Guys I'm confused I have an idea...some thing nt love story but have a hero and heroin...
It will have domestic violence, widow remarriage, superstitions related to woman and many other issues.
This girl will not need a hero to support her; she will be self sufficient...
But there will be a support fr her...a male...
No not her lover, it's not needed na that a male and female can only be that...
So are you all ready to read the story? then I will seriously think about it
pls comment to let me know ur opinion...I have the charecters in my mind and everything but just want to know that it's neither an frnshp stry nor a love story...still are you all ready?
Prachi arey itni patience..bapre...yea me too eager fr romantic end but mere dimaag pey mera bas nahi..hheheh so wait and see!
Rajvi Fan I have seen this pic in forum, checked in YouTube and twitter also..it's shared by Vikas sir only..fr YouTube u can search with "rabani in Johnson baby skin care wipes add".. Twitter ka link yaad nai..haan unki Wikipedia mey spouse name nahi hey
Daisy kbe bie hlo janina, khoj o krini..Vikas Kumar er fb page a pic ta frst dekhechilm, then YouTube a video..wife er pic o dekhechlm..link vul giya..sundr dekhte so dukhito hobar karan nai :p! Ar ki ami cute?hey bhagwan ai maiya ta ki boltase.. R update er jnye ato byakul? Are regular to di..
Parijat yaar sbko unki marriage mey itni interest..yea log celebrity ki prsnl life leke itni kiu sochte hey
SHZK Khawish puri ho gayi?
Rabbiya I didn't get the meaning of your rvw
Mistic Morning arey ata FW er ACP thori hi..r Abhijeet ke chara story ki kre likhi bl
Guest dear Ragini Rashi ki apni ma hoti to obviously situation thora dfrnt hota..fir bhi ager galti apne ma baap se bhi ho to dusre parents dosh dete hi hey..yeaha taq yea ek bara reason hey humare society mey jhagre ki.. Aur jab aapki pass sabot nahi ki Rajat uss waqt kaise behave krta hw can u say him selfish? Situation ko imagine apne kiya, apne khud socha wo kaise react krega to aapki soch mey wo selfish hey..story meine likhi, mein uss situation ko kaise imagine krti yea aap nahi jante to aap mere story ki hero ko selfish kaise keh skte hey?
Sayani see the above..info mil jayega
Sunshine Dayerya, Guest, Cadbury's fan, RK Sweety, Bhumi, Sree, LoveAbhi, Guest, Soni, Vaiba, Harman thank you
Let's move in the chapter
as Abhijeet came out of the cab both Purvi and Rajat came forward..
Purvi was bit fast and softly touched Rashi's back..
Rashi in half sleep forwarded her hands with "mummmaaah"
purvi's eyes filled with tears and she picked Rashi from Abhijeet
Rashi wrapped her small hands around purvi's neck possessively and tightly
Abhijeet turned to pay the cab
Rajat moved towards Purvi "Rashi beta ajao yeaha papa ke pass"
Purvi looked at Rajat with hurt, Rashi gave a glance at her father but again shifted back to her comfortable position..
Rajat touched Rashi's arm and was about to take her when Rashi suddenly cried out..
Abhijeet freeing from the cab turned to them and stopped Rajat as "Rajat kiu jabardasti kr rahe ho bachi ke saath..abhie abhie to ek trauma se gujri hey..uspey dabav mat dalo..chalo ander..Tarika doctor se baat ho gayi?"
"haan wo wait kr rahe chalo"
abhirika moved inside
Rajat is standing at his place looking at Rashi but with lost eyes and scowl on his face
Purvi looked at him, then sighing deeply moved inside
Vineet moved to Rajat "sir..Rashi abhie dari hui hey..use abhie uski ma ki jarurat hey aap bekar mey..."
Rajat just sighed and moved inside, Vineet followed
here inside Rashi is very reluctant to let the unknown doctor touch her
she now wide awake "Pubbi ghel..ganna..ghel.."
Purvi made her sit in the lap with "beta yea gande nahi ache hey..aap baat manlo bahut sari chocho denge.."
"naiiii"
Tarika sat beside her with "Rashi beta aapko dald hey na?yea na magic jante hey..sb dard phull ho jayega.."
"nai..ghelll (she noticed her father entering so forwarded her hands with) papppaa"
Rajat picked her up "kya hua meli beti ko.."
"ghel..."
Vineet made a face "guriya aapko yaad hey papa jab gande logose fight krke ate they unhe ek ache wale uncle se milna hota tha?"
Rashi nodded..Rajat added "to Rashi ne bhi fight kiya..use bhi milna hoga na?"
again a nod..
"to chalo hum sab milke milte hey.."
