attention everyone: wanted to let everyone know, i just got flamed. the douchbag aka bloodbathsucks, said that this website should be shut down and that my stories suck ass. he or she (whatever the fuck it is) said that we all suck in general as well. in retaliation to the fucker known as bloodbathsucks i'd like to say go fuck yourself. i honestly don't give a shit if you don't like my stories. i didn't make you read them so if you think they sucked, then why the fuck did you? and if you think this website sucks, then why the fuck are you on it in the first place? do yourself a favor and go have a hot and horny fuck session with your dog or something. flame me again if you want, for i don't give a shit what you think.
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Bloodbath
Chapter 35
"This is it." Chief Kurama said, looking up.
Nana stared at the building before them, the building where Mariko was being held. "What's going to happen?"
Kurama sighed. "No one but Director Kakuzawa knows this, but Number Thirty-Five is my daughter."
Nana gasped. "What? I thought she died a long time ago."
"She was supposed to die the night she was born. I should've killed her, but in the end, I let her live," he replied. "It was my wife's final wish before she passed away. To this day I still regret the life I put Mariko through. She didn't deserve it."
"I sense Zoe coming. We should hide." With that, Nana grabbed Kurama's wrist and pulled him behind one of the stone statues in front of the building.
Inside her room, Mariko smiled. "That girl is coming."
A moment later she was in her wheelchair and on her way out the door.
"Where are you going?" Donovan asked, coming up beside her.
"That girl I'm supposed to kill is coming. My vectors are working again," she said happily.
Donovan smiled. "Good. Annihilate her."
Zoe walked up the steps leading to the towering building. She could sense both Mariko and Nana. As she got closer, she came face to face with Mariko.
"Goody, you came." Mariko smiled, a glint in her eyes. "That other girl is here, too."
"I don't want anyone else involved," Zoe said quietly. "Let's just end this once and for all."
Mariko laughed and released her vectors. Zoe jumped out the way, then ran behind one of the many statues.
"Where are you?" Mariko taunted, her chair ominously gliding forward. "You can't hide forever."
Zoe waited a moment, until Mariko was in range. As soon as she was, she struck her with her vectors. Mariko screamed as she flew out of her chair, landing on the concrete with a crash. Her prostectic arm broke off and it rolled a few feet away from her.
Zoe slowly walked up to the girl. "You might want to run away."
Mariko laughed. "You must be kidding if you think you can kill me. No one can." With that, she sent all twenty-six of her vectors at Zoe.
Zoe released her own, getting them tangled with Mariko's. However, since Mariko had so many, she was able to get the upper hand. Zoe was thrown into one of the statues, causing it to shatter. As she stood up, Mariko floated back into her chair and reattached her arm, quickly wheeling herself in Zoe's direction.
"You're a lot funner than the other girl," Mariko commented. "She was a little too easy if you ask me."
The blond glared at her, knowing all too well of her disadvantage.
"But I'm tired of playing." Mariko slammed Zoe into the side of the building with her vectors, viciously beating her with all her might.
Zoe was pinned against the wall, unable to fight back as she was mercilessly pounded. She could feel bones cracking, and blood seeping from cuts and scratches. The wind was knocked out of her and she could feel the wall begin to give away. The moment it did, one of Mariko's vectors slammed into her right horn, causing it to break off. A second later, Zoe was unconcious, the crumbled wall beneath her. Her blond hair fanned around her face and her eyes had rolled into the back of her head. The scientist had stepped outside to see how well things were going.
"Perfect," Donovan said, smiling to himself. "All I have to do now is blow Mariko up and then bring the other one to Kakuzawa."
He was about to run into the building to find the detonater, when he heard his name being called.
"Donovan!"
Both the scientist and Mariko turned to see Kurame stepping out of the shadows, Nana close behind.
"Kurama? What are you doing here?" Donovan shouted.
Mariko gasped. "K-Kurama?"
Kurama looked at the girl and swallowed. "Hello, Mariko..."
Tears filled Mariko's eyes. "Are you really my daddy?" She tried to stand up and walk over to him.
Nana watched nervously, afraid of what the girl might do.
