Okay, I'm not giving up on this story :) But I am going to rant XD Okay, Reviews while I love and adore them I don't like ones that are just like "Awesome" I want to know what you felt liked and hated :) please so not hold back in them! I love to see what you think :3 I would love to be a writer when I get older and would really love a long review :3
Not only that I've been receiving a lot of hate mail T.T now it doesn't hurt because there trolls but they do make me upset when they saw that they have been reading and then it got stupid when I added Dick or put the Joker back in, Don't they understand what movement is in a story? I can't just have Becky and just write romance.
And a lot say that the characters are "OOC" Are they? I'm not sure :/ maybe you guys could help me out with that XD But anyway that was my rant and hopefully a bright look on more updates in the future :) and because I'm awesome and you guys will go look at my videos I'll give you a preview of the next chapter AND even let you pick the name ;)
AND I ALSO HAVE A FICTIONPRESS IF YOU LIKE MY WORK ON HERE THEN GO CHECK OUT MY ORIGINAL WORK :D
She felt like a five dollar hooker, and she was dressed like one to, Standing in front of a full figure mirror Becky scowled at her appearance.
Wearing a tight black midriff with red and black diamonds on the side and tight black pair of jeans and matching black knee-high boots, Becky needless to say was not happy.
Her hair tied tightly into two pigtails and her face made up to look like a mix of her parents, plain white like her mothers, with bright red smile with red lipstick, she sneered "I don't want this…" she thought as she heard her father call her.
They were taking her out for a practice run, "Becky!" her father barked again making her jump and head back out into the 'Living room' crossing her arms Becky didn't look at him, "What?" she asked quietly, Her father looked her over.
"To much skin" he said walking toward the door "But while have to fix it later" Becky shivered as she stepped outside, "What are we doing?" she spat.
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