Thank you for all of the reviews! I had 9 in less that 3 hours! Thats amazing and I've had 4 more since then :D
Anyway, one of the reviews annoyed me more than it should have done. Leroy, my children are NOT moon pool children. They are WITCHBLOOD CHILDREN, moon pool children are in BellaNessieCullen's fanfictions and a few of her followers. I will now proceed to give you the differences between Moon pool children and witchblood children.
1. Witchblood children are created by the blood of witches when a vampire drinks of the blood, for a month after they will be fertile and be able to have a witchblood child and every year for a month for five years after the drinking of the witches blood, the vampire will be fertile. Moon pool children are created via vampire couples where one or both vampires concived a child as a human have sex in a moon pool.
2. Witchbloods are more powerful than moon pool children as they can also use witch magic due to the witchblood that pumps around their body.
3. Witchbloods have a mixture of blood and venom in their systems, though they appear like vampires they cannot create a vampire unless they give a human their blood as only their blood contains the venom and NOT their saliva. Moonpool children cannot create vampires at all.
4. Witchbloods have an active metobolism that makes them able to eat human food, though it has no nutritional value, unlike their parents they can actually eat food and digest it. Moon pool children do not have an active metabolism as they have no heart beat once they reach maturity. Witchbloods do have a heart beat, though it is very slow.
5. Witchbloods are fully mature after four years. Moon pool children are fully mature after two years.
6. Witchbloods can either be Vampire witchbloods or Werewolf witchbloods. Moon pool children are only the spawn of vampires.
7. Witchbloods are MY OWN IDEA. Moon pool children are BellaNessieCullen's Idea. Stop getting the two confused because it's annoying.
I DID NOT COPY BELLANESSIECULLEN'S IDEA AND SHE DID NOT COPY MINE. OUR STORIES ARE COMPLETELY SEPERATE AND WE BOTH ACKNOWLEDGE THEY HAVE SOME SIMILARITIES. I HAVE TALKED TO BELLANESSIECULLEN ON TWITTER A NUMBER OF TIMES AND SHE AGREES OUR STORIES ARE COMPLETELY DIFFERENT.
Anyway, rant over. Also, Chrissy, I know you requested Alice, she will have a PoV in the next chapter cause I have the next three planned out already cause I know where this story is going now. I just wanted to let you all know that I am also thinking of continuing Renesmee's Saga: Shooting Star and actually extending it so it is about 100000 words? Yes or No on that? And also I am working on another think linked with this which is a bit like a guide to the main species/ Characters/ places in this story. First chapter of that should be up soon! Another note, Judeyah Racluse (Benjamin's younger brother is 10 years old and he is portrayed by Michael Hudson! :) So on with the next chapter! :)
Chapter Thirty Six
Making A Breakthrough
"People who are heartless once cared too much."
-Unknown
Judeyah Racluse
I watched my older brother, Benjamin morned for his deceased lover. I examined him and realised that we looked very much alike, our faces were the same shape, we had the same noses, same high cheek bones and defined chin, the same shape eyes and the same long hair that was almost perfectly straight the only difference was my skin tone was slightly lighter and my hair was darker, but our eyes were also the same exept his had a new darkness in, something I had never seen in anybody like he had an inwards battle going on constantly in his soul.
I shivered at the thought of my brother, the one I had never really known exept for great stories of his bravery and power off my mother who had hunted down every single story of Benjamin as if it was her lifes mission, trying to keep tabs on her son even if she could not see him.
The man here now was nothing like that brave warrior in the stories, the stories of how he managed to defeat single handedly the plague of vampires that swarmed his village or how he helped the shape shifters fight off another army of vampires and how he taught them to defend their self, or how he was the catalyst for the myth of Anubis. My brother had lived so long that he was a god in some cultures.
I was actually glad that I was going along on this expedition, I had never been aloud anywhere or to do anything on my own before, and been trusted to go somewhere with my brother on a quest to save his deceased lover seemed like the perfect way to see what kind of man my brother really was. From the stories he was a fearless hero and leader amoung his people, he should have been the werewolf king when the wolves decided on a king a thousand years ago, yet he had turned down the crown figgureitively speaking and so my father had upheld the possition for the past thousand years.
My father too was a fearless warrior but he was also arrogant and volitile where as the stories of Benjamin had lead me to believe that he was selfless and caring and that he would have risked his own life for his friends or family and the only thing that had ever made him turn was the death of his sister- and my sister- thousands of years ago.
2 Days Later
It was the morning of the second day of our journey, Me, Benjamin, Mary, Leonardo, Charlotte and Seth had made good ground but with all of us needing to sleep, the witchbloods less so than the others, but still needing sleep to feel fully refreshed and at our strongest (Apart from Benjamin as he was very old and powerful and didn't need sleep as much because the older you got, the less sleep you needed in witchbloods.)
We had travelled far into the west and of the continant, running at speeds uncomprehendable to humans and covering such ground that was impossible for most to cover if they walked for months on end.
