Heey guys :D I made this chapter reeeeaaally long! Because…IT MIGHT BE THE LAST CHAPTER :D Lol well, I still don't know whether I should continue it or not…I really need input on that, please rate this chapter and tell me whether I should continue it or not! I'm really hoping to get near 500 reviews it would make me soo happy :D Well please tell me if you like the story, and this chapter, and please review if you like the story and want it to continue….literally ;)
FANG POV:
"Fang," She said after a while of silence. I've said the very reason, for years but this look in her eyes when she asked me brought along with it a flow of nervousness I couldn't explain. She looked up into my eyes and gave a small smile still awaiting my answer, looking almost as anxious as I was which really wasn't possible, still feeling a rush with the spur of the moment I spoke up, "Why did you say yes?" She gave a light laugh letting the cold air catch her breath, and smiled brightly into my eyes. Starring right into my eyes with full concentration she said, "Because I like you Fang." No humor in her voice, I could have sworn this was her telling me she liked me, but thanks to prior experience I didn't set my hopes up high.
So trying to act normal I said, "Do you really now?" in a teasing voice getting closer to her. What I didn't expect was her to go even closer our faces almost touching she said, "What do you want the answer to be?" We sat there close as could be not minding the freezing weather as silence enclosed our conversation. Both smiling we said nothing, I could've sworn that if we had continued to sit there we would've kissed, but right before we made any contact little rain droplets from the sky started to fall soaking us from head to toe.
I laughed at that right moment. Again my curse struck again taking any chance of me being with Max away. But she laughed with me as her hair got soaked in the rain still she looked beautiful in my eyes. The romantic feel was now gone, and although my chance of kissing Max was long gone, just being here with her made it all right again. A gigantic grin plastured on her face, she stood up and swirled in the rain, smiling. I took out my phone covering it to my best abilities to stop it from getting wet I put on a song that could barely be heard through the rain pellets, but placing it in an empty Chinese box I closed it and walked over to Max soaked, and happy in the rain. I bowed to her and put out my hand as if talking to someone of great status and said, "Can I have the last dance, Miss?" She laughed and said, "I don't know can you?" While taking my hand, we moved into a dancing position, her other hand around my neck, mine behind her waist. We just swayed back and forth to a song we couldn't even hear. She put her head on my shoulder, and I wish that this meant as much to her as it did to me. When the song came to a slow close, she raised her head, "We should start walking back again." Nodding, we walked back hand in hand, until we saw the limo. "Sorry we're late." "No problem kid," He said winking.
We reached my drive way, and the both of us walked out, "Good luck." With that the driver drove away, leaving me and Max alone in the rain, "So wanna come in?" I said knowing she would probably spend the night. "Ok." She said perkily and took out the key she had to my house, opening the door, she walked inside, not minding getting my floor wet. Then she took my hand and led me to the backyard. "So we walked inside just to walk outside again?" The rain had died down a bit and now we could actually see the stars, they always looked amazing after a rain storm but all I could do was look at Max. I know she may not be the most beautiful girl in the world, but I couldn't find myself to look at anyone else. She starred up into the sky as I watched her, wet in the dress, hair completely ruined, and how she was just so amazing. I started to think about why I liked her, her personality, the way she could stand up for herself, or how when it really counted she would always be there for you. My thoughts were interrupted when she shoved me inside the pool. Laughing she spoke again. "You so should've seen that one coming dude!" With an evil look on my face, I came out and chased Max around, "Ahhhh Fang!" She said when I finally got a hold of her, putting her over my shoulder, I smiled and dumped her in the pool, but she dragged me with her. We both popped out of the water laughing, and splashing each other, when I finally got her from behind, and hugged her tightly refusing to let go, and she didn't fight back. As we stood there I finally broke. After this, Max was leaving for college, and so was I. This would be my last chance, if I really wanted Max to be mine, the time was now. "Max…" I turned her to face me still holding her shoulder, looking her straight into the eyes, I said, "Max..I love you." She blushed, and said back, "I love you too." I had known what that I love you meant, and this time she wasn't getting away until she knew what I really meant. "No Max. No I love you. Not like a friend, not like, 'Hey Max! Love ya!' No .You. Max." Her face getting really red, she answered back, "I know Fang…I..I love you too." Still thinking she didn't get the explanation, I spoke up again, "No…you don't get it, I've loved you since forever, and every time I try to tell you what I fell you end up getting the wrong idea! Max I love you, I-" She placed her finger on my mouth. "You talk too much." "But I don't think you get i-" Before I could say another word, we were kissing.
Finally releasing after who knows how long, she said, "I get it." Realizing what she said, I took her into my arms again, and kissed her, and though the rain started to pour again, nothing could stop me from being with Max in this moment. In the pool, soaking wet, we kissed.
Max was lying in my arms, finally dry, me as well, on the bed, a movie in the background. I was finally together with Max. And it felt better than I ever thought it would feel, Max was mine, and I could finally say it. Max…was really mine. "Hey Fang."
"Yeah Max?"
"You know I gave a lot of hints that I liked you." I laughed and said, "Really now did you?"
She smiled and looked up at me, "Yeah you are really oblivious."