AN:
Alright, so as I've seen, there are some debacles as to how short and perhaps sloppy this last chapter was. Let me just say that I know it seems messy and thrown around, but there is a purpose I swear! I wouldn't throw out a curve ball like that at you without having a good reason to do so! I had written it the way I wanted it before and realized that it was massively huge and annoying and that people would probably fall asleep reading it.
So here's what's going to happen. Each character, main character is going to have a flashback of the battle in their own viewpoint, showing what they were dealing with by themselves. Then there will be a final say on what happened from Neara's viewpoint when she approaches her father, telling him how she had come to 'defeat' them. I hope that clears some things up and I am not, I repeat, I am not out bashing the reviewer who came to me and posted this. It was by their review that I did notice that perhaps this chapter was like a slap in the face and jumpy.
So I thank you reviewer for that! I hope this clears things up and you are all ready for the chapters that will follow! I promise, well I hope, they won't disappoint!
Also everyone, here you can tell me anything that's on your mind about my story. Critiques any and all are always welcomed! It's a mix of the good and the bad that helps improve a story...not that there is technically a bad review, in my mind there isn't, they are just the opinions of another and opinions should be valued. So as I said, tell me exactly what your thinking whether it be ,"WTF JUST HAPPENED" or "OMG I LOVED IT!" or whatever ok!
What you have to say means a lot to me, so I just wanted to get that out there and again thanks to the reviewer who posted their comment, you know who you are! :)
Ok guys, I'm gonna go, I will begin posting those chapters that way you all won't be so confused! Again if my idea messed you up a bit, I'm sorry!
Turion