So i think morning is better for beginning new life... just like SACHVI :P
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guest: You are not giving a positive message about Tanmay if are showing him to be so desperate. I understand that they are married but, is marriage all about the physical relationship?
Thanks to review, may be tanmay is... because only he was in love from his teen age ... so its natural for his... its too long... and when gun is also agreed then why he controlled... ya but he is not totally depended on physical relationship otherwise he enjoyed his first night... :P. He love gun allot... not only for physical relationship... but ya its part of life... so he surely attracted because he was waiting for this moment from a long time...
Again thanks for review... i liked that you told about your opinion...
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Next morning, at 7 pm..
Sneha and anshay was sleeping ... because they waked whole night with sachvi and shreya..
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Nirvi waked and saw toward maddy... he was still sleeping... nirvi saw toward him and kissed on his forehead... maddy slowly open his eyes...and held her in the arms tightly...
Nirvi: uth jao aashiq miya...
Maddy: pagal ho, itni jaldi koi uthta hai.. abhi to 9 bazne me 2 ghante baki hai...
Nirvi: tum 9 baze uthte ho..
Maddy: kyu kya problem hai and he slowly kissed on her lips..
Nirvi tried to pushed him: me 6:30 tak uth jati hu, aaj late ho gayi... or 7:30-8 baze tak nashta karke bhi ready rahti hu...
Maddy: itni jaldi... phir to soti bhi jaldi hogi..
Nirvi: jyada to nahi.. phir bhi genrally 10:30-11 baze tak to...
Maddy: hmmm tabhi, ab late uthne ki aadat dal lo... kyuki ab me tumhe rat bhar sone dene wala nahi hu... and he again kissed on her nack and tightly squeezed her in his arm...
Nirvi: chodo please, abhi subah nahi... or vese bhi mujhe taiyar hokar bahar jana hai...
Maddy: itni jaldi bahar jake kya karogi... 9 baze se pahle yaha koi nashta bhi nahi karta...
Nirvi: dadi bhi 9 bazeeee...
Maddy: vo tumhare hath ka khana khayegi kya... nirvi stared him... and pushed him forcefully... he fallen down from bed...
Maddy: are bap re itna gussa...
Nirvi: bade acche pati ho... motivate karne ki jagah olta dominate kar rahe ho... bat bhi mat karna mujhse and she went inside bathroom..
Maddy: are yar me mazak kar raha tha... dadi ke liye subah ma nashta taiyar kar deti hai... or tumhe abhi se kitchen me jane ki kya jarurat... nirvi shut the door on his nose...
maddy: are me bhi sath me hi aa jata hu na andar...
nirvi (from inside): koi jarurat nahi hai... so jao aaram se ... 9 baze tak uthna na... or dekhna aaj dadi mere hath ka bana hua nashta hi karegi...
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Gun awake and saw that tanmay was sleeping...
Gun smiled: so sad na tanmay... tumhari puri rat barbad ho gayi...Tanmay smiled
Gun (in mind): ye jaga hua hai...
Tanmay again smiled and held a pillow and hugged tightly and murmured... i love you too...
Gun laughed slowly... and suddenly he clicked a thought and started recording from her mobile...
Tanmay kissed pillow... and again he murmured something...and again hugged pillow...
Tanmay: aaj nahi chodne wala... Still 1 min tanmay doing silly thing and he turned... gun tried to held his but he fallen down from the bed...
Tanmay awake...gun laughed loudly..tanmay: kya hua?
Gun: kya hua...
Tanmay: tum abhi yaha pe thi na, mere pas... and he saw that he held a pillow
Gun: me kab se yahi pe hu... tanmay saw mobile in her hand..
Tanmay: mobile se kya kar rahi ho?
Gun: vo me... vo sneha se bat...
Tanmay: batao mujhe...
Gun: kya and she stood and ran...
Tanmay followed her: meri recording ki na tumne...
Gun: nahi to... and she entered bathroom quickly..
Tanmay held the door, Gun tried to closed the door.
Tanmay: mobile idhar do yar... ye galat bat hai...
Gun: accha iska matlab tumhe malum hai ki tum kuch galat kar rahe the...
Tanmay: yar vo bus ek sapna tha... tum do abhi... and he entered bathroom quickly...
Gun ran inside... but she stopped due to wall...
