~*~Hi all. Well, no real author's note, just some things I want to say. I guess technically that is an author's note. *sweatdrop*
Bonasi-san: I have read over your reviews and I actually agree with some of them. I do not have access to a beta reader actually. I wouldn't even know where to look. I have recently started reading the manga so I know the real names. Since I started out this fanfic a long time ago with the dubbed names, I felt it wise to keep it going. The Tea thing I knew but at the time, the site I used before wouldn't allow me to use the accent over the 'e'. Again, I have a lot of these chapters done already on another site so not everything is the best. The YuGi in the beginning was a typo I kept doing by accident. (Yeah, I know that doesn't make sense) I found out about the real spelling of Motou after reading the manga, but again I felt it unwise to change everything. I knew there was no food on the island, but in order to make to the story work in the beginning, I had to use something. I know she seems "perfect" now, but that changes in time. I'm not a fan of Anzu/Tea, but your comment about that confused me. In the manga, Yugi's a bit of a pervert in the beginning. Yet you said he doesn't judge on looks? Seriously could you explain that? (not trying to sound mean at all, btw!) I know Pegasus doesn't do evil to be evil. There was a purpose to that which still hasn't been explained yet. It will in the future. I guess I made Danielle upfront about her problem because she thinks she can trust him, kind of knowing what he's going through. Her character develops in these Egypt scenes, which is in essence the real story I created. I randomly put in the author's note to kind of be funny. Guess it doesn't work with you. I didn't quite understand about what you said about the people and the Millennium items. Could you explain that to me either in a review or an email? Thank you about the pen name and I did actually understand most of your review. I very much like how you came across with it as well. Thank you.
Laura Ann: LOL. Glad I made your day.
Gary Sparkes: Wow, thanks so much. I'll post it in a future chapter, probably the 40th one.
xantcha-mirri-ojanen: Wow. If Inu Yasha likes it… hehe. I also have Inu Yasha fanfics if you'd like to read those. Thanks for the support!
kenshins_gurl : Can't tell you that. You might not read anymore. *wink*
Okay, that's it for now. Read please!~*~
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~*~In Their Dream~*~
Dyani was standing face to face with the man that killed her entire family. "You monster."
He laughed and twisted the boy's arm until he cried out in pain.
"NO!! Stop it!"
He looked at her. "I'm just getting started. Maybe I should do this to the others as well. You know I can."
"Leave them alone!"
"Is this all it takes? Let's see how loud he can scream." He continued to twist his arm until a loud snap was heard. Yugi cried out in pain.
"Don't hurt him!!!! Stop it!!!"
"Then come with me. You belong to me anyway."
Before she could answer, she heard a voice. "Unhand him now!"
Dyani looked over to see Yami running over to them. The man just laughed. "Why should I listen to you? It's none of your concern."
Yami came close to him. "Unhand my brother now!"
The man grinned. "As you wish." He threw Yugi at Yami and as Yami went to catch Yugi, the man grabbed Dyani roughly.
"Let me go! You're hurting me!"
Yami looked over at her, terrified and extremely mad (trying not to use the "swear words" here... ) He felt this huge rush of emotion hit him when he saw this man grab her. "Let her go!"
The man laughed. "She is mine. It's not polite to demand something that isn't yours."
Yami glared at him. "I will not repeat myself."
"Then don't. And you-" He looked at Dyani and slapped her straight across the face and tighten his grip. "You little bitch. (oops.. I guess I missed one) I went through a lot of trouble to track you down." He slapped her again. Her cries sent Yami to go insane.
"Stop this at once!" He put Yugi down and faced this man that was hurting her. "You will be punished for this."
He laughed. "Don't tell me you've fallen for this whore's tricks? Yes, she does have the right body, no? A perfect concubine for you highness. But she belongs to me."
Yami didn't think he could get any angrier. "She is NOT a concubine!" The man just laughed.
The palace guards started to appear, about to surround the man. He looked around. "Well, I guess I have nothing to lose if you kept this for me. Have a few more thrills until I come back for her." He slapped her one last time then threw her hard against the ground.
Yami ran over to her and carefully lifted her to see her injuries.
The man mumbled a few words and suddenly a huge cloud of smoke came. When the smoke cleared, he was gone.
Yami turned his attention back to Dyani. Her arm was definitely badly bruised and her face will get a nice black and blue on it. The ground might have injured her legs, but other then that, she was okay. 'Thank Ra I got here before it got worse.'
"Find out who that was now! Track him down." The guards all ran around crazy trying to find any trace of the man.
Yami looked at Dyani again. He softened his voice. "Are you alright?"
Dyani looked right at him, eyes heavy yet filled with fear. "Those..Those eyes... And his face... It's the same man. He found me so quickly. I-I'm so sorry."
Yami tried to make sense of her rambling. "Wait. That's the same man who murdered you family?" She nodded. "Dyani, now you have to tell me who it was. It's the only way to stop him. And attacking Yugi..?"
Dyani looked up at him, into those violet eyes. She knew she had to tell. That face would haunt her into the next life.
"The man... He's a very powerful Sorcerer."
"I need his name Dyani."
"Kaiba... Seto Kaiba."
~*~If you didn't see that coming, I've very worried about you. ::Sees the fruit flying:: Before you let go, if you don't note, no next chapter!!!!~*~
