Surprising, didn't expect anybody to object to the story plot, glad somebody finally has pointed out where I may have messed up. Anyhow, since I would like any issue's with the plot cleared up quickly, I thought i'd post this seperatly since I haven't finished the newest chapter yet (hell I haven't started lol)
Anyhow, questions that were posed after last chapter (I have rewritten them differently for (hopefully) easier reading)
Q. Does Caja Negacion take effect on a Shinigami, when they have no hollow hole to place the container?
A. Okay, here's the thing, I just interperated the technique in the way I wanted to here, i'll admit it probably isn't very secure. What I saw it was, there is no proof this technique was specifically tailered only to activate on Hollows, I'd say theres some leeway in that it can be used in alternate situations as well. Secondly, what is a hollow hole? It's simply empty space where the Soul Chain connected to the body, now that it's gone, it's just left a hole. In my opinion, that means the Caja Negacion couldn't have activated "specifically" from it being placed there, I think it's just convenient since it becomes inescapable at that range, in other words, it can activate at the whim of the user, not from the location of the item. As such, the box being activated at nigh on point blank range to Yoshirou's body would, in my eyes, be acceptable.
Of course, if there is still objections to the way I am seeing things, I can always rewrite the section, I was just setting it up so Yoshirou might have an excuse to Bankai next chapter as a means to break free of the technique, I mean Ulquiorra took two hours to escape? Let's see how much that can be cut down.
Q. Shouldn't Yoshirou be more than a match for Ulquiorra at this point?
Yes and No. I said from the start, I don't like the idea of Yoshirou being "ALL POWERFUL", I got him getting ass kicked by Aizen, struggling against time with Grimmjow, taking so long to gain Bankai and having a helluva time with Stark. Now, in perfect condition, yes, Yoshirou can beat Ulquiorra's sealed form easily, however, he has recently come out of a massive clash with Stark, not only taking multiple wounds (impaled through the stomach, slashed multiple times, blasted at point blank by a Cero, nearly burning out his reiatsu pathways when he pushed his body to the limit in the last Kido attack) he has also exhausted vast amounts of reiatsu in that battle, he also chose to heal Soi Fon, expending more reiatsu, he's so exhausted that he gave up trying to heal himself after healing only one arm, this is alike to Kurosaki facing Nnoitra after fighting Grimmjow.
However, at the moment, he's tapping into his huge reserves beyond the limit of what his body can currently handle, and although you may say it didn't show, I put him as "seeing Ulquiorra's arm almost as in slow motion", and breaking some of Ulquiorra's ribs with his attack, Kurosaki failed to do more than give Ulquiorra a tiny cut on the chest before he went H2.
Now, regarding why Yoshirou was seemingly struggling and unconfident to battle Ulquiorra in his current state, just like he said earlier, his body can't cope with using his full power, when he used the last Kido technique in the Stark fight, he badly damaged himself internally, not just externally, it's like burning out wires by putting too much energy through them, he's almost hitting his limit. This explains why he seemed so unconfident about facing Ulquiorra, his body is hitting it's limit, and he is now forcibly passing the limit to battle Ulquiorra, which will be shown next chapter.
Don't forget, Inoue will not be saved by Yoshirou, it's part of the main storyline, and I can't change that without altercating the timeline hugely, Yoshirou's body limit will probably be reached next chapter.
Well, that's (hopefully) marc's questions answered, now, as always if there is ever any questions regarding mistakes in the plot, information that should be put up, anything at all, I am more than happy to answer them to the best of my abilities, so ask away! This is a massive story, so plot points have to be solved quickly before I get too far ahead of myself, so the quicker you point errors out, the better the story will be!
Anyhow, that's all for this Q&A, cya all next chapter!