Flame by Bryce Avila
Rating: 3 out of 4
Review: Though Bryce Avila may not have many stories, she can still write a marvelous fic. In my personal opinion, this resembles the dictionary definition of a creative story. Ladies and gentlemen, I am referring to the story known as Flame.
Flame begins with Teri, suddenly acting suicidal. Penny tries to help, but Teri just shoots her down. A crowd gathers, but Teri passes out. A concerned Penny sends her to the nurse. She then contemplates her friendship with Teri. Shortly after, she hears screaming...and then the fire alarm.
The story is outstanding. The only flaws are the length and some of the grammar. Grammar-wise, it passes, with minor slip-ups here and there. Length-wise, the story is very short, and really should be continued.
Summary: In this story, friendships are tested and a life hangs in the balance. It is worth the read, and a short one at that. All and all, je suggère cela.
Adieu, mes amis, et ont une merveilleuse journée.
~Monsieur Psycho Sexie, FanFiction author/critc
I would like to say that I'm tangling with the idea of writing a story for the archive, but I want to see if I could and see how far it gets me. I want to know if you think I can go as far to do it.