"pel agal yea mala to"
"kaise marega aapki papa hey na aapke saath?tab to papa nai they na isliye gande log agaye they aab nahi ayenge"
Rajat sat down with Rashi in his laps
doctor started his job, soon he finished with "externally koi injury hey nahi..aur internal injury ki bhi filal koi symptoms nahi hey..per halka sa bukhar hey aur bachi bahut dari hui hey..officer koshish kijiye filal aap dono jitna waqt ho sake bachi ki saath gujare"
Rajat looked at Purvi, she was already looking at him..both quickly averted their gaze and nodded
aftr some more advice they came out of the cabin
Rashi moved back to Purvi..
Vineet offered as "mein aap dono ko chor deta hu..raat bhi ho gayi hey"
Rajat nodded and turned to Tarika with "tum.."
Abhijeet cut him "tum gher jao, hum chale jayenge..aur mein sir se baat kr lunga do teen din gher pey hi raho"
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Rajat was sitting on the passenger seat, Purvi on back seat with Rashi..
Vineet aftr a short silence asked "Purvi Rashi so gayi kya?"
Purvi shook her head "hmm"
she seems to be in deep thoughts so Vineet glanced at Rajat who too was in his trail of thoughts
soon they reached home and aftr dropping them Vineet moved
entering inside Purvi asked Rashi as "beta aap kuch der papa ki pass ruko mein aapke liye kuch acha sa le ati hu..bhookh lagi hey na meri guriya ko.."
but Rashi hugged her tightly with "nai..nashi ko dall"
Rajat moved forward with "Rashi papa ko kissy nai degi?papa kitne roye Rashi ke liye pata hey?"
Rashi looked at him fr a second then moved to him, hiding her face in his chest
Purvi moved inside kitchen..
Rajat sat with Rashi in his laps..
Rashi is still in her fear so she silently kept her head on his chest..
Rajat was softly patting her head "beta aap aise kabhie nahi jana..pata hey papa kitna darr gaye they?"
Rashi looked up
"aap kiu gayi thi beta game chor ke?"
"teddy bula laha tha..nashi ne Pubbi ko bulaya..nai nai"
Rajat kissed her head "koi aise bulaye to nahi jate beta..log gande hote hey.."
Rashi again hugged his neck tightly..
He kept caressing her softly in silence, then moved inside with "chalo aab Rashi ki dress bhi ganni ho gayi..aab spongy spongy krke achi si frock pehenegi Rashi"
Purvi was busy in kitchen but heard the whole conversation
"sach mey mein ek ma hone ki farz nahi nibha payi..ager Ragini hoti wo kya Rashi ko aise chor jati?nahi..mujhe haq nahi hey sir ki aur Rashi ki jindegi mey rehne ki..sir bhi to kitne naraj hey..ek bar bhi baat nahi ki..sahi bhi hey..unki beti ko itne khatre mey dal diya meine..mein.."
she shook her head in determination and completed her work
then moved to bedroom with vegetable khichri and gajar raita..both of Rashi's favorite
getting inside she found Rashi has already changed her dress and also Rajat has freshened up
now both are in front of Ragini's photo
Rashi busy in playing with Rajat's hair and Rajat in silent conversation with Ragini
Purvi softly knocked at the door
"pubbbbiiii"
Rajat too turned and came to bed, taking it as green signal Purvi entered inside and sat at the edge of bed started feeding Rashi
the way she ate really brought tears to both Rajat and Purvi, Rashi was truly hungry..
Aftr ending with her dinner Purvi was about to move to take Rashi but Rajat stopped her as "aj Rashi mere pass rehegi"
Purvi stopped and was about to move out with tray
but Rashi stopped her
Purvi looked at Rajat..
Rajat took a deep breath and left Rashi..
He was about to move but Rashi clutched his shirt with "nai..papa..pubbi nashi"
Rajat tried to say something but Purvi interrupted with "acha thik hey Pubbi bhi Rashi aur papa ki saath hi rukegi per yea kitchen mey rakh k aye fir.."
Rashi aftr thinking fr a moment nods
Purvi moves out..
Rajat picked up Rashi with "to aab Rashi ko neeni knni hey na..chalo ankhe bandh.."
"nai..dall"
Rajat sighed and started strolling with her narrating a tom and jerry episode he had watched with her a week ago
but she was alert..waiting fr a few moments when Purvi didn't turned up Rashi got restless "Pubbi..Pubbi ko ne gaye wo ganne"
Purvi was actually standing just outside the door thinking weather to enter or not now entered hurriedly with "nahi beta kahi nahi gayi Pubbi yeahi hey.."
Rashi moved to Purvi who laid her down to bed sitting beside her
Rashi called "papa..ayo"
Rajat came forward and Rashi pointed to other side of bed
Rajat sat there smiling
Purvi smiled "aab papa bhi agaye Pubbi bhi hey aab ankhe bandh.."
Rashi closed her eyes but opened it the next moment "papa"
Rajat kept a hand softly on her back "mein hu beta aap so jao hum kahi nahi jayenge.."
now Rashi closed her eyes peacefully
Rajat kept patting her back and Purvi was caressing her hairs softly murmuring
UMM RONA NAHI RONA
UMM UMMM UMMM
CHUP HO JA MERE SHONA
UMM UMMM
purvi's voice chocked..Rajat looked up..but she had already controlled..Rajat just turned away..
