Super excited!
Knockout Starscream - Great chapter. I like When You Let Love In but whatever the title of the sequel is I'll be sure to read it.
Unicron1000 - Title suggestion: Open the heart of trust to family with music. :-)
Guest - "Do you trust me?"
Autobotlover56 - I love all those ideas I have been having a hard time deciding but I think I have found the right title. I hope you all enjoy this chapter and the sequel!
Red Ribbon.
By Amy Prime.
Your life can be changed by the simplest of things. The acts of a person around you can change you forever. It can leave a mark or scar.
The first person I will mention it my mom (Drawing. A Young woman with light brown hair with curls like Anna's, A bright smile, Light blue eyes, Her eyes held some pain and love in them at once, her smile one of sadness and hope.) She always told me to stay strong through it all. To never give up. I listen to those words every day even though she is no longer with us.
Growing up in an abusive home at the hands of my father (drawing. rough dark brown hair, with dark blue eyes like Amy's, He had a glare on his face one of a cruel evil man. His mouth in a thin line. His eyes held hatred.) helped shape me into the fighter I am. To keep fighting back. No matter how bad it gets someday somewhere someone will come into your life to help you. If I stopped fighting I wouldn't be here.
Even if you try again and again to find help and it just makes things worse (Drawing of the guys a group of guys in black and white with hatred in their eyes along with lust. They looked as if they could jump off the paper.) Keep fighting keep trying it will be okay in the end.
Through my darkest days, a light came through, some people came into my life. I wouldn't let them in, I locked my walls tightly so they wouldn't get to me. Even though deep in my mind I knew they were there to help, yet with years of pain I refused to let them in.
Enter Optimus Prime (drawing of Prime's holo-form. He had dark black hair in the right light it almost seems like a really dark blue, His smile was kind, his eyes the blue of energon.). He entered my life like an explosion, and he wouldn't leave. He became a father figure. A true father figure. The one to catch you if you fall. He adopted me when it was clear I would not be going back to the place my sister and I grew up. He stepped in where my biological father never stepped up. He was never there like Optimus was. Is. Optimus has come in and saved me. He even asked to be my dad. I have yet to answer him. Although he will always be the superman who came in to save me.
The next person who helped me is my new doctor. Doctor R. Hatchet. (Drawing of holo-form. He had eyes also the color of energon, with a smile that if you didn't know him would shy away from him) He took care of me through it all. He was patient and kind. He understood the pain I was going through. He helped me heal and is keeping tabs on my progress, especially with my knee. Which at the moment is almost better.
The others in my life are in the family. I have a new brother. His name is Ben (Drawing of Bee's holo-form. A young kid that looked about 18, with bright blue playful eyes. his smile kind and gentle. He had blonde wavy hair) He loves to race and hang out with me. He changed my life by simply being there and listening. He never let me push him away.
Amber (drawing of Arcee's holo-form, A young woman in leather, sharp eyes, small but dangerous smile.) Although she and I started out not seeing eye to eye. She seems to be a cool person she even; though at first would not admit it; has been keeping an eye out for me. She wants to get our friendship stronger to help me heal.
Mr. Solstice (Drawing of Jazz's holo-form. Black slick hair with a streak of silver, purple eyes covered with sunglasses.) who is my new music teacher and a friend of Optimus's is like a laid-back cool Uncle. He was one to push slightly in the right place to break down some of my walls. To start the healing process. He knew what to say well sing in this case.
Officer P. Rowl. (Drawing of Prowl's holo-form. A tall police officer with a faraway look in his blue eyes.) The person to be Mr. Logical and so annoying at first. Was shockingly extremely worried when I disappeared one night and wouldn't rest till I was found. He has helped me understand that someone is always there for a shoulder to cry on. Or simply sit with him in silence.
I have a cousin his name is Brian. (Drawing of Bulkhead's holo-form. Slightly chunky nicely built not as much as Ironhide. Friendly smile.) At this moment I don't know him very well but I hope to change that.
Ivan (Drawing of Ironhide's Holo-form. Tall and very muscular A scar on the left side of his face. A stern look behind his blue eyes.) is the most protective Uncle anyone could ask for. He never let me go. He wouldn't let me hold it in. He wouldn't let me fall into the darkness.
Raf has also been a great kid to have around. (Drawing of Raf.) He is kind and gentle. Smart and funny when you need a laugh. He is like a little brother to me.
How have these people changed my life? Well, that is simple.
They cared, more then anyone has in a very long time. None of them gave up on me and Anna.
The last person I will mention is the most important to me. Without her, I would have given up long ago. Her name is Anna Rosetta Prime (drawing of Anna). My little sister.
She was and still is the light in the tunnel. Her being there gave me a purpose in life. She gave me hope.
Although the changes will hardly think I can get through it. Even I don't know if I will ever be able to trust anyone to the full extent I think I will be able to move on with my life."
Amy finished by handing her paper into the teacher who stood there with an open mouth. The other students were quiet as they sat there. The bell, however, brought them out of their trances and they all left class to head home. When Amy pulled into the base the bots were waiting for her. Taking her helmet off she tilted her head not liking the attention of everyone on base. She almost growled but something stopped her.
"Yes?" She asked.
"Can we read it now? Please!?" Bee begged his optics pleading with her. Right she forgot to have someone record her. Oh well. Breathing out slowly.
"Sure Optimus can come with me to get it. The rest of you wait here." Amy said walking off to her room. Optimus not hesitating in his step followed the young girl to his quarters. She stopped by her door setting her backpack down.
...Amy's pov...
"Optimus?" I couldn't believe what I was about to say. He kneeled down in front of me. I fiddled with my hands. Deep down I knew I wanted this but I was still scared.
"Yes, Amy?" His voice was so smooth and kind. I knew I was about to make a good decision. I bit my lip and looked down. Now I felt nervous but why? I felt one of his digits tilt my chin up to look him in the optics.
"What is it my dear spark?" He asked softly.
"I want you to be my dad," I said quietly. His optics lit up like the fourth of July.
"I would be honored." He replied.
Okay officially done with this story! YAY! On to the sequel! Yes, it is up! The name is Transformers Prime: Can you love without trust?