So I recieved two guest reviews saying how my characters names were 'unoriginal and overused'. The first review:
:WTF?! Are you like OBESSED with the name KAYLA HUNTER?! Kayla is a stupid
name and was the name of the person who used to bully me at school.
This story is written well, the grammer is AMAZING but I'm sorry, this is my
opinion you have to get a better plot line.
For example there is this girl called Kayla **ing Hunter and she loves Seth
blah blah she grows up fights some people THE END
THAT SHOULD HAVE BEEN THE END OF THAT STORY! SHOULD HAVE LEFT IT THERE BUT NO
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE WRITING THIS **ING PIECE OF BLOODY **. THIS IS NOT JUST
**, IT IS THE ** OF ** THAT A BABY PUKED ON, OKAY. PEOPLE ARE JUST SAYING THAT
ITS 'GOOD' CAUSE THEY FEEL SORRY FOR YOU. THIS SUCKS DICKS.
(The grammer is very good btw, but the plot**ING **. Also get a new name for
your charcters cause it seems like you have no imagination.) OH AND ANYONE WHO
USES THE NAME KAYLA IS A **ING **. THERE PARENTS SHOULD DIE IN A CRAP FILLED
HOLE. KAYLA SUCKS SHE IS LIKE A BELLA. STUPID STUPID STUPID **ING BELLA.
My response:
I'm not obsessed with the name Kayla Hunter. My real name is Kayla and Hunter is the last name of my best friend. I'm sorry you got bullied but you shouldn't bully others. Thanks for telling me my story is amazing... then you bash on the plot line? I mean you just said you liked it and yet you didn't? And it's not continuing Kayla's story, her's is done. The next one is Embry's then Leah's so I am not leaving it there. Whats with all the *? I mean you use cuss words like dick but not fuck? It gave me a headache trying to read it. If people feel sorry for my bad plot then I won't have 80 reviews on I'm Still here, 13 on Not One of Us. If I make new names and backgrounds for characters it involves lots of explantion and gets confusing with all the stuff I have already. My parents was actually going to name me Shayla( and I'm soooooo glad they didn't) but even though I don't like them 24/7 they shouldn't die in a hole. And lastly why do you read my story but hate Bella?
Ending conclusion of Guest reviewer: Go tell it too someone who cares.
Second review by probably the same Guest:
:Hey, yeah you. You are a **. My best friend, ElectricSocks (that's not
actually HER name but still) cried after you posted this. SHE HAD NOTHING TO
DO WITH THIS, OKAY YOU UGLY **. YOU CANNOT WRITE, YOUR 'KAYLA' is pathetic.
It's Bella but weaker. You made a Mary Sue and it stinks. You are a **ing **
okay, That is the bloody truth. Your 'friends' are saying oh don't listen to
them blah blah blah.
By the way, just because you are ** at writing does not mean that you cannot
become an actress or whatever. You just **ing suck at writing. That's the
truth, the cold hard truth.
You are a **, a **, a **, a **, a ** and a **ing piece of **. There you go,
END OF STORY **.
My response: Okay ElectricSocks and I have no hard feelings, it was a misunderstanding. I'll PM her and ask if she really did cry and I'll apologize. Kayla is not a Mary Sue, she has so many flaws.
1. Ears don't naturally go backward
2. Scared of her father and Alpha's
3. Not fast like the other's
4. Always very proud of herself and thinks she can take on anything(deadly pride).
5. She doesn't have enhanced hearing or eyesight.
6. Dresses like a tomboy
7. She's a Pure One
8. Lastly she has sea-green eyes which is supposed to be blue.
Bloody? You're english yet you can't write english? Okay... moving on. I admit my writing was bad, it's because that was my FIRST STORY. I'm currently editing it and I'm getting better by the day. My Creative Writing teacher is trying to help by making me practice grammar and spelling, learning more advanced and better word choices and plot development.
Ending conclusion of Guest reviewer: Why do you even exist? Cold hard truth
Third review by yet another guest *sigh*:
:OMG YOU **ING IDOT. WHY DID YOU EVEN CREATE ANOTHER ACCOUNT AND STOP USING
THE NAME KAYLA CAUSE IT SUCKS DICKS JUST LIKE YOU.
My response: Well I am a girl, so you didn't insult me with the dicks part. You called me straight, THANKS! By the way I made a nother account fo my boyfriend to use(but now he is using mine :P)
Ending conclusion of Guest reviewer: Your Caps key is broken
So I am actually really calm despite seeing those reviews. I'm going to Pm ElectricSocks and ask her if she really was crying and hopefully she wasn't. To the Guest reviewers, you are too scared to use your real account and you hide behind a guest one, come out of your bitch hole and tell me to my account. Rant over.