Hello everyone!
Wow, has it really been almost ten years since the Wizards of Waverly Place premier; five since it ended? I'm assuming most of you know a reunion is in the talks and I have my fingers crossed that it will happen. Over my winter break I caught an episode on Disney Channel and then proceeded to find the entire series on Demand and binged watched it in a week. I knew the show was good, but watching it again and maybe since I'm not 20 and not a young teen, I realized just how good the show really is.
Anyway, after binge watching the series, I decided to reread my fanfiction. It's awful…thank you for sticking with me at the time. Even though I still have much room for improvement, I have come a very long way. I've decided to rewrite this fanfiction. I'm hoping this will be of interest to you guys.
I've already been at this for some weeks and although the main plot idea is the same, I have made some major changes for writing improvement reasons. However, you guys are amazing for sticking with me through my amateur writing and I open it to you to let me know if there is anything you would like me to still cover in the story. Or it can be something I didn't cover that you would have like to have seen (Ex: an aspect/factor of eating disorders or abuse).
The one thing I really would like to get your opinion on is the pregnancy. In the original version, she finds out she is pregnant after false tests (which I'll have to research more because I don't know if that is even accurate) and then Mason tragically causes her to miscarry. The way I've originally written it is not very realistic-not necessarily the events themselves, but the way I've went about them. I'm back and forth between making her not pregnant at all and that is what I would like you guys to let me know: Do you prefer whether or not she gets pregnant?
If you do want to keep the pregnancy, do you want me to keep the same (or very similar) events of the original? Do you want her to miscarry/lose the baby another way? Do you want her keep the baby?
This message was not this long in my head. I look forward to hearing from you guys and I will keep you posted on when to expect a remake!
P.S. Those who've read my Another Cinderella Story fanfics, I'm also considering rewriting those