Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
The riverbank,
about half a mile downriver. A figure washes up, crawling on its
hands and knees. It's Spiderman. The remains of a spider-suit cling
to him at various points. His mask is in tatters. Finally he loses
all strength and collapses face-first. We see the skin on his back is
mottling, fading into black before going back to normal and then back
to black. It looks as if snakes are crawling beneath his skin. His
head raises and we see the same is happening there - only his eyes
are unaffected, but they scream of someone at the very end of their
endurance for pain.
We hear a car
screeching to a halt. Footsteps approach.
SPIDERMAN: MJ...
But it's not
Mary-Jane. It's two men. They bend down and pick up Spiderman very
gently, almost reverentially, before taking him to the back of a van.
CARRIER: We got him.
Go.
The female driver
nods in front and the van moves off. As we follow it, it passes a
taxi going in the opposite direction. We linger long enough to see
the passenger is a heartbroken Mary-Jane, little suspecting that the
man she seeks has just been driven past her.
In the back,
Spiderman tries to sit up.
SPIDERMAN: (weakly)Who are
you...
The world swims.
We cut to Mary Jane, running in slow-mo from the taxi to the water's
edge before collapsing to her knees, sobbing helplessly.
SPIDERMAN:
Mary-Janeā¦
He passes out
again, and we see the world go black above him.
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