Hello everyone!! :D
As promised, I will modify two or three chapters of which I didn't like the original version; I'll publish a 36th chapter every time I upload the revised chapter to let you know, because obviously I'll simply replace the old one…
Okay, this said, the new first chapter is up! Go back to 'Naruto' and see if you like that better! :P I do! Haha!!
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4/29/2010
EDIT!
New chapter 24 up: Jiraya has it when someone decides to take revenge on him always spying on women!! Go, read, and laugh!!!
Ja ne,
Temari 88 XD