Oh my freakin gosh its MEEE! HI THERE! I know… been sooooo long…. Sorry peoples… I just was so busy and thinking and such… but I decided to get my lazy ass started on the next chapter since its been, like, 2 months.. but hey, I'm here now! And I'm still alive! So no worries. Now, I'd like to respond to some reviews as well with some confusion or asking questions:
Yelkcub Loohcs Eht wrote: I've had trouble following Why is Kairi So Mean?
Why is Axel a pervert?
How come Kiara wasn't your first choice to avoid confusion?
Is Sora older?
Just wanted to know. Thnxs. Bi!
Ok well kairi's mean cus well… she just is lol… and shes pissed cus Sora left her. Axel's a pervert because he seems like the perfect character to do that. The first time I saw his face, I didn't even know his personality, and I was like "ok he looks just like that part" sorry for Axel fans… and then I played KH CoM and he was like a rebel and stuff so it was perfect. Kyara wasn't my first choice cus I didn't know what to call him… all I knew was "BHK". Then I heard rumors that it was "Kyara" and then I heard it was really "character" in Japanese but I thought "oh what the heck ill use it" and so that came in the story when I found out. Read more of the story and you'll get what I'm doin. Sora IS older… he's like maybe 16 now. Yup! Hope I answered your questions!
EVA-666 wrote: erm, i think the BHK is named Roxas. Also, i believe the release date for the ENG KH2 game is sometime during March. Nice story, keep updating
Yes, now I know his name is Roxas, and I'll fit that into the story somehow… maaahahaha…. You'll see. I got it all planned out. And yes, the KH2 OFFICIAL release date is March 28th. Yess.. oh and thank u for saying my story is nice.
the randomfreakyreviewer wrote: Oy, ya know what? i think this clone thing is going to your head, no offense. i just think that- wait, you've already beaten the... Neverland thingy? i NEED HELP BEATING HOOK! i'm a wuss, i know, but... i've tried like, 3 times and i just can't beat him, as for this Riku problem, try leveling up ,like, to level 200 or something, that ALWAYS works in KH, if not, then i can't help you with pure common sense...
well… yes, I'm sure its gotten to my head. But ya know what? At least I enjoy writing my story. And if you still need help on the Hook level, um… oi I forgot lol sorry…
as to all other very kind reviews THANK YOU SO MUCH! U GUYS MAKE ME CONTINUE TO WRITE IT! hehe. Eegads u guys are so awesome. Well, here is the chapter. Please don't be pissed if its not as long as you expected cus its at least SOMETHIN and I plan to write more sooner. I don't wanna have u guys wait another 2 months lol… enjoy!
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Chapter 36
(POV: Jessica)
I ran faster than I ever had before. Why did I run? I was scared. I was scared of my friend. How does that work? How can you be SCARED of a FRIEND? Friends are supposed to be anything but scary. No matter how long we had been friends, no matter how much we knew about each other and our weaknesses, I was still afraid of Molly. She had yelled at me before, so why was I running? I did not know.
I didn't even know where I was running TO. I suppose I was going to the organization building, but I was way off on the direction. I kept running… and noticed I wasn't only running from Molly.
I was running from the truth that we were in trouble, and that Annie could be dead at this very second. I didn't know if Sora was there, if he really was helping her. I slowed down and sat up against a tree, the bark poking my sore back. That's when I noticed it. A piece of cloth was shown beneath the leaves, and I stuck out a hand to pick it up. The fabric was black and rubbery, the same material as an organization cloak. I dragged the cloth out of underneath the leaves, brushing off some dirt. It WAS an organization cloak!
My mind fluttered with unpleasant thoughts of somebody dead, but I saw no decaying body or bones in site. I ran my fingers over the slick leather material, my hand feeling over a small metal bead strung on a piece of string from the hood. I put the bead in my hand and turned it over, noticing something small engraved on the side. I held it up closer to my eyes and read the name.
Roxas.
I never heard of somebody named Roxas… it was an interesting name. I set down the coat and stuck a hand inside the pocket, wondering if there was anything else inside that could tell me of who this person was, or why they had just abandoned their coat in this cold, dark forest. My hand felt over a small piece of paper and grasped it, pulling it out. Sure enough, written sloppily, was a name that made my heart beat faster.
Jessica
I could feel my face getting hot with embarrassment. Why was my name written on a piece of paper inside a person named Roxas's coat? My mind raced with ideas that could be possible. Could he be an assassin, out to kill me? Could he be just a regular person who forgot the name of one of the princesses and wrote it down to remember? Or… could this be the jacket of… my REAL protector?
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The two princesses had left… and now Namine' was all alone… with the two boys. Once she thought they were out of sight, a deviant smile spread across her face, the angelic appearance disappearing completely. What fools, she thought, that they would leave them with me. My acting skills once again prevailed over the weak and oblivious. Quickly, the blonde put her index finger against an earpiece hidden behind a lock of her golden hair.
"They've left. The coast is clear." She said, and waited. As she looked at the peaceful boys, she couldn't help broadening her smile. How clever was this plot? Namine', AKA Organization member #14, had finally recovered the escapees of the Organization. They must have been fools as to think they could leave without being caught…
A whizzing noise behind her announced the presence of her master. She quickly stood up to bow deeply to the mummified figure before her.
"Namine'. You have done well." A deep voice came from behind the red wrapped face, and pushed past her to the figures on the ground. "Did they suspect anything?"
"I don't believe so… though the short blonde one seemed the slightest bit uneasy…" as she said this, Diz turned around to face her, anger in his eyes.
"So they did…" he said, and as Namine' realized what she had said, a hand came across her face hard from her master. "You were NOT supposed to lead them on, Namine'! You will fix it! Right away!" he said, and grabbed the collar of her dress, thrusting her away from the bodies on the ground. "GO FIND THE BLONE AND GET RID OF HER IMMEDIATELY!"
Namine' stood horrified for a moment, hesitating. Diz approached her again, lifting his hand to warn her, and she stumbled back into the forest, running.
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Wowsers… um… my above authors note was long lol. But yeah. Please review! Oh and my writing skills have improved I think since last time so I'm gonna try to write better in terms of putting less mushy stuff in cus yah… some of my other chapters had a little too much fluff for my liking lol…
