Chapter 36 – Returning The Favour

Bella's POV

I was actually more comfortable doing these things with Edward as a woman because I actually had some idea what I was doing. I had no idea how to please a man but I knew how to please myself so most of that should work with Edward as she is now.

I knew there was one spot on myself that was incredibly difficult to reach. I curled my finger inside Edward, hoping to hit that orgasmic sweet spot. From her reaction, I guess I succeeded.

As her walls clamped down around me however my finger was crushed slightly and forced straight by her vampire strength. Seriously? Her vagina has vampire strength?

I quickly retracted my index finger and placed the stinging digit in my mouth. I had not thought very much about the result of placing my finger, which was coated in her release, inside my mouth. I did it mainly out of instinct, if I crush my finger in a door or a draw I put it in my mouth to ease the sting, I was not prepared for the taste however.

She was sweet, really really sweet, like sugar, with a tang of something else. I wouldn't exactly call it salty, or sour, or spicy, but something along those lines, whatever the taste, it was drowned out by how deliciously sweet she was. I guess the saying is right, sugar and spice and all things nice. If that is what Edward tastes like down there, I would not mind sampling it from the source.

I removed the digit from my moth and began flexing it, attempting to stretch the uncomfortable ache and stiffness out of the joints and the burn from the muscles.

"Are you hurt?" I heard Edward ask and I looked up to see her sitting up and watching me, a concerned look on her face.

"Just irritated the joint a bit," I assured her immediately, if she thought she hurt me she would never allow anything to happen again, and I am not complaining. "It's nothing." I insisted, removing my hand from sight. I bit my lip as I considered how to ask and I just knew I was blushing. "I don't mean to pressure you," I hesitated, not looking her in the eye. "But if you think you're up for it, do you mind returning the favour?"

Edward was silent for a long moment before I spoke again. "If you're not ready for that it's fine, you don't have too." I insisted, trying to hide my disappointment.

"No it's fine," she assured me hesitantly, her voice slightly shaky. "I want to try."

There was a moment of awkward silence before Edward suggested shyly, "should... Should we trade places?"

I considered it for a second before realising that that would allow her the same manoeuvrability I had by being over top of her. "Yeah, sure," I nodded my agreement and we very awkwardly swapped places until I was laying underneath her.

Edina's POV

"You don't have to do anything you are uncomfortable with." Bella assured me and I nodded before kissing her gently.

I let my hands trail down her sides and she shivered under me which I doubted was from the cold. As our lips parted our eyes met briefly and she smiled reassuringly at me. Pushing my anxiety aside I placed kisses down her neck and over her breasts. Bella's finger's tangled in my hair as I sucked one of her nipples into my mouth.

I continued pleasuring her breasts as I had before until Bella forced one hesitant word out through laboured breaths. "More..." She begged and I hesitated before moving lower.

I could smell her through her jeans and it made me groan with want as I far to slowly removed her pants. Her underwear was soaked when I took them off of her and I couldn't stop myself from burying my face in her crotch and inhaling deeply. Her musky sent was intoxicating and the whimper she let out urged me on. My tongue darted past her lips and tasted her. I groaned wantonly and I glanced upwards to see Bella watching me.

Embarrassed, I started to pull away when she spoke. "Please don't stop." Bella begged me and I moved forward again to lap at her folds.

Bella's grip tightened until she was pulling my hair and I tried to focus my tongue on her clitoris after what she showed me just before about how good it feels. I brought my finger up circle her entrance, gathering the moisture there. I gently tested her opening, ensuring I would not hurt her before sliding my index finger inside her, it was met with no resistance due to the amount of natural lubrication I found.

Bella moaned as I explored the incredibly soft skin inside of her. I felt the skin pull tight as I added another finger and thought it best to stop at that to ensure I didn't hurt her. I continued to caress her with my tongue as I moved my fingers around, sliding in and out, and massaging the skin there. I wasn't really sure what I was doing and for all I knew I was terrible at it, but from all her moaning and the way her heartbeat and breathing sped up I assumed I was doing okay.

Without warning Bella pulled my hair and cried out my name as she rode out her orgasm.

I removed my head from her thighs once she released it from her vice like grip and discretely wiped my mouth.

She sat up, meeting my eye while trying to catch her breath. "Wow," Bella breathed out and I nodded my agreement, tonight had been more than I could possibly have imagined.

"What now?" I asked her shyly, unsure of what to do next.

Bella held out her arms and I climbed into them. "Now this." She announced, holding me close as she lay down.

It felt so right to be in her arms, to be held by my Bella was the most amazing feeling in the world and I would give it up for nothing.

Authors Note: Now this chapter was supposedto be all from Bella's POV but I accidentally changed POV in between paragraphs and by the time I discovered my mistake it was already really good and I didn't want to change it so I threw in a POV change and finished it this way, I think it turned out well.

tlc125 - She addresses her as Edward because she has not yet told her otherwise.

lovingbites - Yes he has, Edward is accepting who he is now and starting to embrace it. And yes he is the woman in the relationship, I don't see that changing any time soon. The way I see it, Edward has lost something big, he has lost his body, which also means any form of self image, and in turn his confidence took a large hit. It will not be easy to get his confidence back and built a new self image for himself, for now he is vulnerable and has to lean on others. As his lover, Bella is one of his biggest supports, but by being so supportive of her partner, the balance of equality in the relationship is swaying one way, therefore, Bella is the dominant partner in the relationship. I have put a lot of thought into it.

Guest - Me or Alex? Because Alex is an enormous pervert yes.

the betrayer hunter - Yes I did have to make Edward weak, if you go back to the first couple chapters you will see it is explained. Riley was thinking of making them both weak so he would have an advantage in battle, however he is a misogynistic jerk, so he natural thinks that weak translates to female. The idea of turning them into girls did not cross his mind, but his idea of what is weak has adapted their bodies to make them female, and in turn his idea of women has adapted their feminine forms to what he believes women should be. Hence why they both have long hair, skinny yet shapely forms, and controlled excess body hair. It was mentioned last chapter when Bella pointed out Edina's pubic hair was neatly trimmed and it was then mentioned he has no hair on his legs, it was not mentioned but he also has no armpit hair, this is because Riley believes that women are weak yet beautiful and perfectly sculptured. It was not focussed on but Seth is also very weak in his female form, while unable to do much damage due to their lacking strength, they can take a lot of pain so their endurance is quite high, because otherwise they would be fragile. While they both have inhuman strength, against anyone of their own kind they would lose, unless Seth was in his male or wolf form. Against humans however they would still have a large advantage, while they would win against any human, a very strong human, a body builder for example, would be able to put up a decent fight but eventually the non-human would win out. That is a big part of why the change has been so hard on them, Edward especially, he has been stripped of his natural body and it has been replaced with someone elses ideal. I have not gone into that much detail in the story because the characters do not even know that much.

~SophieAngel69