Yup, had a feeling people would go a little review crazy after last chapter. Still, I have enough to fill an entire half of a chapter
Duh, of course they would.
IAmSoCleverWithMyNameLol: Neat!
... Well that was anticlimactic.
Hanae Kokoro-chan: Well, Kokoro means heart so... Imma call you Heart-chan. You are welcome for that nosebleed.
Heart-chan... Why do I like that name so much?
DarkRai99: The sequel is a work in progress on his Deviantart page. But, yeah, that happened... And that definitely sounds like something I'd do.
That is kinda your thing.
Wait, what does that mean?
*sigh* We'll explain later.
RosyMiranto18: Ah, it's no problem. Review when you can. I might be a hound, but I'm not a dick. And c'mon, this make it sound like this fic is work of art or something...
Writing is art.
You know what I meant!
That you don't take compliments because your self confidence is pathetic?
Maybe this is how he avoids become a narcissist.
blahblahblech: Hey, I'm not complaining *giggles* Besides, who cares about fornication anymore?
If you start making sex jokes, I'm drawing the line.
SolidShinji104: Tempting, but... Well... You'll see.
Raze Olympus: That's a uh... Well, a reaction.
What are you a prude? Into dicks or something?
Dude! Not okay!
What?! It was a legitimate question!
I don't think that's any of you business, Makoto.
Shameful! Shameful!
Why does everyone gang up on me?!
Guest: Perfect eh? I'll make a mental note of that.
Nightlyy: Minato is the original Wild Card, remember? 'Course he moves fast.
RAX: Read - yes. Personality - No, but i did take a few snippets here and there. Pineapples- I just said it randomly; I don't even know what you're talking about.
clevernameeh: Wow you do leave long reviews... I like that. I won't stop you from supporting Minato, but do remember that Makoto does everything for a reason. I mean, considering his mental state, can you really blame him? What 'bout you Kotone?
*moans* M-More! Don't stop!
Hmm... What are-
MOVING ON! MOVING ON! MOVING ON!
Home
"Mm..." Kotone continued to moan into Minato's mouth as she continued to hold him down on the bed. Despite probably having even less experience in this than her, Minato was still able to put up quite the fight in their dual on tongues.
After a few moments of a battle that was ultimately ending a draw, Kotone broke the kiss and sat up straight on the boy's lap as she brought her hands to the buttons on the boy's shirt. In an almost agonizingly slow motion, the redhead began to undo the buttons and expose a few scars that'd been left courtesy of Sakuya.
"Aw..." Kotone made a pouting noise as she undid the rest of the buttons and traced a one of the scars located where his heart was with her index finger. All of the scars were relatively fresh and she remembered being by his bedside when he was put into the hospital. Then, there was the recovery week where he must've been in a lot of pain...
"I'll make it all better." She promised before lowering her head and individually kissing each scar she could fine which caused Minato to shiver on contact. Working her way up as she left small kiss after small kiss, Kotone found herself face-to-face with him again and left what must've been the dozenth kiss on his lips again.
Minato gently stroked her left cheek his with his hand as they both smiled at each other. Remembering where his other hand was, Minato gave another gentle squeeze at her bosom which made her gasp at the unfamiliar but pleasant sensation.
Suddenly, Kotone's cheeks began to flare a deep red and her blissful expression was replaced by unease when he moved his hands between the cups of her bra and gently pulled as to indicate what he wanted.
Noticing this, Minato removed his hand and supported himself up as he looked her "Not ready?" he asked. She must've been going off of instinct alone before, and now that he was asking to see something that... It must've been too much at once.
"P-Promise you'll be a gentleman." She ordered as she broke eye contact, feeling as if she'd die in embarrassment. Honestly, how did he manage to keep such a straight face this whole time?
Minato reached out and gently turned her head so that her eyes met again "I promise."
Kotone smiled gently through her embarrassment as she gave a slow nod to him. Minato slowly snaked his arms under hers ready for any form of protest before undoing the clasp and letting the straps fall from her shoulders.
The redhead continued to hold the bra to her chest as the room felt like it was an oven. Taking a deep breath, she slowly put her hands down and allowed the boy in front of her to see her bare chest.
Despite her many expeditions into Tartarus, her skin was pale and completely flawless. The expeditions combined with her being in either volleyball or tennis (he wasn't sure of which) had also left her body toned which only further increased the bluenette's attraction for her.
"This is so embarrassing..." She lamented before the boy kissed her again which she returned fullheartedly as any discomfort she had was put at ease.
In the proper mood again, Kotone pushed the boy down onto the bed again and pressed her bare chest against his. Despite his inactivity, he also had surprisingly a surprisingly toned body as well. Had he been venturing into Tartarus alone? Or did his healing ability also make sure his muscles never degraded? Or was it both?