Tanmay: ab bachke kaha jaogi...
Gun: mere mobile ko hath nahi lagaoge...
Tanmay: ok thik hai nahi lagata... vese tumhara mobile waterproof to hai na...
Gun: matlab...
Tanmay: matlab ab kuch bhi nuksan hua to mera koi kasoor nahi and he quickly on the shower knob.
Gun: tanmay, mera mobile kharab ho jayega... please.. and she tried to off... but tanmay held her hand and pushed her near him...
Tanmay: hota hai to ho jane do...and he move his face to near her... they were fully wet.. us din barish me kuch karna rah gaya tha na...
Gun shivered: ky...kya?
Tanmay: bata du..
Gun: vo.. ab..abhi...
Tanmay: ha abhi... and he touched her lips...
Gun closed her eyes... suddenly tanmay stole her mobile
Gun opened her eyes... tanmay laughed... and ran toward door
Tanmay: ab tum free ho jo karna ho karo.. mobile mere hath aa gaya hai...
Gun: tanmay ye kya hai... thik hai mobile ki itni parwah hai na... ab mere pas aake bhi dikhana..
Tanmay: are me to mazak...gun pushed him... and closed the door with loud voice...
Gun: is waqt bhi mazak... ab me bhi dekhti hu kese mere pas aate ho... faltu me hi afsos kar rahi thi...accha hua jo kal kuch nahi hua...
Tanmay: yar itna accha moka tha... me bhi kitna bada gadha hu... ek recording ke karan itna accha chance miss kar diya...ab ise kese manau... yahi wait karta hu..
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Nirvi entered kitchen,
Ananya: tumhe yaha aane ki jarurat nahi thi... or thodi der or aaram kar sakti thi..
Nirvi: vo aadat hi padi hui hai, jaldi uthne ki to..
DISha entered kitchen: kyu rat ko kuch hua nahi kya...nirvi turned red...
Ananya: dishaaa... vese tum hospital gayi thi?
Disha: ya vo subah subah ek delivery case.. to 5 baze hi pahuchna pada...
Ananya: tum jake aaram kar lo... phir..
Disha: hmm me jati hu.. vese bhi maji mujhe bina nahaye hue kitchen me dekh legi to band baz jayegi... and nirvi tumhare liye bhi yahi tip hai... kabhi bhi bina nahaye hue kitchen me mat aana... varna...
Nirvi: me dadi ke liye nashta banau..disha shocked...
DIsha: pagal ho rahi ho... ek to aaj tumhara pahla din hai... or tum kitchen me bhidna chati hu... or dusri bat... vo bhi unke liye.. jo shayad tumhare hath ka nashta... i mean.. unhe tum pasand nahi ho...
Nirvi: mujhe pata hai... par aap log unhe batana hi mat.. ki mene banaya... please... bus dadi ke liye... or baki ke sab k liye aapko jese karna ho... Ananya think something and nodded...nirvi became happy... and started preparing poha and tea...
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Gun exit from bathroom...
Tanmay: tum kapde pahan ke bahar aayi ho?
Gun shocked: matlab... kya hai tumhara..
Tanmay: ooo sorry, i mean tum to bina kapde liye andar gayi thi na... phir ye kaha se...
Gun: mene rat ko hi andar mere sab kapde rakh diye the... or chinta mat karo... tumhe aisa moka to me dene wali bhi nahi hu... and she leave room...
Tanmay: are bal... bal to banaye hi nahi na,...
Gun from stairs: niche bana lugi.. bye... room me bethkar mobile dekho...tanmay hit the door... Abhijeet came from terrace and saw tanmay...
Abhijeet: kya hua gate ko kyu mar raha hai... ye shock daya tak hi rahne de...
Tanmay: kuch nahi...
Abhijeet: ye kya kapde aadhe gile aadhe sukhe hue... kya huliya bana rakha hai... ek neavy officer sabse kadak mana jata hai...is waqt koi tumhe dekh lega... to viswas hi nahi karega ki tum...
Tanmay saw himself: sorry vo.. me taiyar hoke aata hu... Abhijeet smiled and leave..
Abhijeet saw gun in the hall: are wah gun itni jadi ready bhi ho gayi... or yaha tarika abhi tak so rahi hai... ab tum uth hi gayi ho to... ek cup chay ho jaye to...
