Thank you for the 6 reviews for chapter 35! I would also like to thank the 1 person who reviewed for Edward Babysits Renesemee. Also if you haven't read that story you should, it kind of ties along with this one only it was written before this so it may not fit exactly with the story but its good.
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1 month later- Edward POV
Today is the day that the family minus Bella, Renesemee and I are moving, for the past month the whole family has been trying to spend as much time together and especially with Ben and Ness. We told Ness a last week about the move, she took it; well let's just say that she is like her mother in a lot of ways. She cried and begged us to make them stay, and in her thoughts begged me to make Rosalie and Emmett let Ben stay.
Bella was sobbing with her, from watching her daughter get so upset and so I was left to calm both of them, It hurt me to see both of them like that but it's my job to take care of them and I did what I had to do. Ness eventually got over it; she thought that it wouldn't happen, that they wouldn't leave.
The day started out like every other day, waking Ness up getting her fed, clean and dressed and then going to the main house. Emmett was loading the truck with things from Rosalie and his house, Rose was still getting Ben up and ready, while everyone else packed. Most of the major furniture like beds, couches, cribs and the dining table and my piano were staying, Bella sat down with Renesemee on the floor while I helped my brothers pack and move things.
"Momma, what's going on?"I froze when I heard my little girl ask the question.
"Today's moving day sweetie, Daddy's just helping." My lovely wife explained so that our daughter would not think too much about it.
Soon after Rosalie arrived with a very sad looking Ben on her back, that is until he saw Ness and jumped off his mothers back. Renesemee and Ben collided in a tight hug. They started talking and playing after a little while, during which we finished packing. Everyone sat down and socialized before Carlisle looked to Esme and then stood up.
"Alice, Jasper, Esme I guess we should be leaving soon. Rose and Em can come if you're ready." He suggested and stepped forward as Bella picked Renesemee up and set her on her feet and I stood up too, Carlisle and I hugged and said our goodbyes.
"Take care of your family son."He told me with a pat on my back before embracing Bella and then Ness. He told each one of them to take care of the rest and to behave.
Ness was handling this pretty well at first but when we got to Alice, the last of the first group to go, she changed completely. Carlisle, Esme, Jasper and Alice were all leaving together since they would share a house, Rose, Emmett and Ben would follow.
Alice hugged me, then Bella and finally she bent down to Renesemee so that she could look her in the eyes.
"Ness sweetie, I know this will be hard on you but please be happy. I'll miss you." Alice said before she hugged Ness to her held on tightly to her aunts' shirt and buried her head in Alice's neck.
"Please Auntie Alice, don't leave me. Please." Renesmee sniffed and mumbled.
"I have to. I can't leave Carlisle, Esme or Jasper. I'm sorry princess." She replied pulling Ness back so she could look her in the eyes.
"Ok. I'll miss you. Love you." Renesemee said softly as Alice kissed her on the cheek and danced over to take jasper's hand. The four of them then went on their way.
"Are we up for round two?" I asked as I saw the looks Rose and Emmett were sharing and the thoughts they were thinking.
"Ness. There are three people who would like to say goodbye to you before they leave, would you be ok?" I asked her as she was just standing there about to cry while staring at the door.
"I guess."
Rose and Emmett came and hugged Bella and I before they went to go hug Ness. Ben was saying goodbye to her while Rose and Em were with us.
"Please don't leave me Ben." My little girl whispered and hugged him so tight, desperate to not let him leave.
"I don't wanna leave. Momma says I have to." Bennett whispered to her.
"Ben, come on sweetie."Rosalie called, trying to not make things worse.
"Bye Renesemee. I'll miss you. A lot." He said as they embraced again. He had tears falling down his cheeks when Rosalie pulled him into her arms.
"Auntie Rose. Please let him stay." My little girl begged. Rose glanced at me then to Bella and back to Renesemee.
"I'm sorry Sweetie. It's just the way things are."Rosalie replied with a sad look on her face.
"Then I'll go." Ness replied.
"You can't baby. I'm so sorry." Bella intervened before this got in too deep.
Renesemee turned towards her mom and we could see the tears running down her face.
"Oh baby. Come here."Bella cooed.
"No!" Renesemee screamed and ran towards Bennett.
"Ness Sweetie, you have to stay here with your mommy and sorry." Rose stated.
"Baby come here." Bella said again and held her arms out for Ness.
"No! I don't want you! Your mean."Renesemee screamed. I looked to Rose and she nodded.
"I'm sorry Ness. Ben say goodbye." Rosalie said, knowing what I was hoping she would do.
"I'll call you or Bella later, once we get to the new house and get settled. I hope we didn't cause too much trouble. Sorry." Rose's thoughts apologized as she walked towards the door Emmett was holding open for her.
"Bye. Ren-"Ben started to say but was cut off by his cries and Renesemee's sobs.
"Nooooo! Come . . . come back!" my daughter struggled to cry the words as she ran across the room heading for the door that had already closed behind Rose and Ben.
Bella and I heard the car drive away as Renesemee laid on the ground sobbing and kicking her legs while she gasped for air. Bella was about to go and pick our child off the floor when she stopped and turned away. I looked at Bella's face and knew if she could cry she would be. She put her hands on her head and was starting to shake. I knew it was because of how Renesemee was crying and also the words our daughter said to her.
"Renesemee Carlie Cullen, apologize to your mother now. I don't want to hear you talk to her like that again." I said sternly and Renesemee looked up at me and I could see in her thoughts that my face showed how I was feeling. She was deciding whether to listen to me or not.
"Now."I repeated a bit softer. That made up her mind.
"Momma" She cried. As soon as Bella heard that one word she spun around and made her way to our daughter. She sat on the ground and pulled our daughter into her lap.
"I'm . . . so . . . rry . . . Mommy" Renesemee cried into my wife's chest as Bella kissed her hair and rubbed her back trying to soothe her.
"I forgive you baby. I'm not mad at you, I'll always love you my little nudger." Bella told her.
I soon came over to them and wrapped them both in a hug and kissed both their foreheads. We sat there for a while calming Renesemee and telling her that the family will be back sooner than she thinks and how much we all love her.
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