Okay, time for the next chapter to be written...this was done earlier but a screw up in the uploader has delayed it.
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Rixel; Naruto is naturally a overly good person, and would hate to see people hurt unneccasaringly. Hey, what do you mean by, web of women, its not like he traps them, they come to him
Spider; Hey, how many times do I have to tell you, I can't kill him, yet
Harlequin; Well, as a easily bashed character, he leaves a lot opened for that
Vfsnake; You guys really have one track minds, don't you?
Hektols; Thank you, and yes, no Chunnin Sasuke
Naruhina; That sounds like something out of VFSNAKE's story...
Samurai; Technically, being in a fight, that's sort of not possible. Kumo can't get reprecussions from just that
Suno; Is it really that bad? This is a bashing fic, and this is not canon. And let me point out, Yugito is practically twice his age, and Hanabi's Konohamaru's age
Sage; Hey, they are combined only like 300-400 words on averae. And as to Gaara, he isn't completely healed...your see that in his fight with Sasuke, Naruto doesn't have god level skills. If it wasn't for the seal activating from Taisune, he would have died against Suien, Naraka Path, Umibozu and Kankuro-Uchiha, Nine tails or not. Decides, he still has his anime personality, and its limitations. You know, the whole would sacrifice 100 for 1 thing. There is more. In the show, he did singlehandidly crush all six paths of Pain in a span of minutes that the entirety of Konoha couldn't over come in hours, overcome Kakuzu who even Kakashi and Team 10 together failed to, defeat Gaara with only two jutsu really at his disposal, defeated Kiba and Neji with just one...he's not that much different from Canon. To an additional note, Naruto isn't able to use the Kyubbi's power like the one tailed form or initial form due to the seal he has, not until he has all the kekkei genkai. Oh, and your see some fleshing out later on, trust me, there is more to Sasuke and Sakura than truly meets the eye.
Bascially, MOST EVERYONE GOT A POWER OVERHALL! HINATA AURORA RELEASE, SASUKE'S SHARINGAN INCREASE, GAARA'S WIND TRAINING, KANKURO TEMPORARLY BEING UCHIA POSSESSED, SAMUI USING NINTAIJUTSU...
Shinigami; Hey, I'm trying to keep him from being a god, no more than what he has.
Bored; I happen to like his work, thank you
Okay, let me comment on something i've noticed. It is the craze of high school, modern world Naruto fics
What is the point of that? Who thinks Naruto in a uniformed school is interesting? I at least find that strange. And then you have the crack slash fics everywhere.
Damm episode 3, if that accidental kiss never happened, we'd have a much lesser infection.
Oh, and I had found a really good writer on called XedAlpha some time ago. You see, some time ago I noticed my little sister reading a book series called "Percy Jackson", and curiosly I examined the series. Not bad really, but the Fanfiction section of it is infected with weak self insert stories. However, this guy's series Broken Bow is actually quite good quality.
From the inside, I will write this story, but wait, inside of what?
Konoha Stadium
Kurotsuchi and Naruto stared one another down, the thrill of the fight filling the air. Kurotsuchi seemed to be giving up odd amounts of killer intent.
Naruto wasn't quite sure how he'd pull this off. This girl was powerful, and he didn't have the same ace that Fu had
Flashback; training
"AHHH!" Naruto was flung off the top of a cliff by Jiraiya. For a week, they had been trying to get the Nine Tails chakra, but nothing he, the pervy sage, or Fu reccomented was working. So, Jiraiya had this brilliant idea, that deathly perril would be the way to go.
However, he made the mistake of doing this where the girls were in eyesight of him...
"NARUTO-KUN...ICE RELEASE; Ball Implosion..." Jiraiya welped in pain, before poofing into smoke. They groaned in annoyance. The pervert was getting smarter at avoiding them now.
"AGH, Summoning jutsu!" a giant poof of smoke filled the area, as a great purple shape lept out of the chasm, with Gamaken the armed toad lept into the air and landed with a shake, leaving Naruto behind on the ground before poofing away. The real pervy sage then appeared via body flicker.
"So, that didn't work either did it?" the trio glared at him, as did the observer...stalker...Hinata. She had been observing most of their training sessions, and now knew their secrets, the kekkei genkai and tailed beasts. Not that she had anything against that, she did come from a clan whose traditions were demonic enough, not to mention the pervertedness. Not that any of them knew this.