"I've missed you so much-" Mariko collapsed to the ground, her legs too weak to support herself. "Daddy..."
Chief Kurama swallowed his own tears and pointed a gun at her. "I'm a horrible father......Hell, I don't even have the right to call myself that."
Unfazed, Mariko smiled. "I used to hope that when I was in that dark room, my mommy and daddy would come for me one day. I used to hope that we would live happilly together some day. But no one ever came for me..." She began to cry.
"I've killed so many Dicloniuses," Kurama choked out. "But I allowed you to live and now I feel guilty because of it."
"Why did I have to live like that for so many years?" Mariko asked, tears running down her face. "You're my daddy, you were supposed to protect me."
"I thought I was, but I did just the opposite," Kurama replied. "I should've killed you the night you were born." He took a step forward.
Nana grabbed his sleeve. "Be careful, Papa. It's dangerous."
Mariko's eyes suddenly darkened. "Why does she get to call you that? She's not even your real daughter."
"Mariko, I-"
The pink-haired girl abruptly sent out two of her vectors and wrapped them around Nana's neck, strangling her.
"Will you be sad if she dies?" She asked, beginning to punch her in the stomach.
Kurama dropped his gun and walked over to Mariko. He wrapped his arms around her, catching her off guard. She released her hold on Nana.
"I took your life away and made you what you are today. I've missed you so much all these years," Kurama said. "I can't take back what I did, but I hope I can make things right."
"Do you really mean that?" Mariko asked.
The man picked her up. "Yes, Mariko. We can live together, forever."
Nana stood up and brushed herself off. "Papa...."
"Take care, Nana," Kurama said, walking past her.
Donovan emerged from the building, the detonator in his hand. He and Nana watched as the father and daughter descended the steps.
"Your mother and I loved you so much," Kurama said. "I never meant for any of this to happen...."
Mariko wiped a tear off his face and hugged him tighter. "It's okay."
Donovan pushed the button on the detonater, setting off the explosives in Mariko.
Kurama and Mariko closed their eyes, holding on to each other for dear life. A moment later, the explosives went off, killing them together.
Nana watched in horror and fell to her knees. "Papa......."
"You're the only one left," Donovan said, walking up to her with a gun. "But not anymore-"
There was a spurt of blood and his head rolled off his shoulders. Surprised, Nana looked up to see Zoe behind his decapitated body.
"Y-your horn," Nana stuttered.
"Never mind," Zoe said. "Go back to Takuya's. There is still a chance for you to have a happy life. I hope you can do what I couldn't."
Nana choked back her tears as she watched Zoe walk away. Sighing, she begin to make her way back to Takuya's.
At the research facility
"The plan is going well," Director Kakuzawa said.
Only a few minutes ago, Donovan had called him telling him that Mariko had defeated Zoe.
Miki was on the other side of his office, flipping through one of the files. Her heart stopped when she saw a photograph of Takuya inside of it. While Kakuzawa wasn't looking, she quickly ripped the picture out and stuffed it into the pocket of her labcoat. She didn't want to see him get caught in the middle of everything.
"Number Thirty-Five has defeated Zoe and now Donovan is going to set off the explosives in her. As soon as he is done with that, he is going to bring her to me." Kakuzawa smiled. "I'm going to use her to repopulate the earth."
Miki turned around and stared at him. "Do you think it will work?" She asked, hoping it wouldn't.
"I don't see why not." Kakuzawa put his hand on his head and clutched onto a handful of hair. He pulled it completely off, revealing two tiny horns on his bald head, similar to his son's.
so zoe is still alive, and kurama and mariko are dead. donovan is dead, too and now we just found out that the crazy tyrant is part diclonius, just like his son. stay tuned for the next chapter, for there are only a few left. i hope you like it so far. laterz
Bitch stop writing your sucky ass stories. Damn you Ambikenz, Royal Court Jester, Lanski12, Deefwolf, Dontchaknowme4life, Sakura Martinez, amnd all the other writers on this website suck. This Website should be shut down so nobody has to go near these damn stories.
anyway, onto the story, and im not gonna let this douchebag faze me. bet he can't spell or write and he's pissed that all of us are intelligent enough to know how to write a good story. dumbasss......
