So I thought the last chapter was good, I write better at night! My emotions come out more,thanks for the reviews though my story wouldn't be here if wasn't for you. So I give a big thanks to you all. :)
Melanie's point of view;
I clung to my thoughts as I laid down on the couch, I still did not feel well at all. My belly was still angry at me for some unknown reason, I felt bad for the misery I caused it. It was obviously giving me pay back, and I knew it. Jared laid beside me and gentle began to stroke my side. I couldn't help but thank god over the fact that this couch was big enough for the both of us, and fit our frame comfortably. My body was as close as it could get to his, his breathing was warm against my neck. Like the fire that flamed our love.
"Mel, I just want you too feel better." He said as he tried to comfort me. I knew my body could fight any kind of flu off within a matter of days.
"I just want to feel better, I feel like death." I cried as closed my eyes, trying to make myself relax. It was dark and rainy out today, I'm not even sure how it rained here or even looked this gloomy. I was just happy that we weren't missing out on a nice beautiful day, this was a good day for relaxing.
"If you don't feel better by tomorrow, were going back home and your going to the doctors." He demanded as he kissed my cheek. Did he really care about me this much? It was a sweet thought, to be this relaxed and cared about.
"I don't want to ruin this for you." I groaned as I looked up at him. I really didn't want to ruin this for him, I would feel horrible. I knew he would demand that it wouldn't even make him feel a little upset.
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I had fallen asleep for a nap, against Jared's flame filled touch. I woke up slowly as I smelt food being cooked, my stomach twisted as I ran for the bathroom. I could hear him come after me, holding my hair back once again. My body felt like it had been dragged to hell and beaten. I rinsed my mouth and let him pull me in for an embrace that I wished would last a life time. I let my fall into his as he picked me up and carried me back to couch, him sitting down first so he could cradle me. I could feel the warmth of his body gently caress my soul.
"Mel, I just want you too feel better. We're going back tomorrow and that is that." He said while he kissed the top of my head. I could feel my body react to his as if it yearned for him. I put my arms around his neck and let my ear lay against his heart beat. Hearing the hum of every word he delicately spoke.
"I'll be fine, I promise. It's just a little flu, don't worry about me." I tried to convince him that everything would be fine. I hoped that it really would be, I hated being sick and throwing up.
"Well you can be fine at home, in our bed. Don't think we won't go on vacations, we will. And I can promise you that." His words were spoken with such ease that I couldn't help but want to go home. Once I got home I could feel better. He stood up and told me he would make a phone call.
Jared's point of view.
I was worried about her, she shouldn't be sick for this long or get sick over the easiest things. I couldn't help but just want to go home and make her feel better. It was like her energy had been sucked out of her and she was an open vessel. I called my mother, I wouldn't make Melanie ride home on a public plane, I knew she felt sick. I didn't want her to get embarrassed, I had to make sure everything would make her feel comfortable. I called my mother, as I waited worryingly looking over at Mel every second my eyes would allow me to.
"Hello Jared, how's everything going?" My mother chimed, maybe a little to happy.
"Hey mom, Mel's sick, can you send the jet? I need to get her back as soon as I can." I said, trying to keep a strong facade on. If she heard worry in my voice, she would panic.
"My god, what's wrong? What's she doing." She said, a little bit of panic entering her voice.
"She won't stop throwing up, and she just looks like the energy has been drained from her." I said, swallowing my worry. I heard my mom pause, she must have been pondering about something that was in her mind.
"I'll send it right away,okay? Uhm it should be there tomorrow. Oh, please make sure she feels better." She said, I knew something was on her mind but she wouldn't tell me. We said goodbye and I made my way back to Mel, what could have came over her so quickly?
With Wanda.
I woke up from my sleep, with thoughtful moments. I couldn't help but wonder about how my decisions effected my life right now. I had a decision to make and a new faith to greet. If I didn't have anyone else to call the shots in my life than I could. I chose what road I would be walking down. The paths weren't as clear as I wished but I knew deep in my heart that either way, I would get hurt. I needed to talk to Melanie, but I knew she would plead for me to stay. Would she worry that I would find a new best friend and we would lose touch? It would be like loosing a sister, like loosing a limb. If it would be so horrid than why do I kind of want to go? Why do I want to feel the change and feel the need to hurt someone. I knew it would crush Ian, something made me run into him at the coffee shop. I'm drowning in my own thoughts, in my own pity. If I wanted to do something I should do it. Do I really want to though? That's the question that mind is throbbing into my head. My heart didn't have the answer. Why do I want to leave everything behind? I don't. This is just the affects of a break up, I didn't need a change I needed to get over it. I needed to just move on, cause wallowing in my self pity was doing nothing but make me want to make bad decisions. I rolled my eyes at myself as I got ready for work. I walked into work too see people looking at me. Their gazes showed something in their eyes that I couldn't put my finger on. I opened the door to my office and there were roses everywhere. At least 20 bundles of them, I couldn't even count. And on my table there were chocolates.
That was clearly my weakness, did he really feel the need to do all of this just for my forgiveness.
So are the chapters getting more emotion filled? I'm trying to put as much in them as I can even if they are short!