"But why can't I call on the Kyubbi's chakra? I did against that puppet guy?" Naruto pouted. Jiraiya appeared to be in thought about this, before he had an hypothesis on the situation
"Perhaps its the seal that gave you your kekkei genkai" he surmised "you do say that you always appear to gain new powers when in crisis" they nodded "that would normally be when the kyubbi chakra would be released. The seal must filter it out, while you get healed, your unable to access it normally. As to your battle with Kankuro, he might have temporarily deactivated the filter, I don't know"
End flashback
Without the Fox's powerboost, he'd be weaker physically then when he was fighting Kankuro. For that reason, Kurotsucih will be prepared for a stronger Naruto, thus overprepared now.
"The third match; Kurotsuchi of both scales vs Uzumaki Naruto; Begin" Shino blinked.
"That's bad" Haku, Fu and Hinata stared at him in confusion.
"Huh?"
"Both scales, that's the title of the third Tsuchikage of Iwa. That means she's related to the man, an immensely powerful shinobi with a kekkei tota called Dust Release. While it is a very difficult one to use, an issue with it is it can breed related Kekkei Genkai, such as..."
"LAVA RELEASE; LAVA GEYSER!" out of the ground below Naruto, a huge burst of Lava surged forth, which he barely avoided. Shino sweatdropped.
"Lava release..." Hinata gasped.
"Naruto-Kun" Fu shook her head.
"This is probably going to be tough...wait if Kurotsuchi can...can Hinata do something similar with her Aurora Release" Shino contemplated.
"Yes, with training" Hinata smiled slightly. Perhaps watching Naruto-kun did more than fill her in on his secrets.
"Okay, you asked for it...Aura Release; Aura Sphere!" the blue sphere formed in Naruto's hands, before the attack was sent surging forward towards Kurotsuchi, who smirked..
"Earth Release; Rock Fist" the sphere was shattered with shere force from the rock covered fists, before she flew towards Naruto for a blow.
"Shadow Clone jutsu!" naruto formed a shadow clone next to him quickly, as a spiraling blue sphere began to form in Naruto's hand. While he did have some training, his chakra control was still lacking some finess, but still the results were unmatched.
"RASENGAN!" with a spin, the shadow clone spun him foreward. The blue spiralings sphere glowed as Naruto struck into Kurotsuchi's attack, creating an explosion. Both were thrust into the air by the shere intensity of the attack.
"What power, was that one of the Yellow flash's" Kurotsuchi wondered, before doing several rapid handsigns.
"Fire Release; Dragon Flame Jutsu!" The dragon of flames blew from her mouth, flying towards Naruto. He did several rapid handsigns.
"Aura release; Aura bubble!" naruto was quickly encased in a bubble of chakra as he was blown into the wall, before Kurotsuchi appeared next to his weakened bubble with a body flicker.
"Hello there...Earth Release; Rock Fist!" Naruto was pounded with the rock enhanced fists, his shield breaking as Naruto was sent flying to the ground. Kurotsuchi flew towards him once more, with rock fists ready. Naruto rapidly improvized.
"Scorch Release; Humidity Force!" a great wave of heat flew from Naruto, striking Kurotsuchi. She began to sweat heavily. Temari blinked.
"Wait, scorch release! That's an extinct, Suna bloodline!" Kurotsuchi began sweating, as the sweat pored across her rock fist jutsu, the sweat causing the rocks to be lossened. He then did a few more handsigns.
"Fire Release; Fire ball!" a fireball was formed in Naruto's hands, before it was chucked straight into Kurotsuchi, who was sent into the sky. Naruto did a few rapid handsigns.
"Shadow Clone jutsu!" three more Naruto clones appeared, with the fourth catching up. They then began to charge up ball jutsu, including one with wind and one with spinning dust.
"Wind Release; Wind Ball!"
"Earth Release: Dust Ball!"
"Fire Release; Fire ball!"
"Water Release; Water ball!"
"Lightning Release; Thunder balll!" all five ball attacks were sent flying straight at Kurotsuchi. She was hit by all five, before dissolving into mud.
