Breaking Eden

by CodeNameRed

Eden's goal is to survive. To live through one more day and never think about what horrors Declan has in store for her next. She will never give up hope of one day breaking free. Declan's goal is to destroy. To strip away every ounce of dignity and self respect Eden might have left and replace it with obedience and fear. He plans to never let her go. Find me on Wattpad @K E Francis

37. Choose Your Own Kidnapping and AN

Helllllllooooooooo everybody!

As you all have noticed (hopefully), Breaking Eden is a little different from the standard FSOG fanfic. That's because it is in almost every way but one. I took the cliché setting, millionaire character role, and smut, rolled it all up and began writing BR. This story centers around what would genuinely occur out in the real world in a situation like this.

The fact is, you are more likely to be raped and murdered within the first 48 hours of being kidnapped then you are to be provided with a mansion, luxury cars, fancy shopping sprees and loads and loads of respect.

I essentially started writing BR back in Oct. 2017 as a response to all the stalker/kidnapper books on Wattpad. You know the storyline. It always involves a powerful, rich dude who stalks and eventually kidnaps a vulnerable girl. He shows her nothing but disrespect but wins her favor over through materialistic things and a whole bunch of dick. Overall, I wanted something different but with the same general plot.

Breaking Eden will be packed full of mystery, adventure, love, horror, and a whole mess of the smutty good stuff everyone likes. It's actually become a hit over on Wattpad and is already nearing 31,000 reads. You can find Breaking Eden and all my other stories over there under K_E_Francis.

The reason I ended up posting this story here on Fanfiction is because someone found out I wrote it and was poking fun at the story and said, "Hope you have fun with your trashy Fifty Shades fanfic." He was trying to embarrass me, which didn't work at all. That jab got me thinking, and instead of getting mad, I ran with it and chose to do just that.

I threw Breaking Eden up on this site and wanted to see what would happen. No joke. Within the first 24 hours alone I had over 1,000 reads, and now I'm nearing 2,000. Hahaha So jokes on that dick drip.

So what is 'Choose your own kidnapping'?

I have three possible ways Eden can get kidnapped. The problem is, I can't figure out which one is the best version because they're all great in their own way. Each option offers up a different twist or turn but has the same ending with her being taken and held against her will and all that jazz.

So I call upon all of my amazing readers to vote. Help me choose the best kidnapping. Don't forget to tell me why you think it should make it into the published book.