I have to say that the journey had been completely the opposite to what I had expected. I had expected the journey to be full of life and joy and hope as we were going on a daring quest to save Benjamin's lover.
But it was miserable, depressing and dark. There was no life, only the pittiful shadow of death looming over usbecause that is how Benjamin was making it. I could see the pain in his eyes and the lumbering way he walked, I could see the fear that plagued him, fear that he would not succeed in bringing Madison back to this world and a fear of something else. Something I could not quite grasp on.
Mary was not the depressive kind of young woman, you could see that after spending maybe three seconds of your time with her. She was bubbly, clever and mischevious. Beautiful in the extreme for a human, she seemed to be the kind of person who was filled with light, but when put in a situation that you could not equate to light, that flame seemed to be getting smothered day after day.
Leonardo was very similar to Mary, but you knew that he could also be serious if the situation needed it, and that is what he was been now, very serious and protective over his mate and his sister, trying to protect them and he seemed very edgy and almost too protective of them both.
Seth was just... well. He was another fun loving young man who seemed very much like the other two, like he wanted to have fun but he was been driven to be serious and stern and over protective of his mate who I quickley gathered was Charlotte.
What do I say about Charlotte? She was a complete enigma. I couldn't figgure out her reasons for been here or even the reason why she would want to be here. She had no place here, she wasn't bonded to Madison as deeply as the other two and nor was she of any help to us at this precice time. She was beautiful and complicated and in a slight way I did feel myself been drawn to her to try to understand her, not in a creepy way that I was going to try and take her off Seth, but the young woman intruiged me and I wanted to be her friend, if not her best friend.
We had all decided to take a small break, just to get our supplies together and evaluate where we were going and if we were still going in the right direction. I knew that we were as I seemed to have a very good sense of direction, I could look at the ground and almost see the laylines on the earths surface. Father had said that was my power, to read the earth as if it was a map and to be able to find anything or anyone on this earth.
I looked at the magnetic field again, the directioning that I was uber sensetive to, I knew that the lake was somewhere nearby and within a days run, so by my calculations we would make it to the lake by teatime tomorrow if we eat and slept and kept this brisk pace up that we were going at right now.
I saw Charlotte lean into Seth as she sighed heavily, looking very fed up and tired. I frowned at them both and looked over to see Benjamin looking up at the sky, so sadly, so very very sadly. The look in his eye pained me to see and all I wanted to do right then was go over and speak to him. He may not want me as a brother, but I was sure as hell going to act like his brother.
"Benjamin, lighten up. We are on a quest to save Madison. She's safe and we will get her back." I said to Benjamin, he looked at me narrow eyed and all of a sudden his eyes filled with hatred.
"What do you know of saving people, Judeyah? You are a child. You have never lived or loved another to the extent I love Madison, you do not know what it is like to lose somebody who you love!" He snarled at me viciously. I cringed at his harsh words and then stood, unwillingly meeting his gaze. One good thing about been brothers was that we were both tall, I was only about an inch and a half shorter than Benjamin so looking into his eyes was easy, meeting his unflinching gaze however was something I was scared to do.
His face, so similar to mine, yet so different with age- not physical agae, but mental age- and emotion was set in a hard unflinching stare, looking into my eyes with such intensity and hatred I wanted to look away but I decided to just say what I thought, "What are you afraid of Benjamin. You know we will get her back. I can see it in your eyes. You know that we will get Madison back so what the hell is your problem?!" I yelled at him. His brow furrowed for a second and then his eyes narrowed.
"Judeyah, I know we will get Madison back, but do you know anything about the shades? They are suppose to be evil demons that stalk and kill and they are said to be the most blood thirsty beings living as they experienced death that is what they live for. Death and destruction. Even if we get Madison back, how do I know that it will be really her? She may not even be a witchblood anymore. She will have no memories, no feelings and her soul will be scared from her time in the underworld. She was taken by dark spirits who will torture her soul, Judeyah and that is my fault." Benjamin's voice broke a little at the end, but he kept his strong intense stare, only this time he looked void of hatred.
"So what you are saying is that you have been broken too many times that you just expect everything to go wrong and that Madison will not love you again." I concluded.
"No, it's more than that. I've been broken so many times that if Madison does not come back the same and love me the same-" He murmured and looked away, a tear glazing down the side of his face.
"Brother, listen to me. What you are afraid of is the darkness that will engulf your life again if Madison doesn't come back as Madison-"
"No. I'm not afraid of darkness! I'm afraid of the silence, Judeyah. The ever ending silence that my life was filled with before Madison where nothing can save me from my own screaming thoughts. I can't let it go back to the way it was. I can't. For my sake, my girls sake and Madison's sake." Benjamin said, and then he placed a hand on my sholder.
"One thing you have to understand though is that you can't ever give up on her. Even if she has no memories and she doesn't remember you or your love, you have to make her remember because the moment you are ready to quit is usually the moment before the miricle happens. Never give up on her Benjamin." I said to him, and he squeezed my sholder once.