"Mud clone!"
"Duh..Fire Release; Intelligent hard work!" a fire ball was sent flying towards the Naruto's.
"What sort of Jutsu is that, with such a ridiculous..." Kiba commented, before the flames exploded into a huge fireball, destroying the clone narutos' while the original barely avoided it.
"Oh, guess its not" Naruto then grunted.
"Not bad...but not so good as to say I'm done...Water Release; Water Wyvern Jutsu!" a water dragon flew from Naruto proper, flying at Kurotsuchi
"Ha! You'd use such a weak jutsu against me? Fire Release; Dragon Flame Jutsu!" the two release dragons collided, before the fire dragon overpowered the water one and flew at Naruto.
"That was unexpected" Shino surmised.
"Troublesome, a powerful woman"
"Lightning Release; Shock Palm!" Naruto palmed the dragon, destroying it before charging at Kurotsuchi and delivering a round house kick. She bent over, and gave him a left hook, which he blocked with one hand before punching her in the face, before she dissolved into mud.
"Not again"
"Yeah, again...LAVA RELEASE: LAVA GEYSER!" a burst of lava flew from below Naruto, forcing him to have to move back to avoid being deepfried.
"Not this time yellow boy...Lava Release; Lava geyser field!" hundreds of lava geysers burst forth, engulfing the area in nearly endless lava. The judges were shocked.
"What powerful Genin this time around. Amazing chakra levels, powerful arsenals, and perservierence to boot. This year will be a memorable one, if what we've seen so far is held"
"Wind Release Wind Fleets...Wind RElease; Rising wind fleets!" using the wind release, Naruto took to the skies, dodging the lava with the grace of a lopsided vulture.
"Yeah dobe, show off how pathetic you truly are" Naruto spotted her, in the only part of the battlefield lacking lava. He grinned, before drawing several Kunai, and throwing them straight at her.
Hearing their approach, she disengaged the lava release and jumped out of the way, before Naruto landed in the same spot with a jutsu driven vengence.
"Lava Release; Tunneling Eruption Fault!" nothing appeared to happen, but in the meantime Naruto wasn't lax.
"Shadow Clone jutsu!" eight more Naruto's appeared, before a few handsigns were done.
"Wait, that's..." Haku gasped
"Ice Release; Demonic Ice Mirrors!" all around Kurotsuchi, mirrors of ice started to appear around her, as the clone Naruto's entered the ice mirrors reflections...
"ICE RELEASE: ENDLESS RASENGAN!" the clones, working in teams of two, alternated between using and forming the Rasengan, before flying from spot to spot, with the rasengan activated. All the while, impacting into Kurotsuchi.
"This boys chakra reserves...unreal...Water Release; Water Encampment Wall!" around Kurotsuchi, a wall of water rose up, becoming a alternating shield to block off the attacks of Endless Rasengan.
"What the, water release too!" Kurenai gasped.
"What a battle...these two will become legends" the Sandiame prophecized.
"This battle, so many stratagies, counter stratagies, and their sheer power...they both are more like Tobektsu Jonin then Chunnin" the judges commented.
"I didn't even think of that...its amazing when you combine endless potentail with endless imagination with a hint of genius innovation" Taisune remarked.
"Naruto-Kun" Hinata said in amazement.
"Yosh, If I don't do nearly as well as Naruto-san is, I shall capture Tora the cat with nothing but dental floss and a tangelo!"
"Um...is that normal?" Haku asked his teammate, who sighed.
"Sadly, yes, but how is it that boy...is the deadlast of his year?"
"The dobe isn't so great" Sasuke huffed.
"Hey, at least he doesn't grope his foes or stab them with assassination jutsu's" Neji growled
Kurotsuchi continued to use water encampment wall to stop Endless Rasengan, before the ground began to super heat.
"Crap" she groaned, before she shifted her water wall, as a burst of lava flew from below. Shikamaru blinked.
"How did that..."
"That Lava release is a delayed technique. Naruto-kun planted it just in case she could block his attacks" Haku commented, just as a Endless Rasengan attack managed to strike Kurotsuchi, and send her flying, before another impacted into her, and another...