NINDIYA RAANI LAYEGI
HMMM HMMM
PALKO PEY SAPNE SALONA
HMMMM HMMM
RONA NAHI RONA
UMMM HMM
RONA NAHI..RON..AA
Rajat was looking at Rashi, feeling a sooth in him..unknowingly both Purvi and his hands touched
both moved away their hands with a jerk
Rajat got up from bed and was about to move out
Purvi too got up..
"sir"
Rajat got up wearing a scowl on his face
"mall mey jo hua..(she stopped looking at Rajat, his expression didn't reveal anything)sir mein Rashi ki ma banna cahti thi per sayed mein uss layek hi nahi hu..mein..aap dono ke liye musibat nahi lana cahti thi..mujhe lagta hey mein sayed kabil hi nahi hu iss rishte ki"
she looked up hoping fr one positive word..but Rajat's frown went deeper "mein kuch samjha nahi"
"aaplo ager lagta hey mein reason hu Rashi ki musibat ki to mein aap dono se dur chali jaungi"
Rajat looked at Purvi fr a second calmly "jaisa tumhe thik lage"
HUM THE JINKE SAHARE
WOH HUE NA HUMARE
DOOBI JAB DIL KI NAIYAA
SAMNE THE KINARE
HAI SABHIE KUCH JAHAAN ME
APNI YEA KAMNASABI
HUM KO NA KUCH BHI MILA HAI
and moved out
Purvi remained standing there like a statue..
He doesn't care a bit..she stays or not..people have more attachments to pets than this..
Seriously love can't be forced..
She have to move away..with his memories only..
She turned to Rashi and sit beside her..feeling someone near Rashi cuddled to her
Purvi wrapped a hand around her hiding her face in Rashi's hair..
She is really unsuccessful in her love..then now and always..
PASS AYE...
DOORIYAN PHIR BHI KAM NAA HUI
EK ADHURI SI HUMARI KAHANI RAHI
ASMAAN KO ZAMEEN, YE ZAROORI NAHI
JAA MILE...JAA MILE
ISHQ SACHA WAHI
JISKO MILTI NAHI MANZILEIN...MANZILEINNN
her tears started loosing themselves in Rashi's hairs..
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Rajat entered the study room and sat near the chalk mark..he didn't wipe the mark..
"sahi bhi to hey..mere jaise kharus ki baatein sun ke Purvi kyun rahegi..pata nahi kya khyal aya tha use jo yea kadam utha liya..mana to kiya tha per"
he sighed "tumhe to pata hey na bahut rude hu mein, achi baat bhi rudely hi krta hu..per yea mera fault hey wo kiu pise..sahi faisla liya usne..jane do"
he pressed his forehead
"ek adat..tum galat mat smjhna..ek adat ho gayi thi..gher ayunga to firse koi hey..subha der ho jaye to firse koi sare intejam kr dega..tumhari tarah daantti nahi thi..per kitchen mey kaam krte krte kaafi jor se barabara ti thi..aur Rashi..sach mey mujhe pata hi nahi chalta tha Rashi ka sab kaise ho gaya..meri duty bas kuch der uski saath khelna aur subha uthana...baki kaise kab.."
he leaned back on wall "Rashi bahut miss kregi..aab to itni dari hui bhi hey kaise sambhalunga.."
he again sat straight "ager yea separation hua to kahi Rashi ki custody..court ne kaha tha watch rakhenge..aur ek cid officer pey watch rakhna bhi to easier..nahi bahut swarthy ho liya..aab nahi..jana hi behtar"
he leaned on wall and touched the floor "yaar akhir use itna bura kiu laga?galti ki thi na Rashi ko aise akela chor ke?keh nahi sakta mein?koi haq nahi ki galti pey kuch keh bhi saku?..per nahi sahi bhi hey..Purvi ne mere aur mere beti ke liye itna kuch kiya uski bad mein use kuch kahu wo kyun bardash kregi..har cheez ki ek limit hoti hey.."
he closed his eyes "mein bhi Purvi ko iss zanjir se ajad kr dunga..jab use wo ijjat de hi nahi paunga to uski jindegi kyun barbad krna..Rashi meri jimmedari hey uski nahi.."
a strange smile came on his lips "jab mera pyar ne hi mujhe dhoka de ke nikal liya to aur kisise kyun mangna..Ragini tumne hi wada nahi nibhaya to aab.."
he closed his eyes tightly trying to stop the tears
EK ADHURI SI HUMARI KAHANI RAHI
ASMAAN KO ZAMEEN, YE ZAROORI NAHI
JAA MILE...JAA MILE
ISHQ SACHA WAHI
JISKO MILTI NAHI MANZILEIN...MANZILEINNN
both have the tears..for each other..but both were unaware..
Will this tears be fruitful? Yea sailab ban ke sab baha le jayega?
So stay tuned
R and R