they were all coming for a funeral, like they were planning it already.
I stopped talking again. I'm not proud of it I just, I can't. I just can't take this. I hated all of this I just wish he never got this darned disease. It was just awful, that's the only thing to describe it.
Maxons pov
I was stressing about everything. All the in-laws were here and my aunt would be coming soon with her kids as well. We had a full house to say the least. Not only that but I still had to figure out the law for inheritance so Aubrey could be queen. I tried to drown myself in work so I didn't have to think about Connor but I found myself breaking into sobs for him at random times.
America still blamed herself about all this despite me and her family telling her it's not her fault. She only had her siblings now because her mother passed about 15 years ago. It was nice they all came to support us but it made my job about 20 times more stressful. I hated all of this.
It was awful to even think I had to replace Connor for king but the country needs to live on. I hated myself for thinking like that but I know it's the truth.
Havens pov
The selection has essentially been put on hold because the prince is still in his coma. I heard a rumor that they were preparing Princess Aubrey for the crown and they expected Prince Connor to die. I had no idea what would happen to all the selected if he did… Pass. We were all still hoping he would come out of this coma but after that he could have another black out at any time. Even if he did survive this the selection could be canceled.
We had all gotten into the habit of taking out dinner to ours rooms because nobody came to dinner anymore anyways. We would be alone in the dining hall because all the royals ate in there rooms or together in the parlor on the third floor.
The royal extended family was here and it made me extremely uncomfortable, like they knew he was dead already or something. It was scary to think about him dying and I noticed me and the other girls were all kinda depressed now a days. I knew we all had feelings for him.
America's pov
We had all driven ourselves up a wall. My family had come which was nice I got to meet Gerard's fiancé for the first time. She seemed nice enough. I was just always upset now and I could tell everyone else was as well. Things had gotten very depressing in the palace.
I was sitting with Connor like I usually did in the morning, I had developed this habit where I would talk to him. It is believed people in a coma can hear there surrounding which was silly sounding but it was the only sliver of hope I had left.
I was holding his hand while telling him about how much we all missed him, when his hand flinched. I didn't notice it at first then I realized he was moving. He's moving! I quickly called a nurse to fetch the doctor and she ran off with a smile. Everyone on the palace was pulling for him.
By the time the doctor came in Connors whole hand was slightly shaking. The doctor however didn't look excited. He looked sad in fact? I thought this was a good sign? "No, this isn't good!" He almost yelled to himself.
He quickly pulled a few nurses over and they escorted me from the room. I had no idea what was happening. Eventually a nurse came out and said "I'm sorry to get your hopes up your majesty, he is having a mini seizure in his coma state. It means the disease is progressing faster then we thought." I almost broke. So he wasn't waking up but getting worse? This is bad, horrible.
Finally after quite a few shouts from his room they let me in. They almost lost him. However the heart machine saved him. I prayed that he didn't die, he was to young. I knew of he would just wake up from this he could get better. I just need that one wish to come true.
I knew this would push the advisors over though. If this disease was progressing fast they would never let him ascend the throne. However if they never asked I wouldn't be lying right? I wanted more then anything that me passing on this god awful disease wouldn't be the reason Connor couldn't be king. He deserved it and I know he would offer so much to this country if he could just get better.
It has officially been 8 days and some odd hours since Connor collapsed and he still wasn't awake. I knew if this went longer then a month the advisors agreed to send home the selected girls because there was no point in them being here especially if they were going to strip Connor of being king after all this. I hope they won't though.
After a moment I realized I was letting these horrible advisors run my life! They were deciding if my son was getting his throne he rightfully deserved. They were deciding how he found his wife and how he should proceed with his own selection. They have been pushing around this family for long enough.
I knew Maxon was probably in a meeting with said advisors so I stormed in to the main board room where they held all meetings. I was lucky and they were all there. Maxon looked surprised to see me and his eyes shun with hope. He probably thought I had news about Connor sadly I didn't. I ignored Maxon and stared down everyone of those stupid advisors.
I was so filled with hatred towards them, they were always deciding my life and I wouldn't take it anymore. "You may all leave, your fired." I said at all of them. Maxon started to argue but I cut in "no they have been pushing around our lives for long enough they do not decide my sons fate." And that was that Maxon agreed with me and all the advisors left with grim looks and stomping feet like 4 year olds.
After they left all the anger was deflated out of me as I remembered what triggered the anger. Connors seizure. He was getting worse. "I can't believe I just did that." I muttered and Maxon nodded. And whispered "good job" I knew he felt the same way. They had always pushed us around and I simply got sick of it. Sure they had some good aspects not many, but some. We probably needed some new advisors with fresh ideas that wouldn't try and just pull the plug on my son any chance they got.
Me and Maxon decided to head back to Connors room and check up to make sure everything was ok. When we got there all the family was in the waiting room. I didn't know of that was good or bad. After I finally pushed through my hordes of family and made my way into Connors room I burst into tears.
Ok so yeah cliffhanger. Lol yay! So yeah thanks for reading!
1.) What do you think? Is he awake or… You know not :(
2.) What did you think of this chapter overall?
3.) What is my writing missing? I feel like I don't have enough dimension but I don't know what to add? Any advice accepted thanks :)
So yeah chapter… As you can tell I have no idea what to say I know I'm awkward lol.
Suzannaheath- I have some surprises in stock (muhahahahaha) evil laugh if you couldn't tell. It's really hard to translate evil laughs without context lol. Yeah that was weird it wouldn't let me log on and I was like seriously! I gave you both ;) Aubrey and two elite so yay! Thanks so much for all your kind words like I can't even comprehend! I love the Big Bang theory so much! Ah when I first started watching I hated Sheldon so much because he's so smart but so stupid! But lol I grew to love him and Shamy ;) lol so cute!
Orangerosey32- I'm sorry but I actually forgot about the vascular surgeon thing I'm super sorry but sometimes I even get the girls mixed up lol I'm so jumble minded I can't remember very much about each girl so I always look back at the pm from the writer to see stuff about her. But that's cool I didn't think about her being a heart doctor it might be helpful if they get married ;) thanks so much!
Deeptha13- thanks I read your story and loved it! But you already knew that cause I entered a girl ;) lol yeah that was weird about not being able to log on but at least it's fixed now ;)
Daniagogo- yeah… Yeah. Ok then awkward start but hey awkward is my middle name ;) I totally get what your saying about Maxon and I would love to include him more! Thanks for the idea! Thanks so much for being your awesome self like always :)
MABubbles- I know what story your talking about cough cough DIVERGENT! Cough. I have tricks up my sleeve ;) thanks for reading and being so concerned for him like I know you're a true fan when you write in all caps "DON'T LET HIM DIE!" Lol thanks you're the best ;)
Well yeah… Thanks guys. Wow I'm so awkward today like even more awkward then Connor… Wow I need help lol bye guys thanks! Please review and favorite/follow thanks!