"I won't, I never will because she is my soulmate and even if it takes me a thousand years to get her back, I will because that is what you do when you love somebody." Benjamin smiled slightly and let go of my sholder. "Thank you, Judeyah. You have been a great help. Tell Leo and Mary to take some time off and go explore the forest for a while and Charlotte and Seth to go do the same. They deserve it. We can carry on tomorrow with our quest. For now I need to get requanited with myself and the happiness that Madison wanted me to have in my life."
"Good bye, Benjamin." I said and then turned my back.
"Thank you. See you soon... brother." Benjamin said with a small smile and then he turned and jogged away into the forest. Brother. He had called me brother and all it took was one rational conversation between us.
Mary Cullen
I don't know how he had done it or convinced Benjamin to let us have a break but he had. Judeyah had gotten through to his brother, something none of us had been able to do and the ironic thing was that Judeyah was the one Benjamin seemed to dislike most out of us all!
I laughed at myself as me and Leo walked through the forest.
"You know, this had made me realise something Mary, I never want to lose you. I want you to be mine forever, and I mean that. I will never know why I waited so long for you, I was a fool." Leo whispered to me. I smiled at his romantic comment.
"One thing I don't get is, why did you always go for the most beautiful girls? You never went for the personalities because all of your girlfriends were sluts." I chuckled and then sighed at the serious question. "It's like I keep comparing myself to those other girls though Leo. I don't know why. They were all so beautiful though and I'm just..." I trailed off and looked down.
"I think that you are the most beautiful woman I've ever known... inside and out" He whispered in my ear, his cool breath tickling the nape of my neck as I shivered in response to those words.
"So why... Why all the others?" I said to him, stroking him long muscular arms as he watched me intensely.
"The others were a distraction until I found you." And then he grabbed my hands and thrust them to my side, pinning them against the tree with his strength that was a hundred times more powerful than mine.
I could feel my heart beginning to pulse with a new passion, rapidly beating as he took my chin into his newly free hand. He pressed his lips roughly to mine, giving and taking as he needed. Out lips parted and I could feel his control slipping, but I didn't care. I needed him and I needed him now.
I slipped my tongue into his mouth, running it along his lower lips and tasting his saliva meeting with mine that was so sweet. I nipped and gnawed at his lip as he did the same to me, and then he broke the kiss in a passionate breath, moaning undiscreetly as he moved down to kiss my neck. He moved his lips carefully at first, his kissed feather light until he got down to where my pulse was on my neck.
He began to kiss the spot hard, almost painfully and I had no idea what he was doing, but with one swift bite he drew away and I knew I would be left with a terrible hickie in the morning.
His skin rippled in response to mine as our lips met again in our passionate frenzy. Neither one of us wanting to say the words. Him- highly experienced with women. Me- not so experienced with guys.
I traced my fingers through his hair, tangling them and pulling tight to try stop my passionate demands, but it was too late. I began to unbutton his shirt, the fleeting feeling within my vanquished as I saw the body and face of my true love, my soulmate staring down at me.
"Is this what you really want?" He said, voice thick with passion and emotion.
"Yes. I want you. All of you. Now and forever." I said, brushing my hair out of my eyes and helping Leo unzip my golden dress as it fell to the floor like a pile of molten gold.
I suddenly felt exposed. What if he didn't like me naked? What is I was too big? What if I was too small? What if-
"Stop worrying. You are the most magnificent women I have ever had the pleasure to see naked so stop worrying and come over here so I can hold you in my arms." He groaned and then I smiled at him, letting his fingers trail down the smalls of my back as I undid his belt buckle, the very heavy kind and helped him tug off his slim fitting jeans that only seemed to make his large, powerful legs look less muscular. I looked at him in all his glory, he only had on underwear same as me.
He took the clasps of my bra and very carefully undid them and the pulled down my panties and hung the carefully over the tree that was serving as our wardrobe. He smiled at me as the hot sun beat down on us, warming my skin on the cloudless day.
Leo then reached out and took my hands, placing them on his hips as he pulled down his boxers and let his erection spring free .
I gulped, suddenly feeling nervous again, but with one look into his crystal eyes, I knew I was safe in his arms for he was mine and I was his and we loved each other.
He laid me down on the forest floor, the moss comforting as it was soft and the sounds of skittering animals in the undergrowth, the calls of bird from high up in the trees and the smell of the fresh water river and the sound of it whooshing down from the tops of the mountains could not deviate me away from Leo. I smiled as he laid atop me, kissing my cheeks and my nose before pressing his lips to mine again, his arms either side of me, he raised his torso and thrust down into me with one swift movement. I gasped and felt the pain singe through me automatically.
He stayed buried inside of me, deep inside of me as he tried to reassure me that everything would be okay.
"I know. Just do it." I murmured as Leo pulled out of me and thrust again. This time there was more than just pain. A new heat radiated through me, pleasure. Pleasure of the best kind. I let a small moan escape my lips as Leo groaned in satisfaction. He touched my hair and I caressed his body as we made love together on the forest floor. Uniting our souls eternally as our ancestors had done eons before us.
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