"LAVA RELEASE: RING OF FIRE!" via chakra, a huge ring of lava was blasted from her, striking into the mirrors and clones, melting them as it continued straight at Naruto, before a tendril of lava from his earlier jutsu rose up to block the attack, and was assimilated into the attack.
"Crap!"
"Naruto-Kun!" the attack flew straight towards him. He grimaced.
"STORM RELEASE: GREAT TWISTER!" Naruto formed a twister around himself before gliding straight into the attack. Killer Bee blinked.
"What's flippin, that's our Kekkei Genkai!"
The Twister struck the lava and incorporated it. He yelled in pain.
"STORM RELEASE: LAVA STORM!" the now lava storm jutsu slammed into Kurotsuchi, sending her flying into the wall. He collapsed to the ground, covered in several burns.
"Naruto-Kun!" they said alarmed. To add to the issues, the Kurotsuchi he had struck was melting into mud.
"Crap..." now both of them were panting heavily.
"Time to end this, yellow flash child! Lava Release; Lava impalment!" Kurotsuchi impacted into the ground, as hundreds of lava spouts flew up from the ground towards him. Taisune twitched.
"Urg...well it appears its time to unlock, his only natural Kekkei Genkai" he closed his eyes. "Hate to see him die here...RELEASE; ALPHA RESTRAINT!"
Inside the seal, one more segment was revealed. This one, was labeled Teleport...
The attack impacted into the ground, where Naruto had been...
"Wait, what!" Kurotsuchi yelped in surprise, before a flash of yellow formed above her, from which Naruto emerged. She blinked.
"The Flying thunder god..." the crowd was shocked.
"Wait, that was the Yondaime's..."
"But he used it..."
"The blond hair..."
"No, it can't be possible!"
"The brat...is the Yondiame's..."
"The Yondiame Hokage, had a son!" Temari gasped
'"Troublesome, how did I miss it" Shikamaru said shocked, as to everyone in the stadium who wasn't already aware, it looked as if an image of their former Hokage was overlapping Naruto's own appearance.
"TELEPORT: TELEPORATION RUSH!" Naruto punched Kurotsuchi in the gut, before warping and kicking her into the air, before impacting again, and again. Lee blinked, as did Guy.
"That's...like the Primary Lotus (Aka, the move he used on Gaara in Canon)" after several kicks, he appeared above her and slammed kicked her, sending her flying to the ground with amazing speeds...before teleporting down below and doing a quick jutsu.
"Substitution!" he substituted himself with Kurotsuchi, landing on the ground with a plume of smoke, as Kurotsuchi collapsed from where he had been. The judges blinked.
"He saved her life...that landing would have killed her"
"Impressive control" The audience blinked. The boy had saved his opponent from dying...would a demon really do that?
"Why...?" Kurotsucih asked confused. He shrugged.
"Hey, I don't have any reason to kill you. After all, this is only a test. Hate for you to fail it by dying" the girls sighed. Naruto's kindness never made their job easier, he just unwittingly got more girls.
"Idiot dobe"
Hayate, who had briefly body flickered to the Sandiame's side, reappeared below.
"Winner, Namikaze, Uzumaki, Naruto"
New Techs
Aura Release; Aura Bubble
Kekkei Genkai (B)
Description; A protective bubble is formed via chakra
Scorch Release; Humidity Force
Kekkei Genkai (C)
Description; The humidity in the area is increased
Wind Release; Wind ball
Rank C
Description; Compressed air is formed into a ball, before being sent at a foe
Earth Release; dust ball
Rank C
Description; Earth chakra is turned to dust and compressed into a ball, before being sent at a foe
Lava Release; Lava Geyser Field
Kekkei Genkai (A)
Descrption; Multiple lava releases lava geysers are activated at once
Lava Release; Tunneling Eruption fault
Kekkei Genaki (A)
Description; Lava is sent underground, burrowing tunnels before erupting from above at random intervals
Ice Release; Endless Rasengan
Kekkei Genkai (A)
Description: A combination of Ice Mirrors, Shadow Clones and Rasengan to bombard foes
Lava Release; Ring of Fire
Kekkei Genkai (A)
Description; Lava is shot from all sides to melt all in its path
Storm Release; Lava storm
Kekkei Genaki (A)
Description; Its user is surrounded by a lava storm. The user suffers burns from use