Shaking those thoughts from her mind, Kotone pulled back as she realized something. He had made all of those marks and scars that covered his body from fighting... Why not leave something good to remember?
The leaned forward and whispered "Imma mark you now..." before gently nipping his ear causing him to gasp.
Kotone left one more kiss on his lips before moving to his cheek, his jawline, and then leaving one at his neck. Noticing the shivers and gasp he made when she made contact with his neck, she determined he was a little sensitive there which worked out for her just fine.
Kotone giggled at Minato's small involuntary spasm before placing her lips on her area of choice and began sucking on it.
Minato began gasping and groaning as the girl he'd fallen for continued her actions on one of his most sensitive spots "Kotone..." he breathed out her name as he regained enough muscle control to stop his spams and ran his hands along her bare back.
Kotone continued to suck the skin, even licking it occasionally to force the boy to shiver again before pulling back and revealing a prominent red mark.
"And now, you're all mine!" She declared as she ran a hand through his messy blue hair and brushed his fringe to the side so that she could get a rare good look at his right eye.
Minato smiled warmly as he brought his hands to her hips "Mm... my turn."
"Wha-" Kotone was cut off by her own yelping that was followed by her giggles and laughs as she was suddenly the one on her back now with Minato looming over her.
Now the one in control, Minato gently stroked her cheek before gently running his finger down her her neck, chest, and stomach which made her arch her back and lift herself slightly as her anticipation grew.
"Mm... c'mon... I don't like being teased." She cooed as she gently placed her hands on his face "You promised to be a gentleman."
Minato chuckled from the girl's begging as he brought his hands back to her bosom and gently began to massage her breast again which made her let out another loud moan.
Kotone bit her lip as she reveled in the unfamiliar but pleasant sensations "Y-You... You ass..." she managed to utter "Promise breaker!"
"Tell me that when you're not enjoying it." He retorted as he continued to watch Kotone enjoy every second of it.
"Mm... I hate you." She muttered in reply, but soon returned another kiss when Minato moved his hands to the side and planted his lips on hers again.
Minato couldn't help but continue to chuckle at how her protest quickly died down "You marked me, now it's my turn..." he said and like she had done with him, Minato planted another kiss on her lips, cheek, jaw, and planted a long one at her neck as he continued.
"Wait, wa-Ah! Not there! Not there!" She begged as he found a spot just beneath her left collar bone.
Minato smirked as he discovered her sensitive spot just like she had done with him "What's that? There? Okay." he playfully ignored her orders.
"Don't you- Ah!" Kotone cut herself off with another gasp. She bit her lip and tried her hardest to hold back her moans, but the more and more he sucked there of all places, the most hopeless it became.
Giving in, Kotone moaned again as she grasped the boy's hair "Goddammit..." she groaned "I'll never forgive you for this..." she condemned him as he continued sucking on her soft skin.
Finally satisfied, Minato placed one more long kiss on the new love mark before looking back into the girl's eyes "Hey, you did my sweet spot; Only fair I did yours."
"Why do you think I haven't knocked you off?" She replied, cupping the boy's face "You really like kissing, don't you?"
"Are you complaining?"
"Only if you stop." She answered as he pulled him forward and kissed him again. Every time she kissed him, it was like her once broken heart had seen its own glimpse of heaven. It was as if she was in complete bliss for a moment that was shared only by the boy with her.
Minato slowly brought one hand to her right breast and gently squeezed again which caused her to moan in his mouth again.
The bluenette broke the kiss, but immediately returned one more peck on her lips before asking "May I?" he kindly requested permission.
"Now you're asking?" Kotone laughed as she raised an eyebrow. Just a few moments ago, he completely disregarded what she had said.
"No sense of fairness to even it out this time." He explained as he tilted his head with a smirk still on his face "Please~, Kotone?" he asked, dragging out the word 'please'.
"Don't be too rough..." She gave her ground rules "... and if you dare bite me, I'm knocking you out."
Minato snickered before placing one last kiss on her lips "Wouldn't dream of it..." he said as once again he began to leave a trail of kisses as he got lower and lower.
"B-Be careful..." she pleaded with him in a somewhat shaky voice as his lips grew close to their destination "... I'm really sensitive-Ah, dammit!" she cursed as she felt his lips plant themselves on her right breast.
Minato found himself snickering again "Why would you tell me that?"
"I thought I could guilt trip you after last time..." She explained in a whimpering voice "U-Um... Can you.. uh..." her cheeks flared a bright red again which spelled out exactly what she wanted.
"Gladly..." He answered as he lowered his head again and continued his previous activities which made Kotone moan loudly again.
Never in her life did she think she'd let someone actually do this to her breasts while she was still in high school. But here she was, lying on the bed of someone with two personalities making her gasp and moan in ecstasy as he went from one to the other while leaving quick kisses on her lips and neck.