Gun: kyu nahi uncle abhi bana ke lati hu...
Abhijeet: uncle... ab tum papa bol sakti ho...
Gun: sorry vo bachpan se uncle... to me try karugi... vese aunty ki bhi...she byte her tongue mom ki bhi chay banani hai kya...
ABhijeet: pata nahi... vese vo aaj subah ma ko chodne airport gayi thi... to aake vapas so gayi to ab pata nahi kab uthe..
Gun: nani real me chali gayi, mujhe laga ki aun...mumma mazak kar rahi thi
Abhijeet: nahi vo unko bank ka kuch kam tha.. to jana jaruri tha... vo bad me jarur aayegi.. chinta mat karo... vese chay...
Gun: ha abhi layi...
After sometime,
Tarika waked and eneterd hall, tarika: abhijeet tumne chay pi li kya... ya banani hai..
Abhijeet: nahi pi or banana bhi nahi..
Tarika: kyu chay chod di kya...
Abhijeet in proud voice: shgun bana rahi hai mere liye..
Tarika shocked: abhijeettt. Kuch nahi ho sakta tumhara, aate hi kam me laga diya use...
Abhijeet: koi pahli bar to ghar aayi nahi.. isse pahle bhi hazar bar..
Tarika: aayi hogi... par us waqt tak vo sirf shreya ki beti, or tanmay ki dost banke aati thi...yar abhijeet tum bhi.. and she went toward kitchen
Tarika: gun ye kya hai..
Gun: kya hua...
Tarika: jao yaha se me bana dugi... ksine bola kitchen me lagne ko..
Gun: papa ne... tarika shocked: i mean papa ko chay chahiye thi to me...
Tarika: tum abhijeet ko papa kab se bolne lag gayi... or mujhe aunty hi bula rahi ho abhi tak..
Gun: ooo vo to subah unc...papa ne hi kaha ki me abse unhe papa bulau to...vese chay bhi ban gayi hai to... aaj mere hath ki pee lo...
Tarika: tanmay utha kya?
Gun: hmmm..
Tarika: to kal kitni der jage... and she winked her...
Gun : vo... me.. bahar chay... deke aati hu...
Tarika smiled: ok... nahi batana to mat batao...
Tanmay entered kitchen, gun saw him and leave from there...
Tarika: to uth gaye neavy officer... duty pe to jana nahi hai aaj.. phir jaldi...
Tanmay: mom vo.. me soch raha tha ki me aaj gun ko bahar ghuma ke leke aa jau..
Tarika: accha... kaha leke jaoge vese..
Tanmay: voo... abhi decide nahi kiya par...
Gun entered: mujhe kahi nahi jana hai... vese bhi me soch rahi hu... aaj mom ke yaha jaugi.. sabse milugi, sneha nirvi di bhi rahege hi... ek tarah se pagfere ki rasm bhi ho jayegi...
Tanmay: yar tum...
Gun: me jau na mumma..
Tarika in confusion: ha jao...gun leave..
Tarika: sab thik to hai tanmay..
Tanmay: sab aapke karan hua mom..
Tarika: mere karan kya...
Tanmay: vo naraz hai mujhse, rat ko room me late gaya to...
Tarika shocked: is karan naraz hai
Tanmay: are mujhe puri bat to bolne do... rat ko room me gaya tab tak vo so gayi...
Tariak: oooo so sad..
Tanmay: or uske bad jab vo subah jagi ... to...
Tarika: to..
Tanmay: ab aapko puri bat batana jaruri hai... bus ab aap use kese bhi karke mere sath jane ke liye manaona...
Tarika: pahle uske sath shreya key aha chale jao.. aate waqt usko kahi le jana... simple...
Tanmay: hmmm aisa bhi kar sakta hu..
Tarika: par beta aaj hi mana lena.. nahi to aaj ki rat bhi
Tanmay: mom, aap meri mom hai...
Tarika: accha mujhe nahi maum tha... me bhool gayi thi..
Tanmay: me jata hu abhi...
Shagun leave from house and saw that tanmay was already in car..
Shagun saw toward tarika and sitting silently in car... they leave..
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So how's it...
Will tanmay and gun solved their so called fight
Will dadi liked breakfast
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i know you want tanmay and gun moment... wait for this... TC
thanks to giving me review...
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