Alright, thanks to help of a writer here on fanfic by the name of RevTheory (he's actually pretty awesome jsyk) I'm going to be fixing some of the many problems that occurred early on in this fanfic. I know that I did say I'd do this in the story titled Flashbacks but with some reflection and EXCELLENT points made by Rev I'm going to be recreating the story entirely so to speak. I have noticed a large amount of flaws with it myself, most notably in the first several chapters. Okay well the whole thing really but that's because of first 15 chapters or so. So guys if y'all are upset about this I'm sorry but I'm going to basically reconstructing the story.
No, I won't be deleting the fanfic and I'll just rework it. Attempting to fix any and all problems and flaws that I find and that all y'all find. I think I'm just going to plug it in right after this chapter because y'all already love this and I'd hate to make all of y'all go look for a completely new story. So Chapter 37 will really be a Chapter 1 reboot. Now because of this I am going to want as much criticism as possible, but seriously guys creative and constructive criticism. I hate when people are rude about stuff like that and I'm also not a big fan of someone saying, "OMG you're the best! I love it!" every damn chapter. And technically I am guilty of this myself and I'm working on getting better. And yes I do know I did kinda blow off one reviewer who tried to critique my fanfic but that was because he was rude about it. Well that's how I took it. Now I do love all y'all and that's the reason I'm doing this. To make this fanfic even better!
Also I'm going to be changing the rating on this fanfic because there is adult themes in it as well as it's pretty dark, if y'all haven't noticed. So it'll now be rated M, sorry guys I'd rather not get this story removed. So yes, Imma change the rating. Besides most of Ryuu's childhood and conditioning under the CCG is pretty dark stuff: experimentation, grueling training and conditioning, and his missions. All this will explain how he comes to be who he is in the last few chapters of the story.
Shoutouts!
I'd like to thank you RevTheory! You're a great help to me and I do look up to you as an author, strange huh? But without your help I would've never got off my ass and went to fix the problems that we both know are there. Thanks man!
WickedDemon69, LocusScorpion, and halfeyedknight all of your OCs will be reinstated into the fanfic when I get to the part to add them in. I'd like to thank y'all for taking the time to submit your OCs.
hoobab and Miyako15, I'm sorry, I'm so so sorry. But don't worry Doshi will still be in the new version of the story. So yay for Doshi but sorry for lettin' y'all down on this one, but I'm staring over!
I'd also like to thank any and everyone who reviewed, followed, and/or favorited this fanfic! Y'all are definitely awesome! Thank you.