Wanting to progress from where they are, Minato brought his left hand to her right calve and slowly brought his hand up as it progressed to her thigh.
The moment she felt his hand on her thigh, several thoughts began coming to her mind.
Was she really comfortable doing this? Just a day ago she was heart broken and had Makoto tell her that she was just confused as he looked at her with his own heartache obvious in his eyes.
She dismissed everything at first as her brain essentially went on autopilot, but this caused by a similar circumstance as last time at Yakushima. How did she know that this was because she actually loved him or not?
"Wait, wait..." Kotone pleaded as she gently pulled his head off of her breast and their eyes met again.
Just one simple look in her eyes and he understood what was going on, "Oh..." he said as he pushed himself off of her and stood up.
"I'm sorry..." She apologized as she sat up "It's just... Everything happened so fast and yesterday, I-" she was silenced when the boy place his fingers on her lips
"It's alright, there's nothing to apologize for." He assured her as he took a step back and grabbed his shirt.
"We can talk about it tomorrow, alright?" He continued as he found her shirt and placed it on his bed "You can take the bed tonight."
"Sure?" Kotone asked as she put her bra back on and stood up "I mean, yesterday you-"
"Didn't want to wake you when you passed out on the couch?" He finished her sentence, explaining Makoto's genuine reasons at the time "True, but that's not an issue this time."
Minato walked to the door and looked at the girl behind him who still felt bad for ending what was a blissful moment for the both of them "Don't worry about it, alright? I'll see you tomorrow..."
Kotone nodded as she put her shirt back on "Um... G'night."
"G'night."
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...
"So...?" Minato asked as he stood by his apartment door, the girl in front of him ready to leave needing to make one thing clear.
"Last night... I loved every moment of it, but..." Kotone took a deep breath and sighed "I need to think about this alright?" she explained as she cupped the boy's face "I'm happy just... Need some time. Wait for me, alright?"
Minato nodded as he placed a hand over one of the ones on his face "One more?"
Kotone smiled warmly in response to his request "One more..."
Kotone stood on her toes as Minato leaned down and left one more long kiss on each others lips before separating for the last time until Kotone understood what her feelings truly were.
"Goodbye!" She said as she left the boy's apartment to return to her dorm which was filled with her team members who were undoubtedly worried sick about her.
Minato continued to smile as he walked to his window and watched her slowly walk away until she was completely out of sight.
Gone.
Gone.
Gone.
She was gone.
Alone.
Alone.
Alone.
He was all alone.
Nothing.
Nothing.
Nothing.
Nothing to keep Minato there anymore.
The boy's head lowered the moment Kotone left from view as the inheritor's control began to slip away once again in favor of the more dominant personality.
"Y-You... fool..." Makoto whispered as he slowly took a few steps back until his knees could no longer support him and he fell down to the ground.
Makoto rotated his back so that he was lying on his stomach with his face in front of the floor "YOU BLOODY FOOL!" He screamed as he slammed his face as hard as he could against the hard floor.
You were about to kill her... Minato whispered into their shared head.
"I was... I was panicking after..." Makoto shook his head before slamming his head again "It's why I didn't want this... It's going to end badly! I... I just wanted to spare both of us the pain."
Pain this, pain that. Meanwhile, you continue to flaunt around with the thing that caused all of this to us! Minato screamed his response loudly causing Makoto to suffer from a massive head ache
"He's... He's all I have..." Makoto whimpered as he slowly got back on his feet and wobbled his way into his bathroom and looked at himself in the mirror.
It doesn't have to be that way, Makoto... Minato whispered, his voice now becoming a much gentler whisper in his ear You don't need to suffer anymore...
"Every moment with her is suffering you idiot!" Makoto screamed as he slammed his face as hard as he could against the glass causing it to shatter and for his face to suffer from several cuts from the shards.
Then just stop. Minato pleaded with his other self We don't even need to be separate anymore.
"I can't..." Makoto said as he leaned against the bathroom wall and slowly slid down to the ground again "... It's the only reason I have to exist... " he continued to look down "... The only way our foundation can make up for what he did that day."
Pharos watched as his friend suffered from the inside and out, covered in his own blood and crying without tears. This was truly hell for him and painful for him to watch.
The little boy continued to watch his friend suffer as he thought to himself.
She was hurting his friend far, far more than she was doing anything else and that's even if it was his friend at the moment.
He knew Makoto couldn't bring himself to hurt her... At least, not without wanting to die immediately after. At the same time, every moment with her was pure agony.
She... was not good.
Never before have I been forced to stare at a blank screen so long... Hope you enjoyed the.. uh... Let's call it a "lime" scene.
Fuckin' buzz kill.
STOP hurting my husbando!
You will pay for what you've done to him.
Bite me!
I think Minato already did that.
Oh for the love of... Hope you enjoyed it. Do tell your opinions on the lime scene since I'm still a novice at it, and have